Originally posted by: kritu17krits
superb
update soon
Originally posted by: gems4sana
Aww this was really cute. Great job and I enjoyed your writing!
Originally posted by: pari_goyal
nice update...
Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny
Hey dear! 😊
Such a wonderful OS! 👏 I don't understand Hindi much, but from what I do understand, this was an amazing piece with so much potential! The pain and the angst were so prominent. Too good! 👏Can't wait for the next part! Make sure Raman grovels at Ishu's feet! 😈
Originally posted by: Dhwaniiam
Loved it ..
Please do continue and Pm me
loveeddd itt... amazing update!! keepp continuingg.. plsss PM me the next update.. thankuuu
Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
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Very good for a 1st OS!!!
The first part was really touching. The second one, was, well pure-Raavan Kumar Bhalla. I didnt think anyone could find humour in this track... but that "keemti saaman bhaari hai" was too good...😆
Please do continue
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