Hate me today... love me tomorrow - ff - first thread - Page 40

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Read it and tell me how it is... Is it tasteful? U know when I wrote it out the first time... Didn't think much about the details in the scene or body positions or what was so bold or great about tht night.

I have tried to give it some detail to fit what I had previously written... Do tell me if it flows...😳

Edited by spontaneousmini - 9 years ago

Hey great update! With erverything going on I understand not finishing the stories so you take ur time to write theses stories and your stories are awesome and I would read them again if I have time from my college workEdited by Hanz91 - 9 years ago

So far its a good update!!! Please complete chapter 14 soon. 

Thanks for the update of chapter 11. Now one can connect some missing dots and understand it well. Edited by smileysmile - 9 years ago

Oh wow! Now I know what Raghav has Kalpi doing 😳
Kalpi has become bold she love Raghav and is not shy to please him ;)
Kalpi breaking down in kamla lap was. Rey emotional but needed
I like that she got that crying out of her system
Now it's time for payback
I want Kalpi to continue to work with Raghav but treat him just as an employer and nothing else
Ignoring Raghav will drive him up the wall lol
He will be so frustrated that Kalpi is no longer affected by his charm
Lovely update

Chapter 11 updated was simply stunning... Keep kalpi hard and in control... No more miss show my feeling... Rags HV to crack his head to get her back...muahhh 

Fuzz you're awesome and even your dedication to update and also fulfill our requests is awesome! 😃👏  I can't get enough of this FF!!! I re-read the edited Chapter-11, and it has made that Chappy even more beautiful and sensuous! Must say your attention to details is awesome and that too without making it vulgar!! 👏 I read it so many times. Also please complete Chapter-14, loved the way you showed Kalpi breaking down, and Kamla's repentance. I wonder what will happen now, and how long ll it take for Raghav to win Kalpi back; and also to give her one more blow by telling her that she is his legal wife!😊 marvelous once again! lots of love...ur FFs and a few others r d only reasons which keep me going now. So thank you sooo much from bottom of heart.😊❤️
Edited by chahat4u - 9 years ago

Well well fuzz from now on I will call you jaanu!

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Well well fuzz from now on I will call you jaanu!

Because your story comes to life when reading!!!!

Chapter 11 edit was fabulous though I did realise before through your unsaid words that they did cross the barriers to some extent which was prohibitible in the eyes of Kalpi!  But that probably mad eher realise that she was in love with him. After the edit the stroy just got enhanced beautifully! The whole description was apt and sensitively written! Not too loud or distasteful. Just perfect as it should be! Oh how I wish I could write like this! (Pssst I will contact you to help me when I write about intense scenes in my ff! Hope you will help me out!) Damn I think I made a mistake by not reading M&B's in my college days😛

Chapter 14 incmplt: Here I want to specially applaud for portraying Kamla the way she is! An understanding mom is what every child needs! It is easy to get hyper and slap your child for his or her mistakes but to accept it and forgive it only a mother can do!

Kamla has realised the dept of love Kalpi has for the man who just wants revenge from Kamla acc to her. 

Her guilt in being the sole reason for her child's heartbreak is heart wrenching! Oh what the poor soul must have gone through!

Kalpi is lucky to have such a wonderful mom! I am sure Kamla will ask Kalpi to move ahead in life! and not repent for what she did!

Fab job jaanu! Love you! Please complete the chapter 14 waiting to read it!

angel...missing ur updates yaar...