SHAAPIT! MG FF Updating Chapter 6 In Few Hours! - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting story. Maan and Geet love each other. Maan proposed her and put a diamond ring in her finger. After proposal Both are going for a drive and met an accident. But luckily escaped unhurt. Geet's parents and Darji came and saw the ring in her finger. They are tensed as their family is cursed. If any girl of their family think of marriage she dies. Darji told the story of the cause of this curse to Khuranas. Maan's grand parents are Darji's old friends. Handas went back with Geet. After few days Maan came to HH and told Geet that if their love is true, destiny will have to bow in front of their love.
Please update next part soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Awesome update
i knew dat d curse was something like dis...but if maaneet love is true then defo no curse can break them...update nxt soon and i request plz dont put long gap between updates..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Waiting for update. This is a very nice story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Waiting For Next Update !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

Darji and everyone are scared about Geet's life due to the curse story that had been there in their family, and for everyone in the family the safety of their daughter is important than her dreams..
Maan does not want to believe it, but Darji and Handa family are firm on their decision, and he could not do anything in front of the elders but to accept it.


Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4

the mystery is building up with each update..
Maan got a clue at least...
this old women is following Geet everywhere..
she was there at the accident and before that at the birth day party..
and her image is captured in the photos now..
hope it turns out to be a mystery than the curse belief..
will Maan and Geet be able to break it, both the belief and the mystery..

waiting for the next..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 8 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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                                                                    Chapter Five!



11:30 in the night, Maan and adi in their car. Driver is driving. Drive silent, both lads quiet and maan is lost in his thoughts.

His brain takes him to those beautiful days when he first saw his beautiful angel in the cafe with friends, later in the fitness classes where she would go for aerobics. 


He still remembered that beautiful rainy afternoon.




Flashback:




After geet left the cafe with her friends, maan went to her table and saw a book lying on top. It had the doodle smiley image drawn with a felt tip marker and address of some fitness class in bandra pali hill area. Maan smiled at the opportunity granted by god to meet his love.





Guys plz imagine the following song in the backgroud from the movie shaapit. It is kabhi na kabhi to miloge:










Just listen to this song while you read this part, gives the feel 

of maaneet's memories. 



Maan recalled how he had raced his car at full speed and reached the place just in 25 minutes. Then he went to the punjabi security guard and showing his id, just entered the huge hall where Geet was moving her body smoothly to the music, her gym outfit outlining all her lovely curves perfectly. 



She then saw him and went ahead when maan handed her the plastic bag containing her book. She took with a smile and thanks, and they shook hands. Then she took the plastic bag and returned with lovely pink umbrella handing it to M.K, saying the rain won't stop until few hours. Our hero smilingly took the umbrella and came out smiling like a lovesick puppy. 



Once reaching the gate, maan yelled out gaily and gave a dance performance playing a guitar on the umbrella by himself, when geet saw him through the glass window and giggled. He too looked at her and grinned, obviously embarrassed being caught like that and disappeared with a goodbye, waving his hand. 




Maan was thrown back int the present by the screeching of tyres and adi said to him, "Maan this is the place where we will get the answers to all our questions." 



Then he asked madan to park the car and both of them got out to enter the huge towering skyscraper. Reaching inside they introduced themselves at the reception and took the elevator to reach the 10th floor, where another chapter in their lives was soon to begin. 





Walking silently in the long empty corridor they reached room no. 130 where a tall guy wearing glasses was guiding students seated upon chairs with an interactive television LED screen in front. 





One female student: Sir, kya ye theben alphabets bhi mayan age mei invent kiye hai?




Professor Vikram: Yes, theben alphabets ko mayans ne invent kiya tha, their origins are lost in the myths of time. 


Aise kehte hai ki ghosts ek dusre se communicate karne ke liye in theben alphabets ki aid ka istemaal aaj bhi karte hai.




  
Another girl: But sir, aap hum logo ko ghost ki interaction kab karvayenge? Tell us at least something about them!




A boy: Sir, aap to humei aaj ghost se milvane wale thea na. 





Professor: Angrezo se baat karni ho to angrezi seekhna bahot zaroori hai my dear. 



Agar tum ghost se baat karna chahte ho, to pehle thben alphabets ki origin aur unki ghostly sign interpretations per abhyaas karo. Baad mei tum ghost ko contact karne liye equipped ban jaoge. 




Another student says: But sir, aap humei ghost ke bare kab batayenge, at least tell us somethings about them. 




Professor: Aaj nahi, people kyu ki aaj mera energy quota exhaust ho chuka hai. Aaj mai itna thak gaya hoon ki aap sab mujhe ghost ki tarah dikh rahe hain. Mujhe bhhot hi bhoot charo taraf nazar aa rahe hain.


So, we will stop here and call it a day, shall we?



There are murmurs of agreement and scraping s of chairs as everyone gets up to leave. All students are exiting the room one by one in a long line. 




Professor: And please guys, another request. Is bhoot-paret ki subject ko joke ya mazak mat samajhna. Ye bada khtarnaak maamla hai. It is dangerous business. So be very careful, it is not a warning but a sincere advice.



Saying so, he turns and sees the two boys standing in the doorway. Professor asks them,  yes, " Can i help you?"




Maan, "We think only you can help us. Is waqt humei sabse zyada aap hi ki madad ki zarurat hai."




Professor says, "Thik hai, mera ghar saamne hai, hum log aaram se baith kar baat karte hai. Saying so, he picks up his bag and switching off the tele screen and lights carefully, leaves with both friends, eager to find out their problems and solutions. 



So guys, here is chapter five. Plz like and comment so that i can spew up more interesting updates for you soon. Chalo lazy bones, start commenting quickly. 



Edited by turbulence - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
nice update..
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
just read this mysterious story ...
very intriguing ..
but why did purohitji cursed the girls of royals he should have cursed gurvinder or males of their family like that of Pandu of Mahabharata...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Nice update
Waiting for next update. .