ZaYa TS: |8 Years| (Complete) - Page 2

kanika

@kank_dah

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

it is superb.beautifully written.continue soon

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Marci

@Marci

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

😲 Dear this TS was amazeballs!!!!!

I loved it to the core!

It was beautiful how you depicted Aliya's silent plea, hurt, and love!

I wonder now how Zain feels!

Poor souls both are being tortured by life's cruel events!

You wrote it so beautifully, such lovely writing!! The TS was perfection to the T! Oh also loved how the dates played out with their growth, such brilliance there!

Again I loved the TS, ekkk please update soon, can't wait to read the second part! Please do pm me, I'll buddy you! hehehe😊

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Wonderful update , loved it😊

Looking forward for the next parts

Do update soon

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Humairaa

@Humzy

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow this is an amazing start

Loved it

Very nicely written

Continue soon

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rinku95

@rinku95

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing part
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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adithyan

@adithyan

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

nice start...waiting to see how Zai is going to convince her...loving this positive Barkhat

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Aastha

@craziness05

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow jst loved it 👍🏼

It was awesome👏

Waiting for the next two part update soon and do pm me😃 i will be waiting😛

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javeria

@Javeria3991

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

wow this is wonderful.

I love the backgound of story and its start.

Both are in love with each other but now one doesn't want to experience it again and the other is burning in it. That is so sad.

I truly hope barkat and ayat do something for the two stubborn lovers.

Update next chapter soon

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Sabrina

@SabrinaMalik

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Beautifulll as alwaysss

I loved the way you showed Aaliya's inner conflicts, their dialogues, the concept...it was just amazing!

And then thankfully there's no negative character 😲

Update jaldi se!!!

PM ke liye ThankYou ❤️

Edited by SabrinaMalik - 9 years ago

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Apsi83

@Apsi83

Newbie

Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the PM!
I enjoy reading your work..have you thought of publishing?

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