Arakshi SS: Jurm-e-Ishq CS & Pics pg 1 updated pt1 pg3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue


Sakshi-
      Actually hua to kuch bhe nehi tha magar bedroom mein jaatey huay mein wapas palat aayi, or again lounge mein aa gayi thi.
Priya utth chuki the or Arjun puri tarha say apny us kay sath busy thaa.

Mera room mai aana janaa us kay laye importance nei raakta tha.
Then mein nay last time khud ko mirror mein dekha, silver grey border ke light pink suit mein ne Arjun kay bolnay peh pehna tha.

Hum nay shayad dinner kay laye kahen janna tha,
or priya ko sham ke pass chorna tha. As always Arjun ko mera Birthday Yad Raha Tha or woh yah event totally enjoy karna chaata tha.
Arjun ko mujh say beintaah mohabbat hay yah baat us nay mujhy aaj shopping karte samay batayi the.
Last 3 hours mein yah Arjun ki one sided conversation maybe weeks ki khamoshi ko jo hum dono mein Chal rahy the us kay laye kafi helpful thi.
Arjun-
    "wow looking great"-
he said that in a totally different way, due to his politeness i m actually shocked, and speechless, so i turn and just starting at his face.


Arjun-
"wonderful-beautiful"
bohat suit kar raha hay yah colour and you know kyun?
Es laye ke yah meri choice hai, i said u every time kay just meri selection he use keya karo.


Tumari pasand kuch etni trust-worthy nei hai, or apni choice ka to tum nay injam dakh he lea hai, so es laye, es laye kuch nein.
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Sakshi-
    Arjun bohat si adhuri batoon ko complete karte karte willingly mere shareer ko adhura pan de ke wapas ja chuka tha.

Mai kuch karnay or naa karnay ki situation mai the kay pher chala aya.
"hurry up, hurry up,

be quick mera face pay kya dakh rahy ho ab chalo bi"
woh jaldi say whole house lock kar kay aa gaya, mai bhe arjun ko follow karte huye car tak aa gayi.

'First i drop u at ur home then me and priya outing kar kay tumhare laye 1 wonderful Birthday Cake lay kay atay han, kyun paro right na?

Priya back seat pe apni doll say khel rahi and she noded.

Arjun Car stop exactly infront of my papa home, as i turn back he said,

"tumhara dinner due hai,
bass last minute pe mood change ho gaya, i hope u don't mind haan...

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P.s:
my first ever writting plz tell me how was it?

(nadia)

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CHARACTER SKETCH

Main characters of story

1. Arjun Rawte: Shaleen Malhotra ..

2. Sakshi Anand: Mrunal Thakur

3. Avantika Anand: Rati Pandey


4. Vikas Anand: Arun Bali



Other Characters introduces later when Story Proceeds futher...

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Index:


Prologue    page 1

Part 1       page 4

Edited by -.griffin.- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice concept...
but arjun is tarah kyu behave kar raha hai..
plz con.soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

nice concept...
but arjun is tarah kyu behave kar raha hai..
plz con.soon...

dakhte jao agay kya hota hai i knw its crap btw thanks for comenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice! Please do continue.. the dynamics of their relation seem to puzzle me... 
Good job!
PM me the updates ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Nice! Please do continue.. the dynamics of their relation seem to puzzle me...

Good job!
PM me the updates😊

thanks a ton for ur coment m glad that u like it yeah is something, just wait.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just 4 likes and 2 coments i think m discontinue it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -.griffin.-

Just 4 likes and 2 coments i think m discontinue it.


No no don't... post a chapter... and slowly and gradually likes will grow!
Make more friends as well n tell them when u r updating!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Armagadon



No no don't... post a chapter... and slowly and gradually likes will grow!
Make more friends as well n tell them when u r updating!

thanks okay i wil update next chapter today
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Love it
Cont soon