Why do you want suggestions now???.
As u have given an appropriate title,"ARRANGED MARRIAGE".
Though Raghav and Kalpi are married,they don't understand so well,their likes and dislikes are different.And Raghav had spent most of the time being alone and stubborn too.And Kalpi is more chirpy but not so open due to her mother.
For me,marriage is not only abt physical relationships but should be an union of two totally different soulls.Pls proceed the FF in such a way that Kalpi removes the loneliness from Raghav's life and make him more sensible,lively and fun loving guy.Whereas Raghav should try to remove her troubled childhood memories and make smile always.Also instead of portraying as a home maker,let her achieve her own success on her own merits by Raghav on her side.
Pls include the nok jhoks between them and how they convince each other.And also how Ragna is an ideal parent to their child.
BASICALLY RAGNA SHOULD STAY TOGETHER HAPPILY,CHEERFULLY,SUCCESSFULLY IN THEIR WORLDS .
I am very very confident abt your thoughts,the style of writing.You have started this Ff having a clear cut idea.So don't worry.have a chill pill and start giving good updates to us that too soon and continuously.
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