’’Because I Love You.’’FanFic Pt-10 Pg-23 - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago

i am happy that u didn't turn tia into a vamp 😊 ----i couldn't have been able to bear it .

the way she reacted when she realized that yuvi was married was so beautifully expressed 👏 .

both aashi and tia ready to sacrifice their love that was so kind of them😳 😳.


Listen Ranveer.. promise me that you would always take care of my princess. She was the only thing which ever mattered to me .. you know. And promise me one more thing.. never ever hurt a woman.. a woman should always be respected.. and a woman is the most powerful of all.. every man is successful only because of the inspiration of a woman.. Women are the futures Ranveer.. never ever let a woman get hurt..

these lines touched my heart . so beautiful and so true 😳 😳 😳 👏 .

words fail me when i start to describe this part coz it is too good 👏 .

plz do continue soon , will be waiting eagerly .



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Posted: 19 years ago
hey firstly thanx 4 taking my comments in the rite way....i was scared 😉 ...very nice part esp luved those lines sumeet said to ranny 😛 ......bt still dun like to imagine yuvi saying hes fallen 4 tia 😕 ....i mean 4 once even ashi n ranny r imaginable bt nt tia n yuvi......

bt cont soon n me waiting 4 yuvi to get bakk to his senses 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh yaar greattttttt part..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESUM PART RE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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PLZZZZZZZZZZ CONTI SOON.

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Posted: 19 years ago
ohh it was soo fine...amazingly touching n real...i juzz love ashi here....u hv expressed her perfectly..ashi wuld hv first reacted violently in such a situation but later done wht was right in d whole picture...if ur understandin wht i mean...the first n last bit of d part...

i wonder wht yuvi will do nw tht he has a chioce??...waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesum part shreyasi..that is what5 i can say..i have no words,u have expressed it so beautifully..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon dear..
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Posted: 19 years ago
thxx guys for the comments,,
i will continue as soon as i can k? as soon as i finish 5 friggen essays due monday

luv ya all
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part 👏
both tia n ashi wil be tyaag ki deviyan 😆 i thought they wud fight for yuvi.neways cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
srry for vanishing you guys... but im posting the next part here now!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 8

In good old times, remember my friend

Moon was so bright and so close to us, sometimes

We were so blind and deaf, what a bliss

Painting the world of our own, for our own eyes, now?

He sat in his darkened room with a steaming mug of hot coffee, thinking about everything which had changed his life. One encounter with Tia had changed everything.. his beliefs for the last four years, his relationship with his wife, and his vow to protect Ashi for ever in sickness and in health. He didn't know what to do anymore. If Ashi came to know about it, she would be heart broken,, but would accept her as a part of his life. But he didn't want to do that to Ashi, she had been the best wife ever to him.. he didn't want her to be heartbroken.. He knew it would never work out with Tia, the circumstances were too complicated, too different, and even the tiniest mistake would ruin their friendship. He was not ready to risk that.. he was not ready to trade love with friendship.. or friendship with love. Sighing, he closed his eyes letting the tears fall down … they tasted salty..

One cloudy day, we both lost the game

We drifted so far and away

Nothing is quite as cruel as a child

Sometimes we break the unbreakable, sometimes.

Watching the far away sunset, she wondered how her life got to be like this. Two days ago, she had a husband.. a loving home.. a life. And today she has nothing. The unbreakable has truly broken.. their bond has broken.. broken to such an extent that it might never heal itself. She couldn't even try to imagine how it all had started.. that man loved her so much.. she could still remember him saying, ' Your words… they sting' when she had accepted the proposal from Pierre. They were all so far away now.. it was shocking that he didn't love her anymore.. she had no place inside his heart, because now it all belonged to Tia. Tia.. the snobbish, cute, innocent girl from college who was hopelessly in love with Ranveer.. the last girl she had expected to snatch her husband away from her.. her quite sobs turned into loud sobs of despair, rage and angst..

I was unable to cope with what you said

Sometimes we need to be cruel to be kind

Child that I am, could not see the reason

Feelings I had were but sham and a lie

It all started with a sham and a lie for her. Her marriage with Ranveer, her father's death, the realization that she was in love with Yuvi, reappearance of Ranveer, coming to know that Yuvi was married.. it all ended up in knots.. knots she couldn't even start to undo, because they were deep and intense. She wanted Yuvi and Ashi to be happy together, and she wanted to go out of their lives.. but a small part of her wanted him to be happy only with her..

It was all Sham And A Lie..

You saw us always clearer than me

How we were never meant to be

Love denied meant the friendship would die

And I have seen a light

These memories make me cry..

These memories make me cry..

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