’’Because I Love You.’’FanFic Pt-10 Pg-23 - Page 15

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey hey shreyasi i m here to reply................................

sorry i ddint reply for ur fic earlier......................... i was so busy in reading ur fic that it took a long time to post a reply........................................ sorry once again...................................but as gujju said: u r one of the best writers on rf so obviously i cant be a stupid n say that this part wasnt good..............................😆 hope u ll continue soon .................... but for ur fic uptil now:

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Posted: 18 years ago
pleej contine soon

luv
sonam 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
its like really awesome.. but i liked this more than that "one charm forever" one thing.. i love the way u find da perfect n most appropraite song and incorporate them in your fics.. its beautiful.. the songs are perfect.. and da way ashi writes that letter is just awesome... 😛 😛 i love it!!!! 😊 😊
its just how love is.. Amor Immorteus i learnt it from u and i love tihs term!! thankx.. ur way of describin is also amazing.. i loved this fic.. lost love.. anf=d one more thing.. the names of your fics are like AWESOME.. one charm forever.. like how cute is that.. and because i love u.. amazzzzzing yaar.. please continue!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

The phone ran thrice in her 'room' before she picked it up.

'Hello.'

'Tia?--' he couldn't continue speaking as a lump started forming in his throat.

'Yuvi? What's wrong?'

'Tia.. Tia, Ashi left.'

The first thought which ran through her mind was 'Shit', as she dropped the receiver she was holding, and leaned against a door to close her eyes. Ashi has gone.. that meant she knew about them.. that meant she had given up everything for her husband.. she couldn't think anymore, as she started crying. Minutes later, she had controlled herself, and going out of the room, she started on the road. The weather seemed to match her moods, as it was cloudy and dark, and huge drops of rain were threatening to fall. Even though it was Paris, she knew where Ashi would go. And she planned to go there.

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She was sitting on her suitcase, waiting for the train to come. People passing by gave her weird looks, mainly because of the tears streaking down her face and her extremely clammy hands which she was clenching and unclenching. And then she heard the distant announcement that the train was coming, and she stood up to gather her belongings.

'ASHI!' she whirled around as the shout came from behind her, and she froze. She knew that voice, she knew that attire, and she knew that person. She turned around abruptly, breathing hard. Just because she had divorced her love for them, it doesn't mean she could be all cheerful for them. She turned back and forced a smile.

'Hi Tia.'

But she would have none of the small talk. 'Ashi, what the hell are you doing here? Come back home, Yuvi needs you. You know how miserable he has been after you left? Ashi come back. He needs you.'

Her face hardened as she replied, 'No, Yuvi doesn't need me anymore. I know everything about you both, and I have given him the divorce papers which he should sign and marry you. Now please go back and tell him that. I'm going to miss my train.'

'Ashi, please come back.'

'No Tia. Now it's the start of your life. Go back to him and marry him. You'll be very happy together.. both of you. I know it. Just promise me one thing, Tia, that if you ever fall out of love with him, call me back.' She smiled.

Even through her tears, Tia chuckled as she replied, 'I promise.'

The train blew out the warning whistle. 'I've got to go.' Said Ashi, 'take care.' And then she boarded the train and was gone.

Tia looked back at Ashi, and she at him. They both looked through each other, and broke down walls to find the same anger, compassion, and love flowing through each others' veins. And at that moment, they knew whatever happened, they were always friends. And a jolting realization almost knocked Tia out of her feet, she realized that she was only a friend. Ashi belonged to Yuvi, and she silently vowed that one day she would give her to him.

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Posted: 18 years ago
i know i have kinda discontinued this fic.. but i felt a sudden urge to come back and finish it.. i will only continue if you guys like it.. and also i have promised some people i will finish it.

please comment guys, even tho its been long since i even visited the forum.. i hope you stil remember who i am 😳 😕

happy reading
shreyasi

ps: if interested, you could read my new fic 'And Then I Saw The Real You' in LRL forum..
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank god u continued.
good part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG!!! that's awesum... the way you showed ashi and tia's bonding...mindblastin👏 really luved it!!!😳😳😳and i really like tia's character in your fic👏 gud thing is she thought for ashi😃😳😳she vowed to get AY back together😳😳😳way to gooo tia... we all are with you😉 but now jaldi cont. yaar... i really wanna know yuvi's reactions😳 how he feels without ashi😭 but i really feeling bad for ashi... btw tell me sumthing is ashi's character in ur fic taking break kya?😕 and now pleej cont. soon... don't take ages...luv ur fic😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey shreyasi...firstly welcome back...n gr8 tht ur continuing the fic....it was an amazing realistic part...simply loved it...continue sooon...coz d fic deserves an end...
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome yaar .......... this part was really touching .......continue as soon as possible...... we love your fic totally....... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi dear I read all the part of your fic together it is soooooooooo coooooooooool jara hatke hai 👏 Plzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooon 😊

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