FF-Coming After You - Page 3

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update 

Rudra knew that paro is living with him.

I love Aman and his cute threat. He is indeed the best brother Parvati could have wished for, he arrived exactly on time to help Parvati in her distressful state.

I like Rudra determination to not leave Parvati, his brilliant scheme to not complete tejawat case and guarding Parvati is very smart and his actions tells one thing that he love her, what need is his confession.

Finally the truth reveal. Laila truth gave Parvati an excuse to leave him for his betterment, his shock was predictable. 

Update next chapter soon. Also give translations of Hindi dialogues. 

Originally posted by: aruni50218

Oh man this is so good! You write so well, please update soon na...

Very nice.  I fact I was thinking the same that Paro has got the perfect opportunity to leave him and she will take it. I like the trust Rudr has on her in thinking it is not a simple matter of her leaving him due to Laila. 

Hiya
Fantastic story

Look forward to ch 3!

nice story. do let me know when u update next

wonderful story.  atlast the mystery of her leaving him has come in the lime light.  so rudra and aman together will get her back.

Awww.that was one lovely OS...

Thanks

awesome.loved every parts.Aman threatning rudra was so adorable.paro's possessiveness was also nicely written.

great take on the separation...

thank you so much everyone for being so kind, and for your lovely comments... encourages me to write more... will think up another OS soon...