FF-Coming After You - Page 2

Smokyeyes2014

@Smokyeyes2014

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neet2407
Nice start! Any chance of an additional English translation - my Hindi is no good either! Waiting for next part!

Here you go!

Hindi translation to English

Ab to unki haath poori tarah theek ho gayi!

Now that his hand is completely healed!

Major Saab, mhaare ko jaana hai, bas! Mein aapko chod rahi hoon!

Major Saab, I need to go, I am leaving you!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey there Lava-sa! I decided why not comment here rather than the PM!

This has a brilliant start and it can definitely develop into something beautiful!

She is using Laila as a cover... I am almost sad about it.

But do update... I wanna see where you take it!

Also, if you need any help with hindi or even rajasthani, I am just a PM away!

Lots of Love

Anky.

:)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome start

Looking forward to read the story

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Smokyeyes2014

@Smokyeyes2014

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Also, if you need any help with hindi or even rajasthani, I am just a PM away!

Lots of Love
Anky.

:)

Bohoth Abhaar, Senbon-Sa! Will surely take you up on your kind offer, when I struggle for the words! Thanks for the kind comments!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update

Rudra knew that paro is living with him.

I love Aman and his cute threat. He is indeed the best brother Parvati could have wished for, he arrived exactly on time to help Parvati in her distressful state.

I like Rudra determination to not leave Parvati, his brilliant scheme to not complete tejawat case and guarding Parvati is very smart and his actions tells one thing that he love her, what need is his confession.

Finally the truth reveal. Laila truth gave Parvati an excuse to leave him for his betterment, his shock was predictable.

Update next chapter soon. Also give translations of Hindi dialogues.

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh man this is so good! You write so well, please update soon na...

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Navin

@napstermonster

Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Incredibly sweet of you to mention me in your writer's note--I am glad you have found the world of fan fictions, because it is an addictive place to be--both for us writers, and for the readers! Lovely story--i appreciate the effort it takes to take a base line idea and spin it out, so I am looking forward to how you go about Rudra resolving the Parvati/God's will equation!

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asmi279

@asmi279

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Grt update baisa..nxt part bhi update kar do jaldi se..cant wait :)

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Smokyeyes2014

@Smokyeyes2014

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: napstermonster
Incredibly sweet of you to mention me in your writer's note--I am glad you have found the world of fan fictions, because it is an addictive place to be--both for us writers, and for the readers! Lovely story--i appreciate the effort it takes to take a base line idea and spin it out, so I am looking forward to how you go about Rudra resolving the Parvati/God's will equation!

Huge fan of your work, napstermonster!

Will do my best to come up with a credible chapter 3...

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Smokyeyes2014

@Smokyeyes2014

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asmi279
Grt update baisa..nxt part bhi update kar do jaldi se..cant wait :)

Thank you asmi

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