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Renu111 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
sorry for late comment di...
and wonderful update di...krishna is changing...bt now masahib also do something to threat pratigya and as a result pratigya in trouble... 😭and k misunderstood her... hope this mu will not be for long...update soon di.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: manissha

Wow super update dhanya. Waiting for next chapter. Hope that meera willnot harm pratigya.

 
   thanks manju ... u will see 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb πŸ‘ update next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great...Superb...Outstanding update di...
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Loved the update DhanyaπŸ‘

I'm loving how sweet and caring KST is towards Pratigya. 
Just the fact that he so wants to believe that P's love for him is geniune shows the human side of K.  Kriya are so like in that beneath all the hurt and pain in their life all they really wants is to be loved.  😳

My prediction was wrong you surprised me with how P figured out that the pic was fake, and K was so impressed with her intelligence he is so in love😳

 Their future MU it's going to be so painful to read. 😭

Looking forward to the next updateπŸ˜›

 
   thanks rekha ... the MU will be huge ... but just a hint : It won't last long πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Renu111

sorry for late comment di...
and wonderful update di...krishna is changing...bt now masahib also do something to threat pratigya and as a result pratigya in trouble... 😭and k misunderstood her... hope this mu will not be for long...update soon di.. 😳


  thanks renu... soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi96

superb πŸ‘ update next part soon.



     Thanks khushi πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Muskaan92

Great...Superb...Outstanding update di...

Thanks for the PM...


    Thank u so much dear πŸ˜ƒ glad u r liking it 
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2


                                                   'pratigya...' she heard him call her , his voice thick with desire ...she was still in the bed n she felt him lay down against her... She opened her eyes in shyness n encountered his dark orbs n she shivered ...'tonight! ...u will be mine ...forever..!' ...he said , his fingers knotting in hers, his eyes loving...'I am already yours...forever...' she said , her eyes moist from the onslaught of emotions...'I know...' he chuckled n she felt him pull her tired body into his arms n hugged her , claiming her mouth without any preamble... she arched upto him, her hands coming to hug him along his back n head, closing her eyes in happiness , a silent tear of joy running down the side of her right eye...



                                                       Sumitra entered krishna's room, seeing pratigya in a slumber on the bed ... So the maids were right! sumitra thought giggling to herself... her son did keep his beautiful wife up all night! ...'pratigya?' she called, running a loving hand along her forehead ...'hmm.' pratigya sat up , snapping open her eyes in shock , looking around wildly ...he was nowhere to be seen... she blushed crimson, n sat straighter , bowing her head in shyness as she encountered sumitra's teasing smile, knotting n unknotting her pallu... sumitra giggled out n then put a kaala tika behind her left ear... then she kept a straight face n asked...' coming with me to mandir?'  ... pratigya nodded , suddenly feeling relieved ... she was thinking that she would die of tension n excitement n nervousness n shyness... she need to keep her mind off him! n the evening! ... no! don't think about it!...'yes maji...I am coming...' she said , grateful ...'right beti! change n come... I will be in my room...' Sumitra smiled... pratigya nodded, smiling...



                                                       Meera lingered around the kitchen corridor , her face sour ... the maids were non stop gossiping about how chote thakur seemed to addicted to his 'wife' ... Seeing meera lurking around , an young maid walked upto her a mocking smile in her lips... 'what were u saying the other day meera? That chote thakur wil be throwing out choti malkin in one night! ... Bad luck !  u know... Its has been more than 2 weeks n chote malik has never let choti malkin alone, apparently...' She giggled ... The other maids giggled too, n an elderly maid said ...'the measure of a woman is not how long a man keeps her in bed ! to me choti malkin has conquered chote malik's heart ... ! u see , chote malik has only eaten from choti malkin's hands , from yesterday onwards ... I am so happy for chote malik... He has got his soul partner ... they r just made for eachother... can't u see how they look so complimenting the other...' ... the other maids nodded even as a young one gushed...' u know , malik actually called off all the guards from the grounds... n I heard he ordered for fresh clothes , u know, to the stable...' All giggled in embarrassment ... 'hmm... n didn't malik order u to fetch the dirty clothes?' a maid mocked n all roared in laughter ... meera gritted her teeth , tears of humiliation n loathing in her eyes...


                                             'n u know I saw badi malkin n choti malkin going to mandir earlier... if badi malkin is taken a liking to the choti malkin , then no question , choti malkin is such a nice girl...' Another maid said n all nodded in agreement... They dispersed quickly as ma sahib walked towards them saying...' what r u all doing here? Don't u have any work?   ...meera! Come with me...' ...meera followed ma sahib in resentment... once they were inside her room ma sahib asked her to bring her phone...' shailendra will sent a video msg this evening... show it to that girl! She hasn't been on earth lately ! this will surely bring her crashing down to earth ...or hell!' gayatri said , smiling evily... meera gripped her phone tightly , her jaw set in anger, hiding a dagger behind her back


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                                                           Pratigya took tentative steps towards the tree at the corner of the temple ...where it all started ... Her dreamy eyes gazed at the tree even as sumitra gave her a sacred thread in her hands...'tie it there , around that tree... its for his long life...' ... Pratigya tied it around the tree, walking around the tree slowly, remembering the last time... what a coincidence ! she was doing the exact thing last time too ! tying a sacred thread around this very tree for her future husband! N he came! ... his face filled her heart n closed eyes as happiness erupted in her heart...its not coincidence u fool! Its destiny ! HE is destiny ...ur destiny!... She opened her eyes in prayer ...she can't wait to be his in every way possible...in every way he wants!


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                                                     'what !?' durjjan shouted , deranged in anger ... his lawyer has just phoned him to inform that not only chandu n the others got scot free , but his son lakhan was now taken into custody for trying to cheat court with false evidence n also trying to molest n kidnap that girl ...!  As it was an unexpected blow , they hadn't arranged for any bail n was now trying to get a bail for lakhan... but his arrest n custody couldn't be prevented ... durjjan cursed , turning on the TV ... Media was having a field day with it... he gripped the remote tightly in anger as it started ringing incessantly  ...



                                                            'a word with u lakhan ..' chuckled chandu as the constables escorted lakhan out of the court ... lakhan looked at chandu in hatred n anger ... 'I think this lockup came as a boon for u lakhan... Krishna had nearly ordered for ur execution ... But as u know, we won't kill unnecessarily... so he changed his mind n thought that this custody n lock up will be more humiliating than a bullet through ur head ...so... have a nice time...' Chandu smirked ... lakhan lashed out , shouting...' my father will get my bail today itself... U wait n watch, dog...' ...the constables dragged him away ... Chandu turned to see Geetha smiling at him...'thank u so much for being with me n my friends ... will never forget ur help'... she said , tears in her eyes ...' its OK...' chandu smiled n shook hand with Darshan n kavya, his eyes locked in geetha's...


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                                                                      Krishna tried to concentrate on the meeting but it was impossible... his eyes kept drifting as his mind conjured up events of the morning as his senses filled with her scent n taste ... she was fast becoming like a drug... He can't begin to think or breathe even for a moment without the continuous supply of his private drug... Her! ... he could see her every where ... near the window ... Near the projector... Near the table... in his lap! ... he fisted his hands in an effort to stay sane ... when will this stupid meeting will get over! He cursed in his mind, smiling n nodding mechanically at the presenter n checking his watch ... nearly noon! May be he could go home with an excuse of having lunch! Yes!... he sat straighter , enduring through the  torturous minutes ... may be he will buy her a gift ... What would it be? He mused , swirling the pen in his fingers ... a necklace ? no! its so common gift! She saved my chandu ... Something more special would do...  Ear rings! Yes! N he will put it on her ... he could see himself walking towards the dressing table in front of the mirror ... She was seated there , coy as always , her beautiful eyes down , her cheeks flushed ... in that beautiful , delicious red which made him think of doing wildest things to her cheeks alone... he would hug her from behind, letting her know how much he need her by having his arousal wedged right in the crack of her so soft buttocks ... He would relish the feel of her shivering against him , n would bury his face in her sweet smelling hair ... ah!her scent ! so enticing ... ! n her panting breath! ... he would present her with the ear rings n watch her innocent eyes fill with surprised happiness n love n coyness ...he would lick along the pinna of her right ear ,  pulling her shivering body more n more closer to him...he would bite her old ear ring off her lobe , making her  throw her head back on his shoulder ...  n he would capture her delicious earlobe in between his lips n teeth n suck n bite n delve his fingers down her under belly n feel her writhe against him...he would hear her cry out his name in absolute coyness n love n pleasure, feeling her shudder, as his fingers seek further down n... he blinked as the sound of a glass breaking filled the room n he looked down to find the glass of water near him now on the floor... may be he had reached out his hand in real to touch her n had knocked off the glass!... he smiled curtly at the shocked presenter , well aware of his embarrassed cheeks ...'carry on , just slipped off my hand...' he said as casual he thought he would sound, avoiding to acknowledge all the curious eyes on him... he gritted his teeth to suppress his groan of desire n disappointment as the presenter resumed his drone , cursing why he is inside this closed room when he could be inside the  best place in all the universe he would ever be... Inside her! No! don't think about it! He chided his roaring heart n body , taking deep calming breathes , moistening his dry lips...


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                                                         Pratigya walked towards the stairs , smiling nervously at sumitra... they were just back from the mandir n pratigya was feeling that sweet dread again... all her resolve seemed to vanish into thin air as her mind informed her that its already noon... Mere hours for the evening!... she felt her hands tremble as she opened the door to his room n entered , feeling  nervous to the core...the room suddenly seemed intimidating ... she closed the door n panted against it, resting her forehead over the frame, her body blossoming in shy goosebumps ... 'been waiting for long, pratigya...' she heard him whishper , his warm breath along the back of her neck n right ear ... she gasped n felt him turn her n found his mouth smother hers in a desperate kiss , his hard body pressing n pushing against hers , his hands pinning her surprised hands along the door frame to her sides... she writhed against him as he demanded entrance n she gave in , moaning in abandon as he plunged inside her welcoming mouth , practically devouring her ... she opened n closed her eyes in sensual stupor n felt him pull at her pallu n along her back... she realized with a jolt that her hands were free n they were only busy pulling him more n more to her along his nape n head instead of trying to stop his wandering hands which seemed to know no boundaries ... not to mention shameless! She felt him lift her bridal style n secs later she was on the bed , him bearing down on her ... she saw his feral gaze n shuddered n felt him remove the pallu n ...n ... n... imagination failed her as pratigya buried her flushed face in her trembling hands n slumped down tiredly on the floor ... 


                                                                    she looked up startled as she heard a sharp knock on the door...'arey maharani ! before sitting down n gulp down ur lunch, why don't u move those precious hands n legs a bit n do some work?' came ma sahib's voice from the other side of the door n pratigya got up in consternation ... she opened the door , trying to hide her blush ...' u! go n take the dry clothes from the wash area ...' she heard ma sahib shout at her , her eyes slits as she glared at her ... pratigya nodded slowly n walked towards the stairs n down to the courtyard ... Sumitra, who walked past the big shiva idol in the hall saw pratigya walk towards the courtyard n  glared back at gayatri n walked behind pratigya , placing the pooja thaal on the tea table... 'I will help u beti..' sumitra said , helping her fold the sheets from the machine... Pratigya nodded absently even though she was feeling relieved that she could occupy her mind on something... anything... other than him!... gayatri glared at the two n dialed shialendra's number ..'whatever ur plan is, make it fast!... the girl is so in her dreamy dreamy land!!!' she hissed into the phone... 'don't worry ma sahib! She is going to face the reality soon... pretty soon!' snarled shailendra into the phone, gritting his teeth


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                                                               Meera watched pratigya enter the courtyard , her eyes slits...she had just learned from an over nosy maid that she saw what looked suspiciously like a love bite over that bitch's neck...  meera couldn't believe her ears as jealousy n loathing filled her ... That was a most primal thing yet a clear sign that malik has started to regard that bitch as something special ...it was a clear indication that malik has started to see that bitch as his own! ...n not his usual use n throw stuff , like her! ...NO! no! ... she waited , gnashing her teeth , gripping the handle of the knife... She saw pratigya taking all the folded clothes n walking towards the exit of the courtyard n came swiftly from the side ... 



                                                   sumitra , who was closing the doors of all the automatic , shouted , alarmed... 'Pratigya! watch out!...' pratigya moved away in time , the clothes falling from her hands in shock , as meera lunged at her, swinging the dagger , her loathsome eyes fixed over the love bite over her neck... 'u bitch!' meera shrieked , deranged in anger as she swung the dagger again n pratigya scrambled back in shock , suddenly losing balance ...the dagger almost pierced along her chest but sumitra stopped meera's hand in time ... 'get off me , u hag!' meera shouted , trying to get her hand freed from sumitra's grip as pratigya stood up in trepidation ,  shocked... 'how dare u attack my son's wife?' sumitra shouted , trying to drag meera from near pratigya ...'get off me u bitch!' meera shouted , swinging her other hand over sumitra's face ... slap! The hand made contact with sumitra's cheek n pratigya cried out maji' even as sumitra lost her balance n her grip on meera loosened n she staggered sideways , into the open stone courtyard... she didn't hit the floor... instead she fell into the outstretched hands of her son... meera recoiled in horror , a lightening passing all over her body, the dagger falling from her hands as she encountered krishna's eyes , which were filled with the deep calmness of death...


                        hope u liked it πŸ˜³

Edited by dhakarn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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as usual wonderful di..k and pratigya dreamed abt each other and thank god sumitra came at right time and pratigya is safe...now meera is dead definately bt i want that she should blur out the truth abt masahib... πŸ˜›

and update soon di..and plz pm me when u update next as i will out of town for somedays. 😊