~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138 - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago
ch 21

awesome update
I doubt aditi ... Is she a good person? I think its a no
and astha using he plan ... How will shlok react
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Posted: 9 years ago
ch 22
nice update
now what?
niki795 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
shlok won't divorce now
waiting for next
update soon
niki795 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
shlok won't divorce now
waiting for next
update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sholok blames himself?  He thinks he forced himself on Aastha.   Omg when the truth comes out God save Aastha.  I hope when the truth comes out, the whole truth comes out including what Aditi did or Sholok is going to hate Astha even more.  
Really loving this story you are doing a marvelous job of telling the story and your characters seem so real.  I can't wait until their love story starts.  
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh oh... Shlok is blaming himself... Don't know what will happen when he comes to know hat actually happened! 
AMAZING UPDATE! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I fell asleep waitng fr d update😆 It ws super 🥺 Shlok blaming himself nd Asthas happy I jus Loved loved loved how he said to Varad he had lost..its his primitiv instinct to nt see faults in his tiny❤️ so next chp wl be Ashlok confrontatn? C.s! Did I mentn how Varad took care of him..in awe of them😳Edited by Aishaa3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Another amazing one... All the while i was thinking about,what ll happen when he get the pills...?and have to mention ur each update is just perfect..now what next?cant wait,plz update soon,plz plz plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting to know what's going to happen 
when will be ur next update?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for giving 3 updates a day.😃
The story-line is really amazing. Actually such things happen in the real world too.
aastha seduced shlok😆.seems odd but for the progress of the story this part is much needed 😊. bi**h adithi. she is manipulating astha for her own good. Hope astha won't get trapped very badly 😕. So finally shlok can't run away form the good fortune what his lucky stars have given😉.
waiting for the update. Plz don't take a long break this time.😃
hoping to get a very long update very soon😳.

Edited by athmi - 9 years ago