~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138 - Page 40 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

Bobbie

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Posted: 9 years ago

I can't believe Additi did that... Now the blame is going to come on Aastha. Omg I don't want Sholok to be more angry with Aastha. Let's see what happens next.

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

yeah, she does but as a drunk person would

whn wl u update next haan?😳

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GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 9 years ago

Great update :D poor Aastha doesn't remember what seems to be her first Night :0 and Shlok :0 he must be very angry with himself anyway great update pls PM when there is a new updateand pls update soon

Why is aditi such a bitc*** -.- liked her in the beginning but now i would love to shake her and tell her you are bad hahaha 😆

Pls update soon :)))

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525795

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan
oh aditi is doing all dis for her own benefit
nd wat will happen when shlok will come to senses
do update soon

yeah, she is extremely selfish. I will try to😳

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525795

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon
I can't believe Additi did that... Now the blame is going to come on Aastha. Omg I don't want Sholok to be more angry with Aastha. Let's see what happens next.

I think its astha's fault to trust aditi so much.

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525795

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishaa3
whn wl u update next haan?😳

soon. I am writing now,if i wrote enough, i will post it before sleeping

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

soon. I am writing now,if i wrote enough, i will post it before sleeping

ayeee I want to bear hug u right nw🤗 Bt it wl b a sad one!:|

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Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

You are writing so damn good! I adore reading your FF as it's truly exciting.

I feel Astha still has to gain some life experience, at the moment she consista only of hormones which is normal for an 18 year old girl. As for Shlok, how old is he, by the way? 30-34?

Married to a child😕 Oh, I like you story. Please continue soon😉

BTW I like your time gaps.😉

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525795

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
Great update :D poor Aastha doesn't remember what seems to be her first Night :0 and Shlok :0 he must be very angry with himself anyway great update pls PM when there is a new updateand pls update soon
Why is aditi such a bitc*** -.- liked her in the beginning but now i would love to shake her and tell her you are bad hahaha 😆
Pls update soon :)))

Thanks 😊. I will ty to update later today😳...aditi is my least fav character in drama,so obviously it spilled in story too. But selfish ppl like her exist everywhere who use other people to get something they want.

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525795

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishaa3
ayeee I want to bear hug u right nw🤗 Bt it wl b a sad one!:|

🤗Things are going to change now, like really change so expect a bit of sadness but shlok isn't the sort to remain sad for long. he would rather make other person sad kind of person.

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