~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Pveenat

Very nice and too good! All together different story, really liked it so much😛

Originally posted by: hashima

really really loving this..i have read your fist update...but couldn't comment...my most favorite dialogue from first update is "ok tiny...you won"..after that finger sucking things...i love this bond between ashlok...you are portraying the baby's movements very well...but i have one doubt...the age difference between ashlok...waiting for your next update...if you can plz pm me

' .

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

Awh! this is utterly innocent and pure! nice reading the pro and first chapter... poor baby Asttha lost her parents while so young... NA seems a good man!

...

Chapter three Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 6 years ago

Ur story is really nice..loved reading it..but onetng,aastha is a baby n anjali has already startd concering about her realatn wid shlok!

Awsm update😊 anjalis worries r so right...Cant wait for shlok to b back n try to manaofy astha😃 btw 1questn😛 do kids start talkng so much at the age of 3? I hv nevr hd much interactn wid so smal childrn so jus curious😆

Age difference is extreme..shlok is a college guy..n aastha baby.. n shlok dobt have girlfriend..

Can someone help me wat s the age diff between shlok and aastha

amazing update
loved it
poor astha missing shlok ... But he went to hiking 
continue soon

amazing update
loved it
poor astha missing shlok ... But he went to hiking 
continue soon.