~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138 - Page 3

awesome prologue
but what's the age of shlok in this
just got the doubt while reading

awesome update
loved it
loving the bond between astha and shlok 
cute
continue soon
plz pm me

Very nice and too good! All together different story, really liked it so much😛

really really loving this..i have read your fist update...but couldn't comment...my most favorite dialogue from first update is "ok tiny...you won"..after that finger sucking things...i love this bond between ashlok...you are portraying the baby's movements very well...but i have one doubt...the age difference between ashlok...waiting for your next update...if you can plz pm me

Awh! this is utterly innocent and pure! nice reading the pro and first chapter... poor baby Asttha lost her parents while so young... NA seems a good man!

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

I am sooo in love wid ths story..innocent love❤️ hav been ages sinc i read smthng so pure n emotnaly intense like ths! awwsmm👏 cntinue soon😳

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

sooo cuteee love it doo continueee 

Originally posted by: logambika

love ur ff... pls continue and do pm me...

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome prologue
but what's the age of shlok in this
just got the doubt while reading

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
loving the bond between astha and shlok 
cute
continue soon
plz pm me

Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 10 years ago