OS:CID solving Sammy's murder case

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Posted: 10 years ago


Hello everyone! I have written an os on how CID will solve Sammy's murder case. its not all humourous but serious one πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
My story starts after precap. Priya assures Ram that she trusts him n she'll do all the needful to prove him innocent. After meeting Ram, Priya's  first goal was to bail out Ram, for that a lawyer is required.
"BT lawyers ke bharose rahi toh hogayi Mr. Kapoor ki bail πŸ€£, KD Pathak ko milti hoon πŸ˜‰...bht accha lawyer hai πŸ˜†", Priya thinks. 
Priya reaches KD's office n knocks at his office.
KD: yes please
Priya comes inside n sits infront of him.
KD: kahiye kya madad kar sakta hoon aapki?
Priya: mai chahti hoon k aap mere pati ka case lade, mere pati Mr. Ram Kapoor...
"ne apne damad ki hatya kar di πŸ˜†", KD completes the sentence.
KD: dekha maine abhi news mai
Priya defends Ram: Ram ne kuch nahi kiya hai, he is innocent πŸ˜ˆ
KD: theek hai, aap kehti hai toh mai maan leta hoon...aap mujhe sab kuch shuru se batayie
Priya narrates the whole drama from beginning and KD comes to conclusion that Ram is being trapped/framed.
KD: aap nishtit rahiye, mai aapke pati ka case ladunga...pehle hame bail ke liye apply karna hoga
Priya: thank you Mr. Pathak
KD smiles: Mr. Pathak nahi KD, sirf KD πŸ˜‰
Priya smiles n goes from there while KD starts working on Ram's bail.
Priya reaches KM, she was feeling alone in her own home but the time was to put all emotions n feelings aside n work on the murder mystery.
"yeh koi chori toh hai nahi jo mai solve kardungi, kisi professional ki help leni hogi πŸ€£...par kiski? Usi ki help leti hoon", Priya thinks.
Priya calls someone and takes his appointment.
Next morning, Priya goes to meet that person.
"kis se milna hai aapko?", a man asks him.
"Freddie unhe andar aane do, wo mujhse milne aayi hai", another man replies.
Freddie allows Priya in, Priya smiles at that man n greets him, "hi Daya"
Daya smiles: hi Priya! Kaisi ho?
Priya: theek hoon aur tum?
Daya smiles: fit as always...andar chalo πŸ˜›
Daya takes Priya inside and introduces her as his college friend πŸ˜† and asks Priya to narrate whole story infront of everyone. After telling everything, ACP was asking some questions to Priya.
Abhijeet whispers to Daya: kabhi bataya nahi yaar tumne k koi khoobsurat ladki tumhari dost hai? πŸ˜†
Daya smiles: wo shaadi shuda hai aur teen bachon ki maa bhi πŸ˜ˆ
Abhijeet: phir bhi kitni khoobsurat hai πŸ˜³
Daya: uska pati business tycoon Ram Kapoor hai "The Ram Kapoor" πŸ˜‘
Abhijeet: pata hai mujhe, kash tumne mujhe is se pehle milaya hota toh aaj mai tumhara jiju hota ya wo tumhari bhabhi  πŸ€£
Daya: apne khwabon se bahar aao πŸ˜‘, case pe concentrate kare πŸ˜†
Abhijeet: bilkul...tumhari dost hai toh pehle isi ka case solve karenge πŸ˜‰
CID team leaves for KM with Priya.
At jail:
KD Ram ki bail karwane jail jaate hai
Constable to Ram: chaliye aapki bail hogayi hai
Ram was shocked, "meri bail? πŸ˜²"
Constable: haan aapki bail hogayi hai
Ram thinks, "itni jaldi meri bail hogayi πŸ˜² kamal hai lagta hai BT walo ne finally ek dhang ka, qualified aur intelligent rakh liya hai πŸ˜†"
Ram was eager to meet new BT lawyer.
KD smiles: hello Mr. Kapoor
Ram: hello...aap?
KD: kD...KD Pathak, aapka lawyer πŸ˜›
 Ram: pehle kabhi aapko BT land mai as lawyer nahi dekha πŸ€£
KD: mujhe aapki dharam patni ne aapka case diya hai 
Ram: thanks KD
KD: kafi samajhdar hai aapki patni aur aap se bahot prem karti hai πŸ˜³
Ram smirks: i know πŸ˜ˆ ...i need to go home 
KD: saath chalte hai, aapki patni se kuch discuss karna hai case k baare πŸ˜†
Ram: koi zaroorat nahi hai, jo bhi baat karni hai mujhse kariye πŸ˜‘...bye
"jisko dekho meri biwi ke peeche pada hua hai, πŸ˜‘ pehle Rajat aur ab yeh wakeel πŸ˜‘", Ram storms out of the ps.
Ram reaches KM but disappointed to know that Priya not home and no one knows about her whereabouts. Sid, Juhi n Mamaji were shocked to know that Ram was out of the jail so early. They couldn't believe that BT lawyers have become so efficient. πŸ€£
Just then Priya enters, she was happy to see Ram, she hugs him tightly but ACP interrupts, "Mrs. Kapoor romance baad mai karna, pehle case solve karle" πŸ˜†
Priya blushes: ji sir πŸ˜³
Priya introduces Ram with CID team n vice versa. Ram couldnt believe that Priya has approached CID for his case, "tumne inhe kyu bulaya πŸ˜² tum khud bhi case solve kar sakti thi  πŸ˜›remember wo haar ka case tumne hi solve kiya tha πŸ˜‰", Ram whispers.
Priya whispers: wo chori thi yeh murder case hai πŸ˜‘
ACP: batayie exactly kya hua? Jab goli lagi Sammy kahan khada tha?
Ram shows Sammy's position.
ACP: Freddie Sammy ki jagah khade hojao
Freddie: sir mai? 
ACP angrily: haan tum πŸ˜‘
Freddie stands at Sammy Position, ACP asks all family members to stand at their respective position to recreate scene.
Abhijeet sweetly: Priyaji aap kahan thi us waqt? πŸ˜³
ACP shouts: Abhijeet πŸ˜‘
Abhijeet: sir mai toh sirf puch raha tha 
Daya:  sab log maujood hai na yahan 
Vikram: Rajat nahi hai yahan
ACP: kya Rajat yahan tha party mai? πŸ˜²wo kya kar raha tha yahan? πŸ˜‘
Ram: pata nahi har 2 mahine mai show mai wapas aajata hai πŸ˜’ πŸ˜‘
ACP: Daya zara phone toh lagana Rajat ko, maine usey under cover cop banakar bheja tha toh wo party mai kyu aaya? Kyu? πŸ€£
(those who dont watch cid, rajat is name of cid police officer too πŸ˜†)
Ram: undercover cop! πŸ˜²
Everyone shouts in shock: undercover cop! πŸ˜²
Priya: undercover cop? πŸ˜²par Rajat sir toh writer hai πŸ˜•
ACP laughs: writer! Suna Abhijeet Rajat writer ban gaya hai πŸ˜†...CID kab chodi usne? πŸ˜‘
Vikram: mujhe lagta hai koi confusion hai, Rajat Kapur toh dubai mai rehte hai
Daya: sir Rajat toh Mumbai aaya hi nahi, yeh dusra Rajat lagta hai
ACP: investigation shuru karte hai
"aap logo ko kisi pe shak hai kya", Abhijeet asks everyone.
Ram: nahi
ACP: Pihu ji aap to biwi hai, kuch toh pata hoga aapko? πŸ˜†
Pihu cryingly: mujhe nahi pata k kis ne maara mere Sammy ko kisne maara πŸ˜­
Daya: kahin tumne toh nahi maara usey? 
Pihu: mai kyu marungi usey, infect(pihu style πŸ€£) mai toh us se pyar karti thi
Abhijeet: aur wo Suhani se, yeh baat tumse digest nahi hui hogi aur tumne maar diya usey
Pihu cryingly: i hv not killed him πŸ˜­
ACP: wo toh pata chal jayega
Daya: Sammy ki maut se sabse zyaada faida toh Kush ko hua hai
Kush: faida kahan nuksan hua hai mera πŸ˜­, is Suhani ko zindagi bhar jhelna hoga aur phir iska rona dhona πŸ˜” πŸ˜†
Abhijeet: haan yaar, isme mai toh koi faida nahi hai, kush ne nahi maara hoga  πŸ€£
Kush: wahi toh
ACP: Suhani ji aapko kuch kehna hai?
Suhani: mai kya kahu? Accha hua mar gaya πŸ˜†
ACP: Kahin tumne toh nahi maara usey?
Suhani: mai kyu marungi usey?
Daya: kyunki wo tumhare aur Kush k beech aaraha tha
ACP continues: wahi Kush jo is Kapoor empire ka eklota waris hai πŸ€£
Suhani: aap ke kehne ka kya matlab hai?
Daya: yehi k tumne property k liye Sammy ka khoon kardiya πŸ˜†
Suhani starts crying. Kush, "sir baaki sawal baad mai puchiye warna yeh ro rokar yahan flood la degi" πŸ€£ πŸ€£ πŸ€£
Abijeet questions mamaji, "aap kahan the mamaji"
mamaji: dekhiye daaroga ji, mai toh party sharty kar raha tha, mujhe kuch nahi pata ji" πŸ€£
Daya questions Sid, "aur aap?"
Sid: mai kyu khoon karunga kisi ka? Sammy ko dhamki bhai ne di thi πŸ˜•
Daya: pata chal jayega
ACP to Juhi: Juhi ji aap party se missing thi kuch waqt k liye, kuch kehna hai aapko?
Juhi fumbles: wo...mai washroom use karne gayi thi πŸ€£
ACP: kya family hai, kisi ko kuch nahi pata, koi baat nahi hum pata laga lenge
They recreate the scene again, investigate in every angle, collects evidence and sent them to Forensic lab.
Ram reveals that he removed the coat as he was feeling hot, may be kisi ne revolver nikali ho. Everyone's finger print were taken to match with FP of revolver. During whole investigation, Ram noticed that Abhijeet was extra sweet with his wife.
Ram: Priya mujhe lagta hai k ye Abhijeet tumhare saath
"flirt kar raha hai" πŸ˜†, Priya completes the sentence.
Ram: tumhe pata hai phir bhi usey entertain kar rahi ho πŸ˜’
Priya: chill Mr. Kapoor, wo apni girlfriend ko jealour karne k liye kar raha hai πŸ˜‰
Ram: girlfriend? πŸ˜²
Priya: Tarika...dr. Tarika, wo forensic dr jo dr. Salunkhe k saath kaam karti hai πŸ˜›...maine kitni bar kaha aapse k CID dekhiye but aapko business news se fursat mile tab dekhe na πŸ˜‘ πŸ€£
Ram: haan theek hai rehne do πŸ˜†
Abhijeet joins them, "Priyaji aap pareshan lag rahi hai, any problem?"
Priya: nahi toh
Abhijeet: aap chahe toh mujhse share kar sakti ho 
Ram: tumhare saath kyu share karegi, uska pati hai uske saath πŸ˜‘
Before Abhijeet could reply, Daya takes him as they have got some detais.
After Abhijeet left, Ram asks, "yeh log  kab jayenge yahan se?" πŸ˜‘
Priya: case solve hone k baad πŸ˜†
Ram irritatedly: yeh Sammy ko mera hi ghar mila tha marne k liye πŸ˜‘
Priya: khana hi tha toh khana kha leta, goli kyu khayi πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†
Ram: goli khani thi toh Dispirin khata ya Crocin, bullet kyu khayi πŸ˜‘ πŸ€£
Inspector Poorvi shares her investigations with everyone. She reveals that Juhi took care of KM n RaYa kids when Priya was in coma. Priya k coma se bahar aane k baad how everyone neglected Juhi, then out of envy n hatred how Juhi ousted Priya out of KM n how Ram bought Priya back.
ACP:kuch samajh aaya Daya πŸ€£
Daya: haan sir, Juhi Ram se bahot pyar karti hai πŸ˜†
Abhijeet: aur isiliye usne yeh sab kiya
Dr. Salunkhe enters, "boss khooni ka pata chal gaya"
Abhijeet: kaun hai khooni?
"tumhi dekhlo", dr hands over the report to him.
Everyone was eager to know the murderer. Sid n Juhi tries to run away but Daya n Poorvi catches them n slaps them. (cid mai slap karne pe hi  jurm accept karte hai na πŸ€£ πŸ€£)
ACP: kyu maara Sammy ko πŸ˜‘
Juhi: Sid k kehne par... Sid ne kaha tha Sammy ke khoon ka ilzam Priya pe aayega aur Ram mere hojayenge πŸ˜³...agar mujhe pata hota k ilzam Ram pe aayega toh mai aisa kabhi nahi karti πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­
Sid: bhai ne hamesha mujhe haraya toh maine bhai ko hamesha k liye harane ka plan banaya but is Juhi ne gadbad kardi πŸ˜‘ πŸ˜‘
ACP: jail mai baitkar Planning karte rehna phansi ka order aane tak πŸ€£
Rahul: correction sir πŸ€£
Daya: kaisa correction? πŸ˜•
Rahul: abhi hospital se phone aaya tha, Sammy zinda hai πŸ˜†
Whole CID team was shocked πŸ˜² πŸ˜² . 
ACP: kuch toh gadbad hai Daya πŸ€£
Abhijeet: mara hua insan aise kaise zinda hosakta hai πŸ˜²πŸ€£
BALH cast replies in unison, "yeh BT show hai sir, yahan kuch bhi hosakta hai" πŸ˜‰ πŸ€£ πŸ€£
Chalo finally case solve hogaya πŸ˜†. Yeh tym pass karne k liye likha hai maine πŸ€£, i hope everyone had good tym pass.  πŸ€£
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Posted: 10 years ago
🀣 πŸ€£ πŸ€£
aapko ise ideas aate kaise????? πŸ€£ πŸ€£
seriously...
KD bchra... srf bail deke chalagya...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 
and srf hindi use hua... πŸ€£

CID team... πŸ€£
daya ki college frnd priya... lol... this is awesome... πŸ€£ πŸ€£

abhijeet...tarika...priya... πŸ€£
ram jealous... πŸ˜† 

freddie..as always... πŸ€£
sab use hi gunpoint banate hain... πŸ€£

rajat undercover cop... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

daya ke thappad k bina... kabhi cid khatam hi nhi hota... πŸ€£ πŸ€£


thnx fr the pm... πŸ˜†
for this super good os... πŸ€£
Edited by chillpc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
🀣🀣🀣
Superb !!! IT WAS THE LIMITπŸ˜†
Priya daya ki college friendπŸ˜† And abijeet flerting with priyaπŸ˜†
BALH in KD and CID version was throughly entertaining🀣
loved it❀️
And thanks 4 pm!!!Edited by .pia_12. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely & Funny OS Dear πŸ˜Š
Awesome always Priya be Ram in his odd time 

Priya & KD conversation is superb

Abhijeeth & Daya's conversation is very funny πŸ˜›

Ram grew jealous on KD πŸ€£

ACP always Rocks πŸ˜‰

CID team scenes are very funny, I think Abhijeeth only flirt with Tarika.
But Here He Flirt with Priya. If Tarika know this πŸ€£

Rajath name confusion is very funny scene πŸ˜†

Wow! Ram noticed that Abhijeeth flirt with Priya πŸ€£

CID team solve the case successfully I like the twist dear BT walli πŸ€£ 

I enjoyed OS a lot πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by RosiNishaN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am laughing throughout the story while reading..its hilarious...🀣
TQ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arre thappad k baad sid aur juhi seedha CID k jail mmgirne chahiye na🀣, daya k thappad se bhi koi bach saka hai bhala🀣 oye abhijit se tarika sambhali nhi jaati,  priya ko kya sambhalega🀣  mr kapoor ko apni case se zyada apni biwi ko abhi jeet flirt kar rha hai, is ki chintaa hai🀣 hey ram aise situation me bhi itni posessiveπŸ˜† waise posessive pati ram priya ko aur Hume bade acche laggte hai,  aur priya ko apni value dikhane ka ek aur muaka mil gya🀣 biwiyoan ko apne pati se pampering karwa lena bahot accha laggta hai🀣
OYE KD ka saara smartness waste hogya, sirf apni shuddh hindi me vartaalaap karke , bail deke chale gye.🀣
Freddie bechare ko tumne firse gun point pe rakh diya🀣 har koi usse khada kar deta hai.  Lol. Ye daya aur abhijit bhi na kitne ladkiyoan ko flirt karenge, ek ko toh propose kare,  courage ram kapoor se udhar lene ko bolo,  lol. Unki biwi agar aur zyada flirt karega toh rambabu baith jaayenge abhi jeet pe🀣 arre tumne daya ko priya ka classmate bana daala, daya kitna blush kar rha tha itni sundar dost hai aur darr darr kblush karta hai toh aur maza aata hai. πŸ€£ Kyunki she the ram Kapoor's wife darr na to padta hai

Raya toh jaise sentence continuation ki game khel rhe the mara toh mara , par mere ghar me kyun mara,  kahia arr nhi Mar sakta tha, n then kuch aur khaa leta, hey bhgwan mauka mila nhi khusur phusur mein bhi mohabbat  πŸ€£

awesome hai, haan I know rajjo undercover cop of CID,  lekin tumne sandhya k rajjo ko koi dialogue nhi di, tumhari k hair nhi ab🀣 
Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: .pia_12.

🀣🀣🀣
Superb !!! IT WAS THE LIMITπŸ˜†
Priya daya ki college friendπŸ˜† And abijeet flerting with priyaπŸ˜†
BALH in KD and CID version was throughly entertaining🀣
loved it❀️
And thanks 4 pm!!!

itna has rahi ho πŸ€£
how i wish k show mai sach mai kd aur cid aaye so that case sahi tareeke se solve hojaye πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: RosiNishaN

Lovely & Funny OS Dear πŸ˜Š

Awesome always Priya be Ram in his odd time 

Priya & KD conversation is superb

Abhijeeth & Daya's conversation is very funny πŸ˜›

Ram grew jealous on KD πŸ€£

ACP always Rocks πŸ˜‰

CID team scenes are very funny, I think Abhijeeth only flirt with Tarika.
But Here He Flirt with Priya. If Tarika know this πŸ€£

Rajath name confusion is very funny scene πŸ˜†

Wow! Ram noticed that Abhijeeth flirt with Priya πŸ€£

CID team solve the case successfully I like the twist dear BT walli πŸ€£ 

I enjoyed OS a lot πŸ˜ƒ

tarika will kil him with her taunts πŸ€£
i love rajat of cid , so usey kaise bhi include karna tha πŸ˜†
you are welcome πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: itsmeg3

I am laughing throughout the story while reading..its hilarious...🀣

TQ

keep laughing πŸ€£
likhte waqt mujhe bhi hasi aayi πŸ€£
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: bpatil3

Arre thappad k baad sid aur juhi seedha CID k jail mmgirne chahiye na🀣, daya k thappad se bhi koi bach saka hai bhala🀣 oye abhijit se tarika sambhali nhi jaati,  priya ko kya sambhalega🀣  mr kapoor ko apni case se zyada apni biwi ko abhi jeet flirt kar rha hai, is ki chintaa hai🀣 hey ram aise situation me bhi itni posessiveπŸ˜† waise posessive pati ram priya ko aur Hume bade acche laggte hai,  aur priya ko apni value dikhane ka ek aur muaka mil gya🀣 biwiyoan ko apne pati se pampering karwa lena bahot accha laggta hai🀣

OYE KD ka saara smartness waste hogya, sirf apni shuddh hindi me vartaalaap karke , bail deke chale gye.🀣
Freddie bechare ko tumne firse gun point pe rakh diya🀣 har koi usse khada kar deta hai.  Lol. Ye daya aur abhijit bhi na kitne ladkiyoan ko flirt karenge, ek ko toh propose kare,  courage ram kapoor se udhar lene ko bolo,  lol. Unki biwi agar aur zyada flirt karega toh rambabu baith jaayenge abhi jeet pe🀣 arre tumne daya ko priya ka classmate bana daala, daya kitna blush kar rha tha itni sundar dost hai aur darr darr kblush karta hai toh aur maza aata hai. πŸ€£ Kyunki she the ram Kapoor's wife darr na to padta hai

Raya toh jaise sentence continuation ki game khel rhe the mara toh mara , par mere ghar me kyun mara,  kahia arr nhi Mar sakta tha, n then kuch aur khaa leta, hey bhgwan mauka mila nhi khusur phusur mein bhi mohabbat  πŸ€£

awesome hai, haan I know rajjo undercover cop of CID,  lekin tumne sandhya k rajjo ko koi dialogue nhi di, tumhari k hair nhi ab🀣 

attempt to murder ke case mai ander gaye dono πŸ€£
kitni difficulty huyi KD ka part likhne mai πŸ˜†...mai koi ek language mai baat nhi karti...mixture of hindi, urdu, english πŸ€£
biwi toh kaise bhi bacha lei unhe toh case ki kyu fikr kare πŸ˜‰ biwi ki toh karni padegi πŸ€£
cid mai hamesha wahi gun point pe hota hai na toh yahan bhi usey rakha πŸ˜†
samne itni khubsurat ladki khadi hai toh koi bhi blush karega na πŸ˜‰ upar se agar dost ho toh πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
i so want to see daya n abhijeet settled in the cid πŸ€£ atleast abhijeet aur tarika ki toh shaadi karwa de cid wale πŸ€£
i like the way abhijeet flirts πŸ˜‰ tarika k aane se pehle wo victims k relatives se bhi flirt karta tha πŸ˜†
i watch cid for abhijeet only πŸ˜† but ab saare acche lagte hai πŸ˜†
sandy ka rajat toh ipl mai busy hai na πŸ€£ waise aj pink shirt aur black coat mai bada accha lag raha hai πŸ€£