Originally posted by: arshi_r_da_bst.
its a very nice concept and u write very well. go ahead.. π
Thank you, dear...glad you liked the concept...will continue soon..
Originally posted by: chotidesi
If you hadn't mentioned it, I would not have guessed that you are a first time writer! I love this- I hope you continue, because I'd like to see Rudra's reaction to a Paro that wants to give herself to him, entirely. I like the way you portrayed her uncertainty, her want to be loved- I think that's very deeply rooted in her character. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you- welcome!
Aww...thats sooo sweet of youπ³ YES! Rudra will grace his presence in next update ...thanks or the warm welcomeπ
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