Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 26) - Page 57

Wow! You have brought out the emotions of the situation so beautifully. What an amazing write up.

god i m in shock...

cant believe t happened...

mind blowing update..

i just hope khushi is not too hurt.. physically AND emotionally...

its high time Arnav look at things from her perspective..

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please please update soon..

My second comment today..

O gosh this update was hilarous one ... aslike grounds just slippd dwn frm my down...

I was in mid thinking can this be more bad luck to her that his hubby had wrong tyming..
bt yaa her life too made her at bad luck...

Khushi always was giving to his demands but for the first tym she was taking her stand to make bth of them specially her man to realise wat actually dey need in their relation ... a break or sme good amount of work togthr to gt ovr their insecurities and their falls... more of i say arnav's insecurities and his cowardness to run frm the situation at tyms...wen it was his chance to take his own stand and confront the situation...

And to her action evn the stone was at melting point to start but the frames of his tyming didnt.match with the circumstances tht i say rishabh created or were actually destined accordingly to the situation...

I was always thinking pity of rishabh tht he was a good man ... and had to lose his love...
bt today many things about his character were curtained downd .. first of a tht he too thought of her limbness... evn.wen he was nt mature and later he decided tat it was nthing cmpare to his love... bt who knws smeday he may feel like ashamed of her limbness .. as this thought striked his mind once then it can be at home any tym in future which could have spoild their relation.. while arnav nvr mattered about her limbness .. or say he nvr cnsidrd it in btwn the way to interrupt his determination to gt her.. this is the best part of arnav i am attracted to.

Rishabh nw acted totally as a fool .. he i guess evn ruind his frdshp .. as by acting so worst to shw up her husband who smetym act the worst of all in weak situations..
may be he to knw frm the hotel incident and may be to shw him that khushi loved him as his first crush or eithr first love will also give him a ground to shw this raizada .. as Arnav showd him bt marrying her...so evn its a kinf of small revenge or to shw up Arnav .. bt he really damaged a l alot..

May be khushi still dnt hate rishabh as m just a reader so i am nt connected to rishabh as a person or frd just as a mere character bt he was khushi's best frd and a frf like her can nvr make this out of her frdshp to break at going this weak... may be its nt Rishabh's fault as Arnav may in future too have too face him... so till hw long can he let his insecurities play on his part and keep his relation with his wife on stack..
bt to all this who was the scrapgoat ... poor khushi...

She was devoided by him always as wen related to his past and today just her words about her mothr pinched him wrong that he turnd her entire love to sme sort of pity.. on him as a gratitude to his fathr.
Not evn words can hurt a woman to this extent that a man's rejection...
She was lost in her track hw he just evn decided to end up the marriage...

But if i see nw comes the golden chance evn in the worst situation to him to come out of his insecurities and to beleive his lady who evn didnt think a while to end her life on his rejection..

Nw i beleive arnav can gt out of his insecurities... as this one incident was totally a game changer... bt hope its nt too late as he has hurt khushi to the deepest of her core and nw expecting her back the same love as showing that he was a fool may or may nt can make khushi to fall for him again.. as she is nw broken..
His words harmd her more than the wounds of the accident.

Nw its Arnav's tym to repend and to shw up her that he too need her in his life if not out of love than atleast for his existence...

It was so very well pennd as u said it was totally unexpected and i evn feel bad for khushi bt still i am taking it positively and nw y my gut feeling says that its tym for Arnav to turn positive in this relation and take a lead ... in deciding their past...

I am kaayal of ur writing.. its a fantastic piece of story that u have writtn down and to say a very well sketching of emotions of humans..
I am well amused as always to read that hw much perfection u put in evry update to give it a life.. its just perfection personified..

The way u use synonyms to words that are nt actually the synonyms bt give a diff touch to the updates...
Its always a wndrful wndrful experience to read a writer like u..

At last but nt the least thanks for the evry PM u send evn its for update or the gratitude towards our cmnts[evn they are foolish many a tyms] . This really shows he much u care for ur readers..

P.S. Hope nw we gt the nxt update soon... as nw the story is at such point that m gtng restless... with this wait.

Its gonna be turning point in arnav's life... What will he do now... I felt bad 4 khushi she tries to not hurt anyone but situation always against her.. U wrote it beautifully... I just love it...

Please tell me the next update is around the corner!! I dont think I can wait much longer to know what happens next.

Felt sooo sorry for Khushi ..
Beautifully written ... Am so moved ..
Desperately waiting for next update.

This update really made me sad..
i m sad for khushi's bad luck..
i m sad for arnav's past which bring him to the edge of loosing a bright future with khushi..
please update soon.

Awesome update poor Khushi hope she is ok. Hopefully this accident will make Arnav realise just how important she is too him. I really wish he could trust her more. Rishab really needs to leave her alone now, he just causes her more problems. Plus its his own fault he lost Khushi not making a move earlier because of her limp.