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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
unres


very nicely written 
perfect update
the eyelock 
great 
continue soon
and thanks for the PM dear!!!
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
hey anu
just read this part and i would like to say that i am in love with this story
you describe manvi's emotions n her pain very well
principal's office scene was fab!!!!!!!! aww everyone cares for her too much even peon too πŸ˜†
ahan virat is already in love haan😳
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
loved it
karan's dad s the princi rite?
y karan left manvi..
is he dead???
hope fr virman's new relationship
nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
it was an awesome update di
loved it
princi is karan's dad...
love the scene between princi mahesh and viren
virat is in love with her
virman first eyelock was the perfect scene of this update
but what happened to karan???
where he is
overall an wonderful update
good going waiting for the story to proceed
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Superb Update dear...loved it..
Love virat 's drooling over manvi part...he is tooo crazy...
Feel sad for manvi. ...she suffered alot in past..
Wd virman scene also egrly waiting for manvi n karan 's revelation part..
Love viren's care for manvi. ..
Outstanding update. ..
Thanks alot for pm dea. ..
Keep rocking

Continue soon. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

                      Part 3


                             Karan Singhania

 

Jeevika: Mannu gud afternoon. How was ur day?

Manvi: Gudmorning babhi. How is Adi? Is he alright?

Jeevika: Mannu, he is fine nd now he is sleeping.  Mannu I asked u a question nd u didn't give any reply.

Manvi: Babhi, first I will check adi nd then we can talk.

Jeevika: But mannu, oh god she has gone. Virenji wat we will do if Mannu react like this way. She want to concentrate on her studies naa .

Viren: I know Jeevika but we can't do any thing. Today I saw her pain , her fear. And  I am helpless infront of  my princess my mannu. I am really helpless.

Jeevika: U know wat viren we have no kids nd we will not have but that didn't hurt me a little but now Mannu's  condition is hurting me viren.

Viren: Yes I  know jeevika she nd I have 15 years difference nd not papa I teached her to speak, laugh nd walk, but now I don't know how to make her happy.

Jeevika:  I know viren but my mind is saying that some miracle is going to happen .

Inside manvi's room,

Manvi: Adi my baby, my baby mamma missed u baby nd I know my baby is also missed mamma.

Adi loves his mother's cute gusters nd her sweet sound. By hearing his mamma's sound he woke up nd growled to attain his mamma's attention.

Manvi: Oh my adi wake up that' my boy. Don't cry ok I know my prince missed mamma nd look papa( pointing towards his picture) he also missed u baby. Hey look why he is laughing at us. I think he is making fun of our bond. But don't worry baby mamma nd my adi together can punish papa naa.

Hearing her sweet magical sound Adi started to laugh softly with his two three  teethed mouth.

Jeevika: Mannu u didn't freshened up yet. Viren nd papa id waiting for u.

(Manvi is calling viren as dada becos for manvi viren is her father nd vice versa)

Jeevika: Lao Adi ko nd u go and freshen up. I will take him.

With this statement Manvi moved back nd fear come across her face nd  jeevika noticed it.

Manvi: Na babhi first I will eat nd then I will freshen up.

Jeevika: But Mannu...

Manvi: No buts babhi...

IN DINING HALL

Papa: Mannu lao Adi ko I will feed him today.

Manvi: No papa I will nd he is sleepy too nd he will cry . OK I am over nd gudnite dada.

Viren: Gudnite Mannu.

Papa: Ye Manvi ko kya hua? Why she is behaving strange.

Jeevika: Papa actually Mannu really missed Adi today nd her fear is engulfing her thoughts.

Viren: oh my god. I can't see my   Mannu like this. I f I can I will bring Karan from anywhere he is hiding but I can't.

Papa: Relax beta. She will be alright nd this was her first day naa without Adi. That's why

Jeevika: Ha and I know some one will come who has the power to remove all the past nd live a pleasant future nd present withour Mannu.

Otherside,

Virat: Yes I am the one for her nd she is mine.

Arjun: But Virat she is really a strange girl nd not at all ur types. But she is really beautiful but her character nd ur are not same.

Virat: As u know so many girls preposed me but I denyed all of them becoz I want to give my body nd soul to my love as pure as possible nd now I find my true love nd I will not let her go from me. I will die for her. That only I know now.

Rahul: Are u mad Virat?

Virat: Yes I am for MANVI only fir Manvi

Arjun: Yes then let's start the mission

Virat: Mission?

Rahul: haa baba I love u manvi mission.

Virat: Yes nd tomarrow I will take a step a step to Manvi

In manvi's room,

Manvi: Arey adi why are u not sleeping yet baby. I know u are missing papa. So wat he will sing for u naa baby,

Manvi switched on the projector on her room nd there karan starts to sing a lullaby for manvi nd for Manvi at her 5th month pregnancy.

By hearing yhis both mamma nd son went to deep sleep without knowing wat their fate store for them.

Bye

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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Lovely update dear
Felt bad for manvi
Waiting for mission manvi
N karan where he gone or is he dead
Waiting ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
nice update manvi is missing karan so
much and staying one day way from her
son she scare and other side virat is
totally mad for manvi update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
nice update dear loved it!!!!
continue soon!!!
thanks for the PM😊
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Manvi is too alone... missing karan... :(
She has bcum too protective abt adi which is quite obvious...
But this virat sounds like a girl... a girl who believes in fairy tales n a prince in white horse... πŸ˜†