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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
commenting only for u di
its an awesome update
manvi missing karan
but where he is and what happened with him???
aww manvi was scared when she was not with adi feels for her
loved that virat part he is totally mad
waiting for the manvi mission
loved that mom and son bond
waiting to see how this story proceed and waiting for virman meeting and virman bond
want happiness in manvi life now
overall an cute update
please continue soon asap u know na that I can't control
sorry if I will not comment in next part u know the reason but it does not mean that I am not reading it
update soon
tc
luv u di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Outstanding update dear. ..loved it. .
Feel sad for manvi. ..The way she react after coming from college. .its sooo emotional n sady...
Love virika's concern for manvi. ..
Other side virat part was amazing. .
he is totally became manvi's lover... Evenhe can die for manvi. ..interesting. .Egrly waiting for next chapter. ...
Plzzz continue soon. ..
Thanks alot for pm dea. ...
Keep rocking
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Super update anu..!!
Wats this karan's mystry n manvi ka fear...!!!
Loved manvi adi bond..

Virats mission waiting for it .

Update super soonnn...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
its an awesome update
manvi missing karan
but where he is and what happened with him???
aww manvi was scared when she was not with adi feels for her
loved that virat part he is totally mad
waiting for the manvi mission
loved that mom and son bond
update soon dear
waiting fr manvi i love youu mission
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
lovely update annd very painful
aww manvi is missing karan
and its confusing me that why she is behaving in that way n from whom she is so much scared
thanks for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Loved it..
Too good yaar..
Feel really sad for Manvi..
Love Manvi and Adi bonding..
Love how the family is concern for Manvi...
Hope that the mission start soon..
Update soon..
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
part 1

awesome
loved it
who is karan ... Is he dead
manvi having a son
and virat fell in love with manvi in first sight
nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome update
felt bad for manvi
virat and his friends gang is nice
waiting for I love you manvi mission
continue soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome update
felt bad for manvi
virat and his friends gang is nice
waiting for I love you manvi mission
continue soon
plz pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

PART 4

IN COLLEGE,

Teacher: Goodmorning students

Students: Goodmorning maam

Teacher: Here is an announcement for u all. We have a project to submit on next weak and it's a team wise project. So in every group their should be two members nd I made a list nd all students must check the list now it'self.

Students: Sure maam

Virat: Who will be my partner oh god I want Manvi as my partner.

Meera: Me nd misha are the partners.

Misha: Oh that's fine. We can have lots of fine then

Rahul: Oh shit

Virat: What happened Rahul?

Rahul: U look by urself with whom Manvi's name is.

Virat: With whom yaar...

Rahul: Arey with Arjun yaar...

Virat: Kya? With Arjun...

Arjun: What? Manvi and me. That's nice.

Virat: I will kill u Arjun.

Arjun: I mean me nd my bhabhi in one team.

Virat: Oh in that way, that's good for you.

OTHERSIDE,

Manvi: Shika, Who is this Arjun?

Shika: U don't know Arjun, Arjun is from Virat's group nd they are very famous in college .

Manvi: Ok shika I will be back in 10 mints ok.

Shika: Ok Manvi take your time.

Manvi: Ramu Kaka (Peon)

R.Kaka: Haa mannu beta Kya hua?

Manvi: I want to ask u about ... Nahi kaka nothing.

R.kaka: I know mannu beta what are u asking about. He is fine nd he is missing u a lot. I think he will be with you after some days.

Manvi: Thankyou kaka for understanding me. Kaka tomarrow u please come to house nd u can meet Adi too naa

R.kaka: Sure beta nd god bless u dear.

Manvi: Bye kaka

NEXT HOUR,

Teacher: So students u all get your partners naa. Then for next hrs u r free to discuss about ur works.

Meera: Arjun, So go nd rock it. As you know Virat's life is in your hands now.

Arjun: Ok Meera, I know nd for Virat I can do anything.

Virat: That's so sweet of yoy mera bhai.

Arjun: After u get your love don't forget us ok.

Virat: Ummm I want to think about it haha

Rahul: Oh, let it be...

Misha: So friends we are starting our mission I love u MANVI' mission.

All: Yes

GROUP DISCUSSOIN

Arjun: Hi Manvi, I am your partner in this project.

Manvi: So you are Arjun.

Arjun: Yes I am

Manvi: Ok then let's start the discussion .

Arjun: Arrey u are a superfast. Now only we met and for discussion we have long one weak and now we can talk something else naa.

Manvi: Something else means...

Arjun: Oh don't misunderstand me I mean let's talk about our families friends etc etc.

Manvi: Ok so you start.

Arjun: No ladies first

Manvi: Ok as u know I am Manvi Singhania nd Shika my only friend here.

Arjun: Why Shika only anyways I an Aarjun Ramraj nd we are five friends here nd we are popular here for our friendship.

Manvi remembers about her friends in past nd how they known foe their naughtiness in college. Manvi was a cute nd bubbly girl before Karan's death. But Arjun's talks nd actions lead her memories to her beautiful past nd she likes Arjun's company too but in her heart only one is their nd that is Karan.

Arjun: So that's about me nd let's start

Manvi: Yeah let's start our work.

BREAK,

Arjun and Manvi become friends and Arjun insist Manvi to meet his friends .And Manvi also agreed .

Arjun: Manvi these are my friends , Friends this is Manvi

All : Hi Manvi,

Manvi: Hi

Arjun: This is Rahul, Misha. Meer and this is

Virat: I am Virat...

When Manvi look Virat she felt a strange feeling as she feels with Karan but she ignore it.

Shika: Hey Manvi; Where were you I searched you in whole college.

Manvi: Oh sorry Shika I am really sorry.

Shika: That' no problem Manvi by the way why are you here with them.

Meera: Why shika now on wards Manvi is with us. She become our friend nd if you want u can also join us.

Shika: Oh that;s nice nd why not .

Rahul: That's good.

Virat is in his own world with Manvi and he is continuously staring at Manvi and Manvi feel little uncomfortable and Arjun noticed it too.

Arjun: Virat, We can go to canteen naa and let's have a party.

Virat: Yes why not nd today is a beautiful day also.

Meera: So let's go guys.

Manvi: No you can go nd enjoy.

Arjun : Why Manvi, Actually this party is for you only.

Virat: Yes for me I mean for us.

Manvi: No please try to understand, anyways bhai will also come now to pick me nd I have some important works too.

So I am sorry

All: No need for sorry nd bye

Manvi: Bye

Virat: Bye Manvi only my Manvi(whisper)

Bye

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