virman ff Pain vs love part 15(on page43)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PAIN VS LOVE

Hi ,

I am starting a new story with new hopes. Hope u will enjoy

PROLOGUE

White, colour of peace but for her it's a colour of hiding her all sweet memories and happiness. She is cherishing her memory by wearing white colour. Actually she don't want to live her life till few months back.

But now she want to live her life to fulfill his dreams and to love her gift who is given by him.

Let's see what changes will happen to her while fulfilling his dreams for her...

Hope you all like it. Give ur valuable comments both likes and dislikes.

INDEX

PART 1 : PAGE 1

PART 2 : PAGE 5

PART 3 : PAGE 7

PART 4 : PAGE 9

PART 5: PAGE 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-hazaaron-mein-meri-behna-hain/3985520/virman-ff-pain-vs-love-part-15-on-page43?pn=12">part6

PART 7:PAGE 15

part 8:page 18

part 9:page 23

part 10:page30

part11:page 30

part 12:page 34

part13:page 37

part14:page 41

Part15:page 43

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priya_nishal thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue dear
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aweesome concept..
Update soon..
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome pprologue

waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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FEAR NOTHING. FEAR ONLY TO DO WRONG

PAIN VS LOVE

PART 1

Girl: Karan , I am going. Going to fulfill ur wish, our dream to be a doctor. But I am afraid. I am afraid without u. I can't even breath without u. I am incomplete without u Karan. Please come back to me. I know u r with me. But I am afraid . I can't go back to college without u. I want u be my side. Oh karan please be on my side always. See how I am looking? I don't know I will face the situations and all. But I will go for u and for our baby. Hey look Adi, how he is smiling by seeing u. His smile is exactly like u. Oh look at the time. Papa will be waiting for me. I am going love u. please be with me.

Papa: Mannu r u ready?

Manvi: Ha papa . I m ready.

Viren: Today my little sister is looking beautiful.

Papa: Ha ya right. Both of u . M y daughter nd my daughter's son also. Come to me adi.( Adi is only of 7 months nd son of manvi)

Manvi: Where is jeevika babhi.

Viren: She is in kitchen.

Manvi: Then I will go and see her.

Viren:ok u go and we will play with this little brat.

Manvi: Babhi...

Jeevika: Haa mannu. Tell me.

Manvi:( Emotionally hugs jeevika) Babhi take care of my Adi. I don't want to go without him. But I can't take him. Please babhi..

Jeevika: Mannu what r u telling . he is my son too. I will take care of him. Wat happened to u suddenly.

Manvi: I don't know , I am afraid. I don't want to go away from him . I am afraid of losing him babhi.

Jeevika: Hey mannu, look at me dear u r only going away from him for just 4 hrs. then what is the problem None will take him from u. This is my promise. Mannu we all Know what all happened. So forget it nd enjoy ur life like our old mannu. I don't want this mannu. Actually no one want.

Manvi: Bit I can't be ur old Mannu. She is dead. Dead without Karan.

Jeevika: Mannu wat r usaying.

Manvi: Truth . Now I am only living for our son. My son adi.

Viren: Mannu... Come

Jeevika: Viren is calling. Come let's go.

Manvi: Babhi; PLEASE TAKE CARE OF HIM .( Manvi kissed on Adi's cheek and he smiles)

Jeevika take adi from Viren's hand and bid goodbye to Manvi nd Viren nd papa.

Jeevika: God please help my mannu to forget her past and to complete her life.

IN COLLEGE:

Rahul: Goodmorning to all. Oye where is our hero.

Arjun: Our hero will enter in correct time.

Misha: Hey do u know

Arjun:I don't know.

Misha: Oh shutup, Today a new student will join or class. I think he or she may be a V.I.P.

Meera: Why?

Misha: Becoz every teachers r talking about the student.

Arjun: Is the new one boy or girl.

Misha: Don't know.

Meera: He look our hero come...

Rahul: wat r u searching for ur girl friend.

Virat: Wat a wired combination. Virat and girlfriends.

Rahul: Omg What a waste friend I have. A friend without girlfriends.

Meera: Shut up, Virat why r u not interested in girls.

Virat: very simple question. These girls r not my type.

Meantime a car entered in the compound.

Virat: I want to see my girl in pure white for the first time.

Here manvi came out of the car and virat see her and lost in her beauty.

Virat: Her eyes have full of purity and she wants to be kind hearted who likes ti help others and absorbs other's pain.

He points his fingures to manvi and said

Virat: and she is my princess

A

Friends: What,

Arjun: 8th wonder. Our hero is in love and that also love at first sight. Intresting

Meanwhile a girl came and fall infront of manvi. Manvi help her to stand and walk.

Girl: Thanku for helping me and my name is Shika.

Manvi: Shika no mention please. My name is manvi and he is my father Dr Mahesh and My brother Viren.

Actually manvi was in another world, in the world of Karan. Shika's words interrupted her from her thoughts.

Manvi( in mind): Karan, Be with me.

Meanwhile on other side,

Virat: so ms manvi, Be ready to face my love , virat's love for u.

Bye

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res...
Unres...

Firstly ,congratulations Anu for start of ur story...!!!

Cumung to the update...
Nice one...
Whats this with karan... Whoz he ??

N virat.. Liked manvi at first look... 😳

thanks for pm
n continue soonnn...
Edited by little_angle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous... Just amazing...
Very interesting...
Good job...
Loking frwd to it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres 😊
first of all congratz di for a new story👏
so this is a suprise i guess
u starting second story that's wonderful
u going to be an awesome writer i know that
ok now about the story and this update
the first part was awesome
omg manvi doctor 😉
love the way u write it
but who is that karan and what happened to him...
virat falls in love with manvi at first sight that's nice
waiting how the story proceed
the story idea is so nice and love the tiltle
my all wishes are with u
i know people will definately going to appreciate your talent di
and sorry in advance as i don't know whether i will comment on the nxt part but still eager to know about the nxt part will definately tried to give a long wala comment
please continue soon and thanks for pm
luv u🤗



Edited by Cute_Meenal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wohooo a new story!!!!!
very nice
loved it
thanks for the PM
continue soon
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Prologue seems interesting
Manvi hv a child nd wht abt karan
Virat fall 4 manvi...
Love at first sight...
Do cont soon

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