Loving You | ArHi SS Part 4 + Thank You Note COMPLETED (13/05) - Page 6

Very intriguing start . Curious to know what happens next / what is happening !

Originally posted by: tinkleby

Hey,

It was amazing!! When I started reading I expected it to be anything other than a marriage proposal scene!

I loved the way you wrote their emotions and turmoil so beautifully. Can't wait to read and see how things are be going forward.

 

A very well written piece indeed!

Originally posted by: LadyR

Love it! The wrath of Khushi is about to descend upon Arnav. The lyrics from the song by passenger come to mind, " you only know you love her, when she's gone" 

Updated really really soon, if you can, please!

Originally posted by: jg12

Very intriguing start . Curious to know what happens next / what is happening !

Originally posted by: bhaktiii

V interesting

Oh! You're back! Am I dreaming?
Wow..That was beautifully written. A simple decision changes everything, doesn't it? But sometimes it wouldn't make a difference and life would continue as it was. Other times it has the power to ruin everything, completely destroying relationships. Their is as complicated as a straight line:) And I would love to witness it's transition to a much simple form..Keep writing!

"Real love is always chaotic. You lose control; you lose perspective. You lose the ability to protect yourself. The greater the love, the greater the chaos. It's a given and that's the secret."
- Jonathan Carroll

Thats a beautiful start.. Khushi's marriage being fixed.. And she wants Arnav to do something for her, for them.. And all she gets is "Congratulations" from him.. Can understand what she must have gone thru..🥺

Soulful! You made their pain amid all the happiness, probably superficial, (after all on a wedding announcement not all the guests are truly happy for you, they just wish you for the sake of it) so vivid. And then his supreme jibe! He could never speak freely and then chooses this, I saw a burdened, pained yet strong Khushi. Why dear?? Why it had to be so painful and melancholy? 

Originally posted by: Sarikaa97

Oh! You're back! Am I dreaming?
Wow..That was beautifully written. A simple decision changes everything, doesn't it? But sometimes it wouldn't make a difference and life would continue as it was. Other times it has the power to ruin everything, completely destroying relationships. Their is as complicated as a straight line:) And I would love to witness it's transition to a much simple form..Keep writing!

"Real love is always chaotic. You lose control; you lose perspective. You lose the ability to protect yourself. The greater the love, the greater the chaos. It's a given and that's the secret."
- Jonathan Carroll

Originally posted by: mishti_17

Thats a beautiful start.. Khushi's marriage being fixed.. And she wants Arnav to do something for her, for them.. And all she gets is "Congratulations" from him.. Can understand what she must have gone thru..🥺