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The intensity of the emotions you portray is amazing- I love how deeply you've made him feel her absence, how you've made him long for her warmth again. It's refreshing. In order to understand her value, she needs to pull away- and that's exactly what you've portrayed.

I hope to see this much angst in the show someday. These days it has become comedy central. There has to be more angst. He has married his mother's protege and he knows it. All her dreams have shattered because of him. She's been humiliated and she still stands there with stars in her eyes. Unreal. 

This part was lovely too. Look forward to reading more. Reading all these stories is convincing me that a separation might be interesting, even though it will be heartbreaking.

It's a fantastic series.

You create magic with your words.

Wow 👏 really nice , u portrayed  his feeling so well.

Rudra is such a unique character for me. Everyone sort of writes on him in different ways but the one thing that everyone always gets is that this man feels. He feel everything so strongly. His heart is so fierce. He feels so acutely. He is so intense in his emotions. You wrote this piece amazingly well, showing that deep feeling that he has in his heart. Great series. I like the "darkness." ⭐️

That was a beautiful Drabble - such a contrast.

-Sona

how beautifully you played with colours in the first paragrah!👍🏼

i read all three in one go..  loved it..!


and so  he misses the warmth that he himself took away ...