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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Hello People This Is Anjali Writing Something Here On IF First Time.

Hopefully You Will Like It. Some Of You Must Have Read This On FB

As I Posted There Before.

Still If You Have Little Tym Do Comment Over Here

Also Have A Peacefully Reading Time.

And Review.

Suggestion Are Welcome.😊


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PART 1


"Sssh.. Can't you work silently..?? hum pakde jaayenge..!" -

he mummered


"Exactly that's what I m saying since 2hrs but tu hai ki

sunne ko tayar hi nahi..! _ he replied in angry tone 😡


"I said shut your mouth and work peacefully Avinav..!" - he

ordered 😆😆


"Waahh.. kya din aa gaye hai Avinav Rawat ke..! dost ki

dream gal ke chakkar me suspend hona padega..!"


"Tu chup karne ka kya lege..? bool..??" - he asked but this

time little seriously


"Rey.. tu chal yahan se samjha..!"


"No ways aaj to madam smily ka naam, ata-pata.. sab dhundh

ke hi jaunga..!" - he replied confidently


"We are searching these files from so long.. NO result

yet..!"


( Avinav was drained out. They both were sitting in a dingy

room without light, electricity and food. Avinav was irritated to the core. He

wants to run but his best friend was no in the mood to do so.)


"Kuch mila..??" _ Avinav muttered in Rey's ear


"Nopes.. kuch nahi abhi tak..!"


"Milega bhi nahi..!"


"Stop discouraging me samjha.. if u can't help sit down

silently."


(This made Avinav burst into laughter )😆


"Tu usss ladki ke liye itna pagal kyu ho raha hai..? we will

find out about her."


"How..??" - Rey asked with questioning eyes


"Dekh she is from our college ye to sure hai.. so usski

saari personally details college student record me hogi na..?? I means library

computer me..!" - Avinav explained


"Yeaa.. pakka hogi..!" - Rey jumped in excitement


"To kya ab aaapki aagya ho to hum iss andhari, dhul bhaari

duniya se bahar jaa sakte hai..?? its suffocating me."


Rey hugged him saying - "Tu mera sachha bhai hai "


"Haaan tabhi to itni raat me store me teri would be girl

friend ka address dhundh raha hun - he teased him."


Rey blushed hard at the statement "WOULD BE GIRL FRIEND"☺️


"Bas.. bass.. ab chale warna watchman uncle aagye na to

Princi kal hi nikal degi.. so then no more girl friend."


Both went back to the hostel. But Rey was in no mood to

sleep. He was lost in his first sight when he banged with her. "How she was

struggling with her duppata. How pretty she was looking in that green embodied

suit. Her sparkling big eyes that hold the whole universe in them. Her glossy

lips."😳


Oopss.. he remember her upper lip was liile smaller than

lower one. "The word SORRY which she spoke when she encounterd with him

unknowingly."


"How much she was scared of getting the injection inside her

veins. In the fear of getting hurt she closed her eyes". Awwwiee.. But she

forgut dard dekhne se nahi hota _ he said with a smile.


Don't know when he slept that nite. But the dreams were of

her only.


"Abbey utth jaa. Kitna sooyega..?? libraray nahi jana kya..?"


"27*7 padhne ke bare me kyu sochta hai tu..?" - Rey asked

this from inside of the blanket


"Saale teri girl friend ka anme pata karna hai.. Mujhe kya..

chod.. amin college jaa raha hun..!"


Rey woke up In no minutes. It was the reflex action of the

word "TERI GIRL FRIEND KA NAAM"


"Tu ruuk main 5 min me aaya..!"


Both Arrived at the library in next 20 mins


Rey- "whats this..?? aaj library band kyu hai..?? Koi

National Holiday' hai kya..??"


He hitted the door hard in angry. Someoen enquired from

behind.


Voice-" tumhare darwaja pitne se khul thodi jaayega..? can't

you behave properly..?? tum koi 5th standard student thodi na ho..

MBA student ho.. Thoda mature behave karo."


Rey turned back in anger.


"How dare you ask me the reason..?? who the hell are you to

give me this shanti bhara lecture' "


He was left dumbstruck

when he turned. Suddenly everything turned beautiful. The slow moving

wind. The music around. (Full filmy types)


She was looking like a sizzling beauty in that blue shirt

and shorts ( remember kria's first dance dress)


Rey - "Tum..??" ( amazed and happy at the same time)


Gal - "What main..?"


Rey - "I mean.." (before he could complete she cutted him)


Gal- "Look aaj library thoda late khulega..! So please be

patient. Iss tarah behave karne se kuch nahi hoga..! Jo bhi kaam hai class ke

baad kar lena..!"


Rey - "Yaa actually.. I m sorry..!"


Gal - "Its ohk..! (she was about to go)


Rey - "Aapka naam..? I mean aap iss college ki student

ho..?"


Listening to his question she burst in laughter. She can't

expect this from him.


Gal - "Rey I m your batch met. MBA second year and my name

Kria Ghai' any problem..? "


Rey - "Perfect..! No.. No.. problem at all..!"


Kria - "OHKK.. cool ..! Need to rush now..!"


She waved her hand in the signal saying BYE'


Rey - OMGGG... wo bhi 2nd year student hai. She is

with me from 2 years and I even don't know..! What a stupid I m..! what should

I do now..? should I abng my head on the wall.?? Should I jump from the 3rd

floor of the college..? Avinav do oone thing slap me for 1000 times. Itni badi

galti. How could i..?"😆😆


Avinav - "Ho gay tera..?/ bass kar..! ab chale..? humari bhi

class hai..!"


Rey - "JAldi chal.. aaj t I need to sit beside her at any

coast. Waise kya tujhe pata tha that wo humari batch met hai..?"


Avinav - "haaan.. pata tha mujhe"


Rey - "saaale baatya kyu nahi mujhe..?"


Avinav - "Bas tere maze lene ka dil kar raha tha soo.."


Rey - "Kamine main tera khun pee jaunga..!"


Avinav - " abbey vampire kahin ka chal warna koi aur baith

jayega..!"


He entered the class with a smling face. He was dam happy to

know her name and most important thing that she is his class met. He turned his

head in all direction to look where is she sitting. He found her giggling and

gossiping with her friends. He immediately bounced to the seat beside her so

that one one else can capture it today.


"Finally mill gayii" - he shouted in excitement


She turned to check what happened and who is the one who

jumped so hard on the seat to make other notice.


"Rey.. tum..? What are you doing here..?" - she asked


"Baitha hun dikhta nahi kya..!"


"Haan dikhta hai but tum last row me kya kar rahe ho..? you

are class topper and use to sit in the first row..!" - she gave a confused

look.


"Haan.. lekin.. woo.. aaj.. actually...main.. wo.." - he was

not getting any excuse for his weird behavior


"Arey Kria baat ye hai na ki accountancy ki class hai and he

hates it" - Avinav comes in his defence


"Ohhh really..? mujhe to laga tum uss professor ke favorite

student ho" - she teased him


"aisa kuch nahi hai" - Rey replied


Before they can continue further the professor entered the

class. Students wished him and get settl ed to their respective places.


Rey was continuously starring at Kria. Not bothering about

the students around. Avinav pinched him.


"Dude.. What..?" Rey mummered


"Abey saale ghurna band kar use warna class se nikal diye

jange hum"


"Who care..?"


"What..? Really..? Topper is saying this..!"


"ssshhh... will you both stop whispering =..?" -Kria

interrupted


Rey looked at her in shock and asked - " kria do you really

want to attend this boring lecture..?"


"Hain..? What you mean by boring..? I thought tum studious

ho..!"


"Haan wo main hun but aaj.."


Before he can complete the reason they were caught.


"Mr. Reyaansh.. Whats going on..? - professor asked


"Sir nothing just..."


"What nothing..? am I a fool standing here and shouting like

a manic..?"


"Ho sakta hai.. aapka kya pata.. may be.." - Kria jokinly

replied slowly


But this was enough for the professor to listen.


"Kria Ghai.. Stand Up..! kya bola aapna..? Expain" - he

ordered


"Sir kuch.." - Rey stood n her behalf


But he was in no mood to listen the reason.


"Both of you out of the class.. Now" - he shouted


"Reallyyy..???" - kriyansh asked in excitement


The whole class looked at them with a surprise with a weird

expression. They haven't expected this

specially from Reyansh'

THANK U FOR READING IT HOPE U GUYS ENJOYED



Edited by Anjali_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE: This OS has another part..Will be updating after seeing the response😃
Edited by Anjali_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful os...
lovd d way rey excited to get to knw bout kriya...
rey class topper...
he dint even knw dat she waz his classmate...wow...haha...poor boy...even his bst frn dint tell him...
d way rey jummped to grab a seat nxt to kriya...made me laugh...
rey starin at kriya while lecture n avinav pinchin him...haha...lol...
KriYaansh ko class se nikal diya...haha...nyc...
rey a perfect love struck teenager...
do write soon d nxt part...
nyc writing...would love to read it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hahaha dis is just so Awesomeee

so so so loved it.

Rey n Swayam sequence (wid rey i can imagine him only) in start was Awesome n

den rey ka suddenly tuh jana..library scene..

rey studious eeeps n he doesn't know kria is his fellow frm 2 yrs..

kuch ziada he studious nikla..

n last scene dere excitement hahah..Lovinggg it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it supab rey kria ke piche pagal ho gaya n his friend usko sab pata tha fir bhi kuch nai bataya awsome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the concept n update
Update next part woh bhi jaldi se...:) :D

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow mast concept...
Rey class topper ...
1 year kriya was in his class and he never know till now...
Kriyaansh dono bahar...maza ayega...
So update da next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kamini Anti welcome to IF
First second part update kr phir comments

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