Teri Deewani- a cute love story.... updated part 35 and epi on pg 163

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

superb ending dear ..beautifully written! ...loved it !

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

terrific update n fab epilogue! Maaneet married! the girls hide his shoes! Maan pays! Maaneet have a daughter bt take care of Aaru! Maan loves 2 tease Geet! awesome end!

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#863

superb updates

end of sweet n lovely story

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#864

lovely ending, Maaneet married with a happily ever after...Muskaan is cute..and the friendship between Geet and Neha continued..Maan was being protective about Aaru, but Geet reminded him about how it all started for them too..
and that was a wonderful journey of Maaneet, from Geet's genuine crush for Maan since college to their friendship, and being crazily in love all the time..
Thank You.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

Beautiful Ending

I so loved the scenes when the guys were looking for Maan's shoes and he and Geet

left for having they dinner than came the part when Maan had to enter his room

but all the friends around and this time Maan slipped away unnoticed as Neha and Varun

were fighting

Maan and Geet now has a beautiful daughter and Maan's neice also stays with them

their life is filled with happiness and togetherness

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 9 years ago

#866

I read the whole story in one go. Very cute!

I am glad you made Maan and Geet understand their love is young and let it blossom beautifully.

In the epi there was one small loophole, Aarya was asked out by Yash who is the son of Neha and Varun. Aaru was almost 10 by the time Maan and Geet were married and if Neha and Varun married within the same year, their son would be only around 8 years by the time Aaru turned 18. It would make sense if Yash was Neha and Varun's nephew.

Sorry didn't mean to offend your writing. 😊

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

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Posted: 9 years ago

#867

It's a really cute love story with an apt title !!! Eternal love can happen even without knowing a person !!! Maaneet were tooo cute !!! I really adored Neha and her relationship with maan and geet !! Loved it !!!

Edited by Nivedithachand - 9 years ago

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#868

Loved this teenage love story. How she fell in love at first sight with him. Liked everything from their teenage love blossoming, their nok-jhok, their confession and then separation again their reunion. Neha was a true friend to her. Liked aaru's character also
Thnx for sharing.

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