TWO CUPS OF COFFEE - PAL - Page 2

Originally posted by: sneha02

Tina...finally...THANK U sweetie u posted this..love ya girl...

This os is the ultimate romantic piece I have read in a long time n I really mean it...you are a skilled writer trust me when i say it n trust yourself..

Coming to this os...yaar mere PAL feels toh sky high pahuch chuke hain...all thanks to u..

U r such a sweetheart that u fulfil all our whims n fancies in a jiffy...thanks soo much...

Tina the way u built the entire story made the love so much more fulfilling...

All the angst n pain s brilliant...it was slow soft subtle n eternal...

Kunal ke liye toh I was feeling all through...loved the way u presented him... aise hi main fida hun uss par n abhi toh that craze doubled...hayee...m so mad...

Loved loved loved the coffee dates, rains n their relationship...n the best part was the way you captured Kunal's realisation...that sketch part was brilliantly written n the way he kept it forever with himself makes this guy dreamlike...madly in love yet ready to suffer its pain all alone...this piece was totally dedicated to Kunal...n u have made him perfect..

Palak was such an angel...ispar toh kisika bhi fida hona natural hai...kunal isliye totally smitten tha...

Loved the way the os captured a long time frame... things careers situations everything changed but LOVE that Kunal felt was constant like that north star..

Kunal as a movie star...hayee.. he will rock..m waiting for this...

Thank you for letting them come together in the end...kuch aur main bardasth nahi kar pati..

Now real life mein kuch aisa ho jaaye toh me will be in seventh heaven sacchi...

God me just wrote an essay n u dint wanna post it at all..huh...bahut nainsaafi hai...

Thanks mat bol...u r always welcome dearie for any suggestions

Thanks a ton

Love ya..

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Wow Tina

A PaL OS

tumne toh humara dream pura kar diya

thanks a lot babes

u indeed made my day

Just loved it so much

from PaL first meeting,to their friendship ,to My baby's heart break to again their reunion

everything is just like fairy tales

and humare PaL ki story toh hai hi fairy tale

u just portrayed it so beautifully

thanks once again for writing it

Lots of Love

Geet

Originally posted by: MyLifeMyRulz

First of all ...A BIG BIG BIG BIG THANKS for writing a PaL OS we love RaHi but how much we love Pal you showed it all it was so realistic .How palak and Kunal spend time on set those coffee meetings kunal's feeling you portrayed them so beautifully and our Palak is a angel anybody can fall for her.Their first meeting so real how they turned into best friend and then that sketch it is perfect kunal drawing Palak's sketch how each detail of her face is in his mind and heart .Kunal didn't confessed till the last day of shooting but when he went she was with somebody else he simply accepted it becoz he just wanted to see her happy this is true love .3 years 3 full years he remained quite and lonely he became a super star he had everything but only one thing which he wanted love of his life panchi was not with him. But they say na agar sache dil se kisiko chaho to puri kayanat tumhe use mila ne me jut jati he in the same way Kunal's love was pure so atlast he got her soul mate.
I can't say this masterpiece beautiful because it will be an understatement You are an amazing writer Tina and for your this fantastic work hats off you are just awesome Tina

This is so awesome that I can write a whole OS praising your work. I still think this is not enough but I can't keep on writing I just want to say thank you once again

LOVE YOU
ISHITA

Originally posted by: shammukh

Tina

I am repeating that u r just brilliant if it is not an understatement.

God bless u.🤗

Kudos to u...❤️ u🤗👏

U hv touched we palian's the most cherished dream.

I hope ur OS really becomes true someday as I have fully visualized Kunal and Palak in it with the love he shows in his eyes for her and affectionate bond they share.

Originally posted by: Sarah_Angel9

Tina Tina Tina!! Ommgeee! I'm speechless! WOW..I was already a crazy PaLian bt dis OS made me more crazier! U r such an Amazing writer Tina! Srsly! There's no doubt abt it. The way u write, describe feelings is so real and pure, i cud feel kunal's pain,i also cried with him:( it really touched my heart(& i'm sure evryones heart). Hats off.u have magic in ur hands.Idk how to thank u..u r unbelievable! Loved it soo much! TYSM 4 the happy ending varna mar hi jati mai! Love u sweetheart:* I really wish and pray dat we'll get PaL soon.

Originally posted by: anjali1805

TINA TINA TINA... THIS WAS SUPERB. I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR OS. I AM ASKING AGAIN FROM WHERE DO YOU GET THESE BRILLIANT IDEAS?

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING AN OS ON PAL.

IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL. SO KUNAL LIKE TO TEASE PALAK ON THEIR FIRST MEETING... I LOVED THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED HIS LOVE FOR PALAK'S EYES AND ALSO THE SKETCH PART. THE END WAS JUST PERFECT STARTING THEIR NEW LIFE ONCE AGAIN FROM THE SAME PLACE. AND YES CHAHE KUCH BHI HO PALAK ONLY BELONGS TO KUNAL AND KUNAL ONLY BELONGS TO PALAK. NOTHING CAN CHANGE THAT. AND THEY CANT MOVE ON IN LIFE WITHOUT EACH OTHER. AFTER SAYING SO MUCH I FEEL I CANT CONVEY HOW MUCH I LIKED IT. IT WAS AMAZING.

I WISH THAT ONE DAY YOU BECOME A VERY FAMOUS WRITER AND I WILL BE ONE OF YOUR COUNTLESS FANS.

DO WRITE MORE.

P.S. I AM SORRY I DINT COMMENT ON YOUR HOLI OS. I WILL COMMENT SOON. I WAS INACTIVE FOR 2 DAYS THAT TIME.