A Cute Love Story of Ansh (FF) last part updated on page 69 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: onlinebuddy75

Sorry for later reply posting my comment for both rocking parts 8 and 9

Part 8
Shiv's mom loved conversation between Shiv's mom and Shiv. If mom are as cool as Shiv's mom kids start seeing things clearly . Loved her way of explaing and clearing Shiv's thoughts . She did not stop him from taking decision but put reality in front of him and id going to support him in his decision.

Part 9
It was nice like a leap but no talk between Shiv-Anandi in 3 years?

Waiting for Aji answer, Anandi wont answer anything positive my POV. Will wait for your update tomm

Geet,
Will Shiv of your story be as cool after wedding as our SRS of BV. Please let him be

BTW lovely writing beautiful flow of story do not feel disconnected at any point 👍🏼


thanks buddy😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hemangi5

Excellent update Geet.😊 I am sure Anandi will give her nod. In her heart she must have realised that she won't find a better partner than Shiv and he is her soulmate.

The story is heart touching and you have treated it with utmost love and have highlighted the sentiments very well.😊


hemu thanks u very much dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mina.DB


Lovely update Geet 😃. Really liked the story. Very excited to know Anandi's answer now. Pl update soon👍🏼


thanks minu
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update 😃 . Waiting to know what will Anandi's reply be .
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjujag

Nice update 😃 . Waiting to know what will Anandi's reply be .


Thanks anju
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG poor Anandi 😭
Liked the way Shiv and his mom are close to each other..waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Russhme22

OMG poor Anandi 😭
Liked the way Shiv and his mom are close to each other..waiting for the next update


Thanks rashmi
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Posted: 11 years ago

well do it today
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 10

She said, "yes as a friend, but"

I interrupted and said, Thanks, I don't want any "but" we can be friends even after marriage.

She said, to be friends we don't need a marriage.

I said, very true, anyway my parents will get me married to another girl and she will become possessive and will ask me not to talk to you or meet you. I can't listen to that and she'll ask who is important anandi or I. I'll say anandi and she'll quarrel and my life will become more miserable. I prefer to share a life of dissension with you than to share it with someone else.

She said, thanks for saying that I'm important, but still I have an aversion towards marriage.

I said, you'll get over the aversion soon. Be ready for the wedding and I'll take care of the rest

I was happy to know that she likes me and I said to myself, I have to make her love me too. Hmmm interesting task.

The wedding took place as per our customs and practices and everything went on well. All our relatives left leaving 6 of us in the house which included mom, dad, sanchi, Gauri, anandi and I. After dinner we all sat in the sofa and watched TV and were talking about the days happenings. Sanchi and gauri went to sanchi's room to sleep. Dad asked us to go to our room and mom accompanied us till the room.

Before she could enter the room anandi held my mom's hand and said "Aunty, I'm scared'

Mom said, there's nothing to be scared about. Everything will be fine soon.

She asked, aunty, can i address you as mom from now on?

My mom said, no issues, you can address me as you prefer. But i am desirous to be addressed as granny and please grant me that wish soon.

Family planning is between the husband and wife. I just told you my desire. Saying this she kissed her on her forehead and asked, what does the mangal sutra mean to you now.

She said, i don't know, I haven't thought about it. it's a custome so I'm wearing it.

Mom said, you'll explore and discover its meaning soon and she left the place.

I was sitting on one end of the cot and she stood at the other end. We were like the north pole and south pole. She kept biting her nails and I understood that she was nervous. I beckoned her to come near and as she came i said, sit and she sat on the cot.

I said, you look perplexed and tired

In her delirium she said, yeah, I'm tired, woke up early in the morning and didn't have enough sleep last night. I'm not confused but I'm wondering how am i gonna manage in a new place

I said, my home is not new to you

She said, my role as you wife makes it a new place to me

I said, the change is only in the role and not with anyone else.

She asked, did you hear what mom said just now she wants to become granny soon

I said, that's ok elders are like that

She said, i can't ignore it just like that, she is more than my mother to me. Nobody has ever loved and cared for me so much like her and I'm very grateful to her. Since I'm obliged to her it's my duty to fulfil her just and reasonable desire to become a granny but i don't know if i can do it

I said, that's lovely, but it's your wish. No troubles from my side.

Ok i won't take much of your time. I'm tired too. I have few things to give you saying this I went to the cupboard and grabbed a bag to the cot. I smiled and gave a cover to her.

As she was opening it i said, this is the college admission cards for sanchi and gauri. They are going to study in the same college, same couse and gauri is gonna stay with us from now on. I don't want her to stay alone in the hostel and suffer in loneliness like you did.

Tears welled from her eyes; but she smiled and said, thanks a lot. I always loved and longed to stay with her.

I said, it's my responsibility and handed over another cover to her saying, this is for my beautiful wife.

She opened it and looking at the air ticket, and the broche from the tour operator for 10 day tour package she exclaimed, are we going to Mauritius?

I said, yes for honeymoon

She asked, are we leaving tomorrow?

I said, yes, pack your things and be ready. The flight is at 9.30 PM

She said,...

Edited by geet005 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update
finally AnSh get married

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