MG FF: Ehsaas Pyaar Ka updating

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ehsaas Pyaar Ka

Prologue


 


She is sitting in the middle of the hall and is surrounded by people. She does not like anything which is happening

with her as well as her surroundings. Today she is getting engaged with her
childhood friend; she likes him and respects him but only as friend. She doesn't
want to marry him because she knew how he is, he is definitely not the one whom
she wants to share her life but who is going to listen to her. She has dreams which she want to fulfill and
want to become a successful doctor, now her life is not in her hands. Her
father and brother shut her mouth saying GHAR KI IZZAT. She want to shout and
ask is her life is more important that so called ghar ki izzat. Alas no one is
there to listen to her and no one is there for her to share her pain. She saw
her mom staring at her and asking her to fake a smile at least. Well, that she
can do and all her life she did the same and now she is going to do the same.

Will she be able to marry him and

sacrifice her life? Or she will go against her parents wish?

Hello everyone, prologue of Ehsaas Pyaar Ka. Would like to know should i continue this or not.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cherishh thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back dearie...

so, so, so happy to have u back😃...and that too with a new story, well thats like icing on the cake❤️...Congrats Jyo

A very interesting prologue

Geet is getting zabardasti married to someone...starting mein hi shock aur suspense, Shock maybe its not maan and suspense who can it be...if its Maan then its okay😉...if not😡...😆😆

Seems Geet's family is bad, bad or say more worried about society type stupids...yaar apni ladki se zyaada kisi aur ki padi hai😡

And that fake smile thing makes me feel that she has been dominated by her father and brother and has lived on their terms till date...too much naa..becharii

If the groom is Maan, I wonder does he love her...aur kya woh serious-serious type hai kya that Geet don't want him as a life partner or its just that she didn't see or imagine him like that ever...and does he love her i wonder

If its Maan or not, I wonder y can't she share her opinion about this marriage to her frnd I wonder

hmmm see u making me already presume so many things...uff...so better update next soon...warna😡

Again, Welcome back dear
Edited by Cherishh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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simply superb
loved it
Cherishh thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for liking and using my edit dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice prologue.
Waiting for the story to start.
I had read one or two Maan and Geet stories after seeing some of you tube episodes, but it was just and I stopped reading, since I'm so into ArShi.
This is the first time I'm commenting on Maneet and I'm all for it to read a story on this couple like I've been reading ArShi.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prologue. Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new story👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
good to see u bck dear...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome and intresting prologue. ...
Waiting for the story to start...
Wondering whether her friend is maan or not...