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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 6:

Raj nd naina walk down the stairs hand in hand... evry1 looks at the coupls in awe... both r looking perfect wth each other... they stand on the score meter and both get 10 on 10... i.e. perfect couple...

dj: oh god... wht an entry... a perfect couple... nw let's begi today's ball... as evry year the party will start wth aftr a formal dance by brigader chandok nd his date i.e. dr.shalini...

BC nd dr. shalini move to the center, spot light is on them, they dance on light

music...

Abhi nd gunnny goes to raj nd naina...

abhi: yaar tum dono hamare saath aa rahe the phir itne late kaise ho gaye?????

Raj looks at naina nd smiles thn he starts telling abhi nd gunny evrythng...

FLASHBACK

While they were walking behind abhi nd gunny on the way to party hall

naina;(nervously) raj...

raj: bolo naina

naina: raj voh... voh... mere burn marks dikh rahe hain...

raj: naina meine tumhe pehle bhi kaha tha ki mujhe unn marks se koi prblm nahi hai aur tumhe bhi unki chinta karne ki zarurat nahi hai...

naina: raj mein jaanti hun... bt sab inn marks ko dekh ke tarah tarah ke sawal puchenge jinka mere paas koi jawab nahi hoga...

raj: ok mein tumhari help kar dunga inn marks ko chupane mein bt meri bhi ek shart hai...

naina: kaisi shart??????

raj: ki tum parson plastic surgery karwaogi taki aaj ke baad tumhe inn marks ki vajah se sharam nahi aae...

naina: no raj mein nahi karwa sakti hun...

raj: kyon naina, kyon nahi...

naina: voh raj...voh...

raj: bahut mehngi hai nd tumhare paas utne paise nahi hain...

Naina looks at raj shocked...

raj: naina meri dr. mittal se baat hui thi jinhone tumhara tab treatment kiya tha... unhone mujhe sab bata diya ki tumne police complain nahi ki aur kyon tumne tab plastic surgery nahi karai...ab esse shocked look mat do... mein tab hi samajh gaya tha ki tum humein acid wali baat nahi batana chahti thi nd tumne puri baat bhi nahi batai thi aur issi liye mujhe sab kuch pata lagana pada (naina is teary seeing the concern of raj)... nd mein dr. se baat kar chuka hun nd unhone kaha hai ki sirf 3 ghante ka kaam hai nd uske baad tumhe koi prblm nahi hogi... achha ab chalo mere saath, mere paas tumhare liye kuch hai jisse tumhare marks tum chupa sakti ho...

They go to raj's room nd soon as they enter the room naina hugs rajtightly nd cries...

naina(crying): raj aaj bhaiyya ke jaane ke baad mujhe pehli baar laga ki koi meri care karne ke liye bhi hai... aap promise kijiye ki aap mujhe kabhi akela nahi chodenge

raj: naina mein hamesha tumhari care karne ke liye tumhare saath rahunga aur tumhe kabhi akela nahi chodunga...

Then raj goes to his cupboard nd takes out a packet frm it nd gives it to naina. naina opents the packet nd finds a matching red fur stroll inside it...

naina: raj ye...

raj: mujhe pata tha ki tumhe ye dress pehnne mein prblm hogi aur issi liye mein kal jaake ye strol khareed ke le aaya...

Then raj makes her wear the stroll in a way to cover her burns...

raj: ab tumhare burns chup gaye hain bt yaad rakhna parson hamein dr. ke paas jaana hai...

naina: bt raj...

raj: no ifs nd but's naina... do u trust me??????

naina: ofcourse

raj: hw much????

naina: as much as i trust bhaiyya...

raj: thn jst listen to me...

naina: okkk

raj: ab ek achhi si smile de do aur apne make bhi theek karlo kyonki ro ro kar tumne isse kharab kar diya hai nd mein nahi chahta ki capt rajveer singh shekhawat ki date ke face pe tears ho...

Naina starts laughing and goes to washroom...

Aftr tht they move back to party hall...

FLASHBACK OVER

abhi: raj tune itna sab akele kar liya aur humein bataya bhi nahi...

raj; mein tum dono ko batane wala tha...

abhi: kab plastic surgery ke baad...

raj: nahi voh...

gunny: chalo ab ye sab chodo... raj tu naina ko dance ke liye leke jaa raha hai ya mein le jaaun...

Raj: (holding his hand in frnt of naina) miss beautiful can i hav the pleasure to dance wth u????????

naina(blushes): yes

Raj nd naina go to the dance floor nd join BC nd dr. shalini... They are dancing on a slow music and enjoying each oters company...

BC says to naina while dancing wth shalini: cadet u r looking gorgeous...

naina: thank u sir...

BC: cadet i told u on ur first drill tht tum sajne savarne mein bahut achhi lagogi nd see i was right...

Naina(calmly): thank u sir...

BC: waise capt aapki entry bina dhamake ke nahi hoti kya?????

raj: sir ye dhamake mera peecha hi nahi chodte hain...

Othr side all cadets were getting bored bcoz of this slow music...

one cadet: yaar ye gana change karao na...

othr cadet: agr esse hi chalta raha toh humein yahin neend aa jaaegi...

cadet to huda: yaar huda kuch karna... ye party bahut boring hai...

huda:(while staring raj-naina) haan kuch toh karna hi padega...ek idea hai..

Huda whispers smthng to cadet nd the cadet goes away...

Suddenly the music changes from slow to rocking music...

The two coples leave the dance floor while othr cadets come and start dancing...

Raj nd naina go near abhi nd gunny nd they start talking...

gunny: kya hua capt... dance nahi karna?????

raj: yaar tumhe nahi lagta ki inn gaano pe dance karne ke hamara time khatam ho gaya hai...

naina: haan haan bilkul... aap toh budhe ho gaye hain tabhi ye gaane aapke liye nahi hain...

abhi: u r right naina...

naina: toh chalein sir...

abhi: chaliye cadet... raj aap toh nahi aaenge bt gunny aap aana chahenge??????

gunny: capt saab aap jaaeye... hum yahin theek hain...

naina: mann lijiye ki aap bhi budhe ho gaye hain...

gunny: naina ab hum cadets nahi rahe jo inn gaano pe dance karein

abhi: naina inhe yahin rehne dijiye, aap hamare saath chaliye...

Huda had listened to this conversation nd he has a plan in mind

Huda goes to dj nd stops the music...

huda(to evry1 on mike): hey guys... aapne hamare capt rajveer ka formal dance to dekh liya aur ab capt rajveer aur capt randhawa ek saath humare liye ek bollywood dance pesh karenge...

Gunny who was drinking water starts coughing nd raj who was standing leaning to the wall almost slips...

huda: guys plz cheer for our captains...(and huda gives a victorious smile to them)

naina was abt to go to shout on huda bt gunny holds her hand...

naina: sir iss huda ki toh mein...

gunny: chinta mat karo naina, hum isse dekh lenge...

naina: bt aap bollywood dance...

raj: naina humne kaha tha hume karna pasand nahi hai... ye nahi ki humein aata nahi hai... chalein capt...(nd winks at him)

gunny: chaliye...

The crowd cheers their names... they both go to the centre nd the spot light is on them...

raj nd gunny: music...

And music starts... they dance on song vele from student of the year... nd then they pull naina b/w them nd dance on radha from student of the year... nw abhi joins them on the dance floor wth other cadets nd they enjoy dancing... huda was cursing his stars bcoz his plan backfired on him... Every1 is bsy dancing nd enjoying the party whn suddenly the music stops nd suriji starts an announcement...

suriji: ab samay hai aaj ke title dene ka... toh aaj ka mr. fresher ka award jaata hai...aalekh puttar ko (there is a huge round of applause. neelu hug aalekh in excitement nd kisses his cheeks) aur miss fresher ka award jaata hai... naina puttar ko(again the crowd cheers)

abhi nd gunny are standing on either side of naina nd they give her a side hug while raj congratulates her. BC gives the sash to both of them nd congratulate them...

suriji: aur aaj ke hamare bst couple hain...(crowd shouts for raj-naina)... bilkul sahi... capt rajveer singh shekhawat nd cadet naina singh...

BC congratulates them nd gines them their award... nw BC comes to make an announcement...

BC: Nw i would like to introduce u all to our new faculty members...i call upon captain abhimanyu rai chauhan nd captain gunraj singh randhawa...(abhi nd gunny go to the stage)... bt they will b joining us aftr 1 month... nw i would like to call dr. ritu mishra...(a lady in red saree enters nd stands near BC)... she is dr. ritu mishra nd she vl b teaching war psycology...(to ritu)dr. mishra plz join dr. shalini. she vl introduce u to evry1...(to the crowd) continue the party...

Dj again starts the music nd shalini take ritu with her towards the three captains...The captains r bsy chatting wth naina...ritu nd shalini go to them...

shalini: dr. mishra...

ritu: dr. shalini plz call me ritu..

shalini: thn u hav to call me shalini

ritu: ok

shalini(pointing towards capt): ritu he is capt rajveer singh shekhawat(they shake hands), capt abhimanyu rai chauhan(they shake hands) nd capt gunraj singh randhawa(they also shake hands)... u plz join them i'll b right back...

ritu: ok...(turning towards capt) so capt who is this beautiful lady wth u(pointing towards naina)???????

naina: ma'am i m cadet naina singh...

ritu: first year cadet...

naina: yes mam

ritu: so capt aap teeno ki bahut tareefe suni kahi nd bahaduri ke bahut karnaame bhi sune hain...

Before she could continue shalini came there nd took ritu wth her...

gunny: yaar raj ye kuch ajeeb nahi lagi????

raj: haan yaar...thdi ajeeb thi

abhi: raj mujhe lag raha hai ki ye tujhpe line marne ki koshish karegi... bach ke rehna...

raj: pata nahi bt kuch ajeeb zaroor tha...

They keep chatting wth each other nd enjoy their evening unknown tht two people were continously watching thm... one ws huda nd the othr was ritu...

nxt day abhi nd gunny go back to delhi nd the cadets return to their normal schedule...bond b/w naina nd raj has grown stronger wth the passage of time... raj has developed a good frndship wth dr. shalini bt he still uncomfortable wth ritu... ritu has told shalini tht she loves raj nd shalini is trying to make raj fall for ritu unaware tht raj has already fallen for naina... ritu is always trying to stick to raj nd raj is always trying to run away... frndship b/w the five cadets(naina, aalekh, yudi, ali nd pooja) hav also grown stronger nd nw they trust each othr nd r always ready to support each othr... huda is always keeping an eye on naina nd raj nd is trying to know the connection b/w them nd is waiting for the right time...major nair as always is tryng to throw pooja nd naina out of academy bt raj is always trying to protect them... raj has become the favorite teacher of the cadets nd has developed a special bond wth the 5 cadets... huda hates raj nd nw he is nt evn able to say anythng to naina bcoz evrytime one or the othr cadet comes to save naina... their life is going smoothly bt they didnt know tht the storm is abt to come...

It has been two months bt still gunny nd abhi hav nt joined kma bcoz of sme security reasons... today BC has called for a sudden announcement...

As BC arrives evry1 stands in attention...

BC: at ease...good mrng cadets nd faculty members... next month vl b an inspection by military board nd i want to all to maintain the standard of kma... rest of the instructions vl b given to u by ur faculty...

The cadets were both excited nd nervous..., they were all discussing abt the instructions tht their faculty gave them...

One month passed in a rush nd the inspection could b any time... abhi nd gunny were scheduled to cme aftr 3 days...

Nxt day during dinner all students were having a gala time in mess whn suddenly sme1 walked into the mess... Suddenly all faculties stood in attention nd raj signalled cadets to stand in attention... the entry was of the devil... or i should say major bhargav...

bhargav: wht the hell hav u made of the mess... u do not look like soilders... is dis the way a soilder lives... u all r waste nd gud 4 nthng... i already told tht this academy is nt worth...

raj: beg ur pardon sir bt u hav nt seen the hidden potentials of our cadets nd i promise tht they would stand up to ur the expectations...

bhargav: oooh capt rajveer... gud 2 see u again... ofcourse u vl support them... u were also frm this academy nd batchmate of traitor naveen singh ahluwalia...

raj: sry sir bt capt naveen singh ahluwalia ws the bst cadet of dis academy...

bhargav: ya ofcourse nd evn bst traitor also...

raj: sir i think v r nt here 2 discuss abt capt naveen singh ahluwalia...

Frm the corner of his eyes he saw tht naina ws feeling vry low nd she ws teary so he knew he had to stop the topic right there...

Suddenly BC enters...

BC: welcome to kma major bhargav... capt rajveer major bhargav has been sent by military board for the inspection...

bhargav: sir i nd capt rajveer hav already met nd v were discussing abt naveen singh ahluwalia...

BC: major bhargav if u don't mind thn i would like 2 tell u tht taking the name of tht traitor in this academy is nt permitted...

bhargav: sir i wnt tht no one else should become a traitor nd so v should tell them tht wht happens 2 a traitor...

BC: cadets give ur introduction to major bhargav(BC didnt wnt 2 discuss furthur on naveen's topic nd so he changed d topic)...

All the cadets gave their inroduction nd thn they were told 2 go to their rooms... naina ws vry sad aftr hearing bad abt her brother bt raj had assured her through his eyes tht she neede to b strng...

They all went to their beds nt knwng wht storm will cme in their lives 2morrow...

Nxt day at 3:00 am the morning bell rang... all the cadets were sleeping...

Girls room:

naina: pooja uth bell baj gayi...

pooja: yaar... sone de abhi toh raat ho rahi hai...

Then pooja looks at clock...

pooja: yaar sirf 3:00 baj rahe hain... plz sone de...

naina: haan yaar pata hai bt aaj bell jaldi baji hai matlb kuch baat toh hai...

They hear a knock on the door... naina opens the door nd find lolita ma'am standing there...

lolita: girls get ready quickly... i want u all on ground in nxt 10 min...

pooja nd naina: yes ma'am

They all start getting ready quickly... same is the condtn in boys room... ali is trying to wake aalekh, huda nd yudi... whn aalekh gets up he pours water on the two sleeping to wake them up...

yudi: chief kya prblm hain... sone do abhi sirf teen baj rahe hain...

aalekh: morning bell baj gayi hai... ye sab uss naye jailor ka kaam hoga...

ali; yudi bhai, alekh bhai jaldi taiyaar ho jaaiye humein 10 min mein ground pe report karna hai...

All the cadets get ready nd report on ground... they r all feeling vry sleepy...major bhargav comes nd they all stand in attention...

bhargav(in a high pitch): ek sipahi ke liye.. zyada neend lene abhishap hota hai... so 10 miles in 15 mins... get going...

The cadets start their jog cursing major... all faculties r also present at d ground except our two captains u hav nt reached yet...

aftr 15 mins the cadets r damm tired then major makes them do sme exercise nd drills... At abt 8:00 am they reach the mess fully tired nd hungry...They ask suri ji 4 breakfst nd suri ji gives them raw egg nd milk...

aalekh: suri ji yeh kya haich????? apun ko nashta do na ye kya kachhe ande de diye hain...

suri ji: puttar aaj se nashte mein yahi milega???

yudi(shocked): kya?????? par kyon???????

suji ji: kyonki...(before he could complete majr bhargav enters)

bhargav(frm gate): aaj se aap sabko yahi kahan padega... (he comes breaks one egg... pours the contents into a glass of milk nd drinks it...the cadets look at him shocked...) jst do the sme nd finish ur milk na then eat 12 eggs like this(he then breaks an egg nd pours its contents ino his mouth... cadets watch him wth wiered expressions...)... high protien diet... good for health... nw u also do the same...

Pooja was making wierd expressions... bhargav goes near pooja...

Bhargav: cadet ghai ny prblm??????

pooja: n..nn... no sir...

bhargav: thn continue...

All cadets follow his instructions nd drink the milk as instructed...

bhargaw: nw daily u hav to hav 5 glass of milk like this nd 15 raw eggs...

Nd wth this he walks out nd the cadets keep cursing him while finishing their so called breakfast...

Nw all faculties nd cadets accumulate at kma grounds for a drill by major bhargav...

bhargav: yesterday captain rajveer was discussing abt a traitor so today i thought 2 start wth the same topic...(he gives an evil smile to raj)... today ur drill is kill the traitor... captain naveen singh ahluwalia...(saying this he removed a cover from the face of 5 dummy's with the photo of capt naveen singh ahluwalia)... u hav to take ur guns nd kill the traitor...

All faculties were hell shocked by this nd raj was seeing naina helplessly... he knew tht aftr seeing this she would b broken completely bt she had 2 b strng... naina was feeling vry restless nd her eyes were teary... she was numb nd not able to understand wht was happening in her surroundings... aalekh saw her restlessness nd uncomfartable feeling nd he assumed tht she is nt able to kill a person so he tries to comfort her...

aalekh: naina zyada mat soch... voi koi zinda aadmi nahi hai... ek bejaan putla hai... usse mar aur phir bhul jaa...

Bt aalekh didnt knew the actual reason... raj knew how she was feeling nd he was vry scared for her... One by one each cadet went and piered the dummy with the rifle nd naina was feeling as if evry1 was piercing her brother... she had tears in her eyes... she was nt able to face the brutual scene... nw only she was left...

bhargav: cadet singh pick the rifle nd take ur position...(bt there was no response nd so this time bhargav commanded loudly) cadet singh pick the rifle nd take ur position...

naina came put of her trance nd picked the rifle nd stood on her position...

bhargav: nw go nd kill the traitor...(bt she was nt able to move... hw could she kill her own brother so bhargav shoted loudly).. i said go nd kill the traitor...

Naina started moving moving by taking slow slow steps but she was nt able to move... bhargav again shouted

bhargav: go nd finish the traitor...

naina reached near the dummy bt she was nt able to lift the rifle to pierce her brother...

bhargav(shouting): cadet singh just finish the traitor...

Till this time BC had also come to witness the drill... he was nt getting wht was going on...

bhargav again shouted: cadet just kill the traitor(bt naina was nt able to raise her rifle nd nw bhargav gave his evil smile nd took the rifle frm his hand)...

... so how was the update... plz do comment...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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arjun_riya

@arjun_riya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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... thank u for those who r reading my story nd supporting me bt still i don't get many likes nd comments bt i am happy tht i hav many views nd i would like to see an increase in no of likes nd comments... sry if i m being rude...

next update:

CHAPTER 7:

bhargav: kaise maregi ye iss traitor ko.. kyonki ye traitor iska bhai hai...(evry1 present there was shocked including rajveer bcoz he didnt know hw bhargav knew abt naina)... am i right cadet naina singh... ahluwalia... cadet naina aap apne aap ko desh bhakt kehti hain toh phir kehne aur karne mein antar kyon???? jst kill the traitor cadet naina varna aapko bhi aapke bhai ki tarah gaddar samjha jaaega...(He was having his evil smile on his lips)... cadet mein aapko tabtak release nahi karunga jab tak aap ye drill puri nahi kar leti... baki sab cadets post lunch yahi milenge sharp 1400 hrs, nw dismiss... (all cadets leave the ground. bhargav again turns to naina bt raj intervences)

raj: sir...

bhargav: captain ye meri drill hai so u better nt interfear...(turning to naina) cadet naina u vl nt b releaved till u complete the drill... jst kill the traitor...

Naina is vry furious, she keeps the rifle and goes from there...

All the cadets except naina r sitting on a bench in the ground pondering over the latest happenings...

Pooja: yaar mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai... usne kabhi bataya bhi nahi...

yudi: haan yaar yakeen hi nahi ho raha ki naina uss naveen singh ahluwalia ki behen hai... yaar iska matlb naina ko academy se nikal diya jaaega...

pooja: matlb naina ka connection hamse hamesha ke liye toot jaaega...

aalekh: koi usse haath laga ke toh dikhae... bolde uss muchad(all cadets call majr bhargav as muchad) ko... apun kisi se nahi darta...

Huda was sitting wth them to know wht they think nd hw they can use them against naina... he thought to put sme doubt in their mind...

huda: kaidi(aalekh) tu naina ka deewana ho gaya hai??????

aalekh: dekh yede tu beech mein mat bol warna apun aphi ke abhi tera case nipta dega aur rahi baat naina ki toh apun uska dost hai aur apun usko bina vajah badnaam nahi hone dega kyonki bina vajah badnaami jhelna kya hota hai ye tum log nahi samjhoge...

pooja: yaar aalekh meine kai baar socha ki usse puchun ki voh kis army wale ki photo apne paas rakhti hai...

huda: bt kabhi himmat hi nahi hui... yahi kehna chahti hai na tu... arey naina agr tumhari dost hoti toh apni pehchan tumse nahi chupati...

aalekh: tu yahan se nikale varna apun tera yahi full n final kar dega... aur rahi baat uske batane ki toh voh bata bhi deti toh apun kar kar lete...

yudi: bt chief ek baar apan sabpe bharosa toh kar sakti thi...

aalekh: dekh yudi agr voh apan sabko ye baat bata deti toh kya apan uske dost bante?????

yudi: u r right bro... bt nw v hv to support her... r u wth me guys...

yudi places his hand forward, aalekh places on top of it, pooja on it... They r looking at ali bt ali dosnt react... he jst gets up frm there nd goes... huda notices this nd thinks...

huda(thinking): ab iss usool ko apni taraf lena hai...

On the other hand a faculty meeting has been called...

BC: officers aap sab apni rai bataiye ki kya hume cadet naina singh ahluwalia ko iss acadey mein rakha chahiye ya nahi...

nair: sir ek gaddar ki behen ko rakhna iss academy ki image pe bura asar daal sakta hai aur yahan ke cadets pe bhi aur iss liye humein cadet naina singh ahluwalia ko turant iss academy se nikal dena chahiye...

raj: bt sir essa toh koi rule nahi hai ki ek gaddar ki behen academy mein nahi reh sakti hai...

BC: majr bhargav iss vishay mein aap kya kehna chahte hain???????

bhargav: sir i think capt shekhawat is right... humein cadet naina ko iss academy se nahi nikalna chahiye...

dr. shalini: i also agree with majr bhargav...

bhargav: allow me to complete dr. shalini...

shalini: sry sir... plz continue...

bhargav: sir hamein cadet naina ko iss academy se nahi nikalna chahiye bt humein uski training itni tough bana deni chahiye ki voh apne aap ye academy chod ke jaane pe majbur ho jaae...(he gives an evil smile to raj nd raj gives him a disgusting look to say i know u r very cheap)... i.e. reverse phsycology... yahi kehti hai na dr. ritu...

ritu: yes sir...

BC: aapka kya kehna hai dr. ritu iss bare mein...

ritu: sir hum sabne notice kiya hai ki naina kabhi apne emotions show nahi karti aur iss liye usne kai saare emotions apne andar daba rakhe hain... ye emotions saare negative hain aur ye harmful ho sakte hain... mein cadet singh ka phsyco analysis test karna chahungi taki mujhe pata lag sake ki unke ye emotions kitne powerful aur kitne dangerous hain...

BC: toh aap kitne sessions lena chahengi...

ritu: vaise toh sir ek session kafi hota hai bt kyonki naina apne emotions ko chupana bahut achhe se jaanti hai so ek se zyada sessions lag sakte hain nd iske baad hi mein aapko bata sakti hun ki...

raj(little loudly): ki cadet singh ek gaddar hai ya nahi... yahi kehna chahti hai na aap...

ritu: capt mein essa nahi keh rahi thi... cn i complete...

raj: sry... u may continue...

ritu: sir inn sessions ke baad mein ye bata sakungi ki naina ko academy mein rakhna chahiye ya nahi...

BC: i think u hav a pt... so aap ye session kab lena chahengi...

ritu: as soon as possible... if possible aaj... aur abhi...

BC: u may proceed dr. ritu nd summit me the report as soon as possible...

ritu: yes sir...

The meeting is finished nd nw only raj nd ritu r left in the meeting room... ritu is abt 2 leave d room whn raj stops her...

raj: dr. mishra mein jaanta hun ki hamare relations shuruat se hi zyada achhe nahi the aur mein aapse ye keh toh nahi sakta bt plz aap ye tst mat kijiye...

ritu: nd may i knw the reason capt...

raj: dr. mein jaanta hun ki aap ye achhi tarah se jaanti hain ki physco analysis ke sawal insaan ko kis tarah se benakab kar dete hain... unka self confidence, self esteem sab khatam ho jata hai... u jst rob them of their emotions... bechari naina baizati aur sharmindagi se iss academy mein dobara apna sar nahi utha paegi... so plz dr. rok do isse...

ritu(with an evil smile which got unnoticed by raj as he was having his back towards her): dont worry capt mein capki cadet singh ke saath koi zyatti nahi hone dungi... bt capt may i ask u smthng...(raj turns nd looks towards her)... aapka iss case mein involvement kuch zyada hi nahi hai... mana ki naina aapke bst frnd ki behen hai bt i would prefer ki aap iss case ko personal level ki jagah professional level pe handle karein...(bfre she could say smthng nair comes there)

nair: dr. mishra cadet singh interrogation room mein pahunch chuki hain... aap unse vahin mil sakte hain...

ritu: yes sir

She goes to interrogation room nd raj to his room...

Scene at interrogation room...

Naina is sitting on a chair nd ritu enters... She keeps her files on table nd offers water to naina

ritu: i hope u r ok naina...would u like to hav some water...(while switching on recorder)... this is official naina so hum yahan jo bhi baat karenge voh record hogi... so naina majr bhargav ko yaad tha ki jab voh tumhare bhai ki dead body lekar tumhare ghar aae the tab unhone tumhe dekha tha bt tumhe yaad nahi tha... bt hosakta hai tumhe ab unhe dekh kar yaad aaya ho ki tumne unhe dekha tha...

naina: no ma'am meine unhe nahi dekha tha...

ritu: iski vajah ye ho sakti hai ki tumhe apne bhai ki maut ka itna gehra sadma laga tha ki tumhe aas paas ka kuch dikhai hi nahi de raha tha... ya ye ho sakti hai ki tumhe un wardi walon se itni nafrat ho rahi thi ki tum unki shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahti thi.. bbt phir mein sochti hun ki agr tumhe unse itni nafrat hoti toh tum ek baar toh zaroor unki shakal dekhti taki tum unki shakal apne zehem mein yaad rakh sako... unhe kabhi bhula na sako... unse baad mein badla lene ke liye...

On the other side in raj's room:

raj is feeling very depressed nd lonely... he standing by the window pane watching the sky... strong breeze is blowing in his room... he is remembering all his moments spend with naina... her smile, her laughter, her dance, her blush, her hug, her cry, her anger... evrythng... he is having tears in his eyes... he remembers whn he confesed to abhi tht he loves naina... he is talking to naveen looking at the sky...

raj: kyon naveen kyon... kyon aaj phir vahi ho raha hai... aaj phir ek baar mein apne aapko akela mehsus kar raha hun... tujhe pata hai naina ki voh hasi... voh muskaan... voh ankhen... voh smile... voh chehra... voh dance...(nd he continous looking at sky nd telling naveen abt his moments wth naina)

Back in the interrogation room:

ritu: ok leave that topic.. lets talk abt smthng else... tumne kma kyon join kiya... kyonki tum army join nahi karna wali thi tum toh voh... kya tha... ya.. cat ki prepration kar rahi thi... tumne army join karne ka decision kab liya????????... shayad naveen ki dead bdy dekh kar... tum army join karke unsab se badla lena chahti thi joh tumhare bhai ke case mein involved the...tum jaana chahti thi voh kaun se officers the... tabhi tumne marshal arts trainig li thi... meine tumhare profile mein dekha tha... tumhe ek baar bhi nahi laga ki tumhara bhai galat tha... bahut bura laga hoga tumhe uss waqt apne bhai ke baare mein ye sab sunkar... bahut gussa aaya hoga tumhe... uske baad shock ki vajah se tumhare parents ki bhi maut ho gayi... tab tumne thana hoga ki tum badla logi... apne bhai ki maut ka badla... apne parents ki maut ka badla...(nd she keeps on saying like this to weaken naina)

Naina is having tears in her eyes remembering all the incidents tht had happened aftr naveen's death... bt she is nt answering ny of the ques bcoz she knows tht her each word can be dangerous... ritu is trying her bst 2 make her angry so tht she says smthng tht she could use as a proof against her to throw her out of the academy...

In raj's room:

He is now sitting on the sofa wth his eyes closed nd head resting on the back with tears flowing down the eyes... suddenly suri ji enters...

suri ji: capt sahab sry 2 disturb u bt aaj aap khana khane nahi aae...

raj: suri ji mujhe bhook nahi hai...

suri ji: plz sir ji chalke khana kha lijiye...

raj: its ok suri sahab mujhe bhuk nahi hai...

At the same time two people enter in kma... they report on front desk tht they hav arrived earlier... they r non other thn our remaining capts... capt abhimanyu rai chauhan nd captain gunraj singh randhawa... they do their report formalities nd aftr finishing those they go to mess bt there they see tht the cadets r sitting sad nd depressed nd naina is nt there neither any of the faculty... they wonder why so bcoz it was lunch time... they then go to aalekh nd grp nd ask them the matter... aalekh, yudi nd pooja tell them evrythng... they r shocked... they rush to raj's room nd find suri ji there nd so they stnd outside... raj nd suri ji didnt notice their presence...

suri ji(to raj): ek baat kahun puttar... uss bachhi ki chot dekh kar dil toh mera bhi bahut dukha hai ji.. lekin kya karein jina toh padta hai na ji... kisi ko kya malum kab koi aapko naya zakhma de de ...ya purane zakhmon ko kureed de... hota hai sir ji esse bhi hota... mein jaanta hun sir ji voh kudi dil ki bahut changi hai... aur sabse zyada bharosa voh aap pe hi karti hai... mein jaanta hun sir ji rab sab theek kar dega...(saying this suri ji went out. he didnt notice the presence of the 2 viewers)

For raj these words as if magic... he gained his lost confidence nd wiped his tears with a new determination to protect naina... he turned to the gate to go out nd saw his best frnds standing there...

raj: gunny, abhi... hamari princess...

gunny: hamein sab pata hai raj...

abhi: aur hum teeno ek saath uske saath khade honge...

The three friends wiped their tears nd marched towards the interrogation room wth new determination...

As they reached the interrogation room the door opened nd the scene in frnt of them made their hearts bleed...

... eagerly waiting for ur comments...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Guys there r so many views bt so less comments... plz comment... ur comments r needed... next update will b within next 10 hrs...

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Bharathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Lovely again! Can't wait to see how the three hotties r gng to support naina... Update soon! Waiting eagerly...👏

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arjun_riya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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... thank u for those who commented nd liked my posts... plz keep commenting...

next update:

Chapter 8:

As they reached the interrogation room the door opened nd the scene in frnt of them made their hearts bleed...

They saw a lifeless doll coming out... she had cried so badly tht nw her tears hav dried up... her eyes r reflecting the pain which has revived aftr reliving those bitter memories... the three captains r jst looking at naina... they r nt able 2 see their princess in such a bad state... she looks fully shattered...the shine of her eyes is lost... all her hopes have finished...as soon as she sees them she keeps on stairing them to convey her feelings through her eyes... so much pain could be seen in her eyes bt no emotions on her face... raj without breaking the eye- contact with naina goes to her and hugs her... abhi nd gunny also come nd place their hands on her head...

raj, abhi nd gunny(to themselves): naina umeed mat chodna... hum chahe naveen ko nahi bacha sake bt vada karte hain ki tumhara apni aakhri saans tak saath denge... humne naveen se vaada kiya tha ki hum princess ko kuch nahi hone denge aur ab waqt aa gaya hai uss vade ko nibhane ka... hum hamesha tumhare saath hain naina... bas tum umeed mat chodna... abhi toh ladai shuru hui hai...

Naina is lost in her thoughts... she is continously looking in their eyes so as to read their thoughts... then gunny puts his arm around her shoulder assuring her tht he is always there for her... no one is speaking bt their eyes nd hearts r conveying their feelings... they all take her to infirmary... the cadets see them supporting her... major bhargav also sees their support for naina bt they ignore him nd take naina to infirmary...

shalini is shocked to see naina in such a state... she goes to naina nd makes her sit on a chair bt naina does not break her eye contact wth three of them... it looks as if she is trying to read their thoughts nd gain courage...shalini sees the tension on their face...

shalini: captains... mujhe pata hai naina ko kya hua hai... she is in a state of shock... mein isse ek tranquillizer ka injection de deti hun... iski nerves ko shant karega...

Naina is still looking at their faces nd trying to read their eyes... when shalini was abt to put injection raj blinked his eyes assuring naina nd as if naina was jst waiting for his signal held shalini's hand... all of them r shocked...

naina: ma'am ab tak jo dard meine saha hai aur jo ab mujhe iss academy mein reh kar sehna hai... usmein aapka ye injection kuch nahi kar sakta... (then she once glances at the three as if indicating them tht the nxt words r for them)... mujhe jo chahiye tha ab mere paas hai... aur ab mujhe ye jang jeetne se koi nahi rok sakta...(naina gets up)... ma'am meri drill ka time ho raha hai... i need to go...

Every1 is looking at naina shocked except raj... he has understood tht his one blink of eye has conveyed all unspoken feelings to naina... she has gained new strength from three of them nd nw they r her strength... naina walks out without waiting for an answer but not before giving a small assuring smile to her three strong pillars...

voiceover: aaj meri behen ko apni manzil mil gayi hai... aaj usko apne saathi bhi mil gaye hain... aaj usne jo gussa, jo dard, jo determination mere teeno dosto ki aankhon mein dekha... usse usse takat mili hai... voh samajh gayi hai ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaae ye teeno uska saath kabhi nahi chodenge... usne unki aankhon mein apne liye jo pyaar aur jo vishwas dekha, usse usse nahi umeed mili... pehli baar usne kisi ki ki aankon mein apne liye santwana ke alawa kuch dekha... jab voh teeno usse interrogation room se la rahe the tab unki aankon mein uske prati garv tha aur issi ne usko takat di...

Naina is already late nd so had to skip her lunch nd rush to the ground... whn she reaches d ground all cadets r already present there... all cadets give her a look of disgust except her friends... aalekh, pooja nd yudi rush 2 her while ali does'nt understand whether he should support naina as a friend or not...

aalekh(while giving a hug 2 naina): kaisi hai tu?????

naina: i m fine aalekh...

Then pooja nd yudi also come n hug her... they ask her the same ques...

naina: yaar tum log meri chinta mat karo mein theek hun... mujhe ye sab sehne ki aadat ho gayi hai...

huda: haan haan teri toh aadat hogi hi aakhir tu ek gaddar ki behen jo hai... par hamari aadat nahi hai ek gaddar ke saath rehne ki... toh tu yahan se jaa sakti hai...

Aalekh was abt 2 shout on huda bt he was stopped by naina...

naina: huda tu mujhe ye drill karne se rok nahi sakta kyonki mein bhi yahan ki cadet hoon...

aalekh: aur tere liye yahi behtar hoga ki tu naina se dur reh...

yudi: yes bro... u better stay away frm her...

huda: dekho dekho doston... ye naina ke chamche humein dhamka rahe hain... hahahaha...

All cadets start laughing... unknown 2 them sme1 was watching evrythng... he was happy tht naina had sme1 2 support her nd was vry angry on huda...

he is non othr than naina's gunny bhai... aftr naina left infirmary raj knew tht naina would hav 2 face many problems nd evn bhargav would try 2 do thngs 2 hurt naina nd so he asked gunny 2 keep a watch on naina as he nd abhi needed to go to ambala headquaters... nd so gunny was watching all d activities of naina... he was hell angry whn he heard huda bt he controlled his anger aftr seeing yudi nd aalekh supporting naina...yudi was vry angry nd was abt 2 bash huda whn majr bhargav came there... majr bhargav gave an evil smile whn he saw naina nd he had also heard the last dialog of huda nd so he thought tht finally he has found a perfect person for his help...

bhargav: attention...(all cadets stand in an ordered attention position)...

cadet singh... oh sry cadet ahluwalia...(he gives an evil smile)... plz step out nd stand seperately... i dont want othr cadets 2 b affected by a traitor...

Gunny was vry angry hearing this bt he knew for nw he had to control his anger...

bhargav: cadets today u'll b going for cross crountry drill... ur routes r marked (he said pointing towards the table where the maps were kept)... cadet begh u vl lead one team nd cadet huda u vl lead another... u may select ur own team bt remember both teams should hav equal no of cadets... then u can take the maps nd follow the instructions... u hav 2 hrs to complete the drill...

aalekh, yudi nd pooja were in ali's team with 2 other cadets while six other cadets were in huda's team... bt as expectsd no one selected naina... now the teams had equal no. of cadets nd only naina was left... aalekh, yudi nd pooja were pressurising ali to take naina bt he was adamant for nt taking her... at last he said tht he was the leader nd they had to follow him without complaining... Nw they had no optn except following their grp leader... the groups collected their required material nd left for their drill... nw only naina was left with

bhargav... gunny was fuming seeing naina left alone bt he knew tht at present he could not do anythng...

bhargav: i m so sry cadet ahluwalia... all teams were completed nd u r left alone... so nw follow me on a different route...

Naina follows bhargav... gunny is following them from distance so tht he could not b seen by bhargav...

bhargav: cadet tumhara behaviour bilkul apne gaddar bhai pe gaya hai... usi ki tarah tum adiyal ho... usi ki tarah tum chalak banne ki koshish karti ho bt nt wth major bhargav... mein desh drohiyon ko sung leta hun aur unhe pakad leta hun... meine hi tumhare bhai ko giraftaar kiya tha(this sentence made naina's feet jam... she stopped abruptly nd was nt able 2 move forward... bhargav got her weakness nd nw he thought of making her weak, so he continues)... meine hi tumhare bhai ko giraftaar kiya tha... uske khilaf sabut ikhatta kiye the... uski desh dhroi sabit kiya tha... mein hi tha voh...(he gave an evil smile)... kyon cadet naina chauk gayi ye baat jaan ke ki tum uss aadmi ke saamne khadi ho aur usse orders le rahi ho jisne tumhare bhai ko giraftaar kiya aur usse saza dilayi... yesss... mein vahi aadmi hun jisne tumhare bhai ko giraftaar kiya aur usse saza dilai... i hate traitors... kya soch rahi ho cadet naina.. kya chal raha hai tumhare dimag mein... badla lena chahti ho...(he was saying to evoke the hidden anger of naina...)... badle ki aag mein sulag rahi ho tum... apne gaddar bhai ki maut ka badla lena chahti ho tum... toh here is the gun(he said while offering his rifile)... pick it up nd shoot me... kyon naina kya soch rahi ho... pick up the gun nd shoot me,... ek gaddar hi gaddar ka saath deta hai... ek gaddar hi ek desh bhakt pe goli chalata hai... khatam kar do mujhe aur apne career ko bhi... soch kya rahi ho naina... mann kyon nahi leti naina ki tum ek desh dhroi ho... mann kyon nahi leti cadet naina ki tum apne desh se pyaar nahi karti ki uska karz chuka sake aur nahi hi apne bhai se ki uski maut ka badla le sako... u r gud for nothing cadet naina... tum na hi ek desh bhakt ho aur na hi ek gaddar... tum mein ek soilder banne ki kabiliyat nahi hai cadet naina singh ahluwalia... tum bhul rahi ho cadet naina ki meine hi tumhare bhai ko giraftaar kiya tha...

Finally naina's patience level broke nd she took the gun from his hand nd pointed it towards his head... he smiles invardly bcoz naina is doing as he wished...naina's eyes are spitting fire... she is pointing the gun on major bhargav nd she is remembering her past... her brother's dead body...her parent's cries... their death... her cries... society's taunts... everything... she is hell angry nd nw her anger is getting over her senses... she is nt able 2 think right or wrong...

... plz give ur comments nd likes...

Edited by arjun_riya - 11 years ago

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Bharathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

I do hate bharghav... But if he is gng to organize a mentorship like original lrl...😆 Then I m gng to love him... He played d Cupid in the show..😉. Haha :) but good update :) year pm karo na.. I keep missing updates

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arjun_riya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Bharati07
I do hate bharghav... But if he is gng to organize a mentorship like original lrl...😆 Then I m gng to love him... He played d Cupid in the show..😉. Haha :) but good update :) year pm karo na.. I keep missing updates

yaar actually mera mentorship program ka mood nahi hai... kyonki mein sabki bonding bahut strong bana chahti hun sirf naina aur raj ki nahi... isliye iss baar kuch aur activity hogi nd hopefully u'll like it...