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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Kanchanjunga Military Academy"

Voice over: KMA is the one of the best military academy in India. Yahan pe admission pana bahut hi muskil hai lekin uss se bhi muskil he yahan ki training aur discipline and yahan ki faculty members, principal BC and vice principal Major Niar. Aaj tak KMA ke itihas mein yahan ka koi bhi cadet bina apni training puri kiye bina nahi gaya kyonki BC & Major niar ka ye usool hai ki jo bhi yahan pe aayega unhe wo fauji bana kar hi dum lenge. Aur aaj tak inki academy ka discipline na to koi tod paaya hai aur na hi inka usool. Ab dekhte hain ki iss saal ka batch kaisa hoga...

A beautiful girl is standing at the gates of KMA. She is wearing blue jeans and a casual round neck pink t-shirt. She has determination in her eyes bt there is a lot of pain hidden behind her smile. She enters the premises and asks for the direction to BC's cabin.

Voice over: BC means Brigadier chandok, principal of KMA. Rules and discipline ko leke bahut strict hai. Unko dekh ke lagta hai jaise saalon se hase nahi hain.

(The girl knocks on BC's cabin door.)

BC: come in.

Girl: Cadet naina singh reporting sir. (And she salutes)

BC: Cadet singh welcome to KMA.

Naina: thank u sir

BC: cadet today u can see the campus... ur training vl start frm tomorrow... hope u follow rules and discipline of KMA and leave as a brave and true soldier

naina: yes sir

bc: you may leave

(naina salutes and leaves)

Voice over: naina singh... oops naina singh ahluwalia, captain naveen singh ahluwalia ki choti behen yani meri behen. Mein Capt. naveen singh ahluwalia, jisse 4 saal pehle traitor declare kar diya tha nd ab meri behen aai hai mujhe insaaf dilaane... mere naam par se badnami ka daag hatane. main bhi iss academy ka cadet reh chuka hun nd aaj meri behen bhi iss academy mein aai hai mujhe begynah sabit karne.

(naina goes to the martyr's flame and salutes)

naina (thinking): bhaiyya aaj mein yahan aa gayi hun nd i promise mein apne mission mein kamyab hoke rahungi. bhaiyya ye jyoti shahidon ke liye hai... chahe aap desh ke liye shaheed nahi hai par mere liye toh aap shaheed hi hain aur mere liye toh aap iss jyoti mein hain.

(she wipes her lone tear before anybdy could notice and moves towards her room.)

now a new cadet is entering the premises. he is decently dressed in pant and shirt. he moves towards bc's cabin.

boy: cadet ali begh reporting sir (he salutes)

bc: welcome cadet begh.

ali: thank u sir

bc: cadet aap ke ghar wale army mein reh chuke hain toh mein ummed karta hun ki aap yahan se ek kabil aur emaandar sipahi banke niklenge.

ali: yes sir.

bc: cadet today u can see the campus... ur training vl start frm tomorrow...you may leave

ali: yes sir (he salutes and leaves towards his room)

Thn one by one cadet amardeep hoda, cadet pooja ghai, cadet yaghuwansh sahani and cadet aalekh sharma. They all meet bc one by one and go to their rooms.

Ali and aalekh are sharing one room while yudi(yaghuwansh sahani) and huda(amardeep huda) share another room. There in girls hostel pooja and naina are in same room.

After inital greetings wth their room mates they move towards the mess. In the mess they meet each othr and exchange greeatings.

huda in his flirtatious style starts flirting with naina bt naina keeps on ignoring him. They chat during the lunch time and come to knw abt each othr. They all crack jokes and enjoy their meal laughing bt aalekh notices sme kind of sadness and pain hidden behind naina's laughter. A tear is going to fall to fall frm naina's eyes bt bfr it falls she wipes it bt it ws noticed by aalekh.

After lunch they all move to their rooms to unpack their things and have sme rest...

...WILL CONTINUE SOON... PLZ GIVE YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
nice start
u should continue with story
pm with next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nida999

nice start

u should continue with story
pm with next part :)

thank u
sry bt cannot promise a pm regularly
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
INDEX
prologue: pg 1
ch-1: pg 1
ch-2: pg 1
ch-3: pg 1
ch-4: pg 3
ch-5: pg 3
ch-6: pg 3
ch-7: pg 4
ch-8: pg 4
ch-9: pg 5
ch-10: pg 6
ch-11: pg 6
ch-12: pg 7
Edited by arjun_riya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
next chapter:
Chapter 1
After lunch they all move to their rooms to unpack their things and have sme rest...
They all take a tour round the academy during evening and have dinner in mess and go to their rooms.
voice over: aaj inhe aaram se sone do kyonki kal se inki life mein aaraam hi nahi bachega...😆😆😆 chalo jab tak ye sote hain mein bhi thodi neend le leta hun
Morning 8:00 am
All cadets and faculty members are standing in assembly hall and waiting for BC. As BC reaches all stand in attention
BC: at ease... good morning cadets and faculty... cadets today is your first day and i would like to introduce u to ur faculty members... cadets this is major nair(pointing towards mjr nair) vice principal of KMA, this is dr. shalini,(pointing towards dr. shalini) incharge of infermary, captain rajveer singh shekhawat,(pointing towards capt) teacher of war stratergies and communication and ur drill incharge with major nair, (then pointing towards othr teachers) subedar suri , mess incharge and boys hostel warden, subedar lolita sen, girls hostel warden and discipline incharge... as today is ur first day i would like the teachers to inform u abt the rules and regulations of kma and make u familar wth the life of kma and frm tomorrow we vl start wth drills and othr daily activities.
cadets: yes sir...
bc: dismiss
(all cadets salute and move)
scene @ mess
all cadets are having breakfast and talking to suri ji while aalekh and huda are arguing on sme topic
suri ji(to aalekh and huda): oye khoteyon... ab ladna band karo aur shanti se nashta khao...
huda: suri ji pehle issne bakwas shuru ki thi
aalekh: nahi pehle isne apun ko...
(before he could complete his sentence an orderly comes for announcement)
orderly: rajveer sir ne saare first year cadets ko 10 min mein room no 101 mein bulaya hai.
pooja: oye jaldi chalo shahrukh ki clas hai sms miss nahi hona chahiye
naina:(wth confused look) shahrukh???????
pooja: arre shahrukh matlb capt rajveer... hayeee kitne handsme hai
huda:(feeling jealous) chal chal... huda se behtar koi nahi hai
(Before pooja could respond naina speaks)
naina: ye apan baad mein discuss karenge... abhi chalo varna late ho jaenge
aalekh: chal naina apan chalte hain inko ladne de
ali: haan aalekh bhai chaliye... uthiye yudi bhai
The four start moving towards the room and pooja and huda also join them. Naina tells the rest to move towards the class and she vl join them in a few seconds. The rest go and take their seats in the class while naina goes to washroom and while returning she bumps into sme1...
...hw ws the update?????? plz give ur comments and like this post... will continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
next update
Chapter 2:
The rest go and take their seats in the class while naina goes to washroom and while returning she bumps into sme1...
she is abt to fall and close her eyes in fear bt before she touches the ground two 2 strng arms hold her tightly and save her frm falling. She slowly opens her eyes and looks at the person.He is none othr than our capt rajveer. They straighten themselves. On seeing raj she is vry angry bt she cannot reveal her identity and on controlling her anger she speaks softly
naina: sry sir i was in a hurry
raj: its ok...first year cadet!!?????
naina: yes sir
raj: name??? (bt she is lost in sme thoughts)
She does nt respond so raj asks again..
raj:(a little loudly) cadet wht's ur name????
naina: huhhh... oh sry sir...
raj: name???
naina: cadet naina...ah...singh
raj: cadet naina ah singh????... so whr were u lost?????
naina: no sir... woh...(she is fumbling wth her wrds)
raj: cadet wth r u dng her??? nd why r u nt in clas??? i thnk its my clas
naina: sir i ws just going...
raj: ok let's go..
Raj and naina enter in class together. Raj takes introduction of students and tell them abt his subject and abt kma. Then they have othr class. They hav a small lunch break and again resume wth classes.
Nw its dinner time and all are sitting in mess having their dinner.
Pooja: yaar naina aaj toh kitna pakaya lolita ma'am ne...
naina: yaar zyada toh nahi bt aaj unki clas kafi lambi thi
huda: vaise naina ek baat bata tu uss capt se saath clas mein kaise aai????
pooja: haan yaar naina tu aur sharukh ek saath kaise???
naina:(on mentioning name of raj she gets angry bt answers politely to stp this discussion) arey bas aate wakt unse takra gayi thi isiliye unke saath aa gayi...
huda: tujhe unse nahi mujhse takrana chahiye kyonki jananiyaan mujhse takraati hain unse nahi...
naina: (controlling her anger)teri bakwas mein mujhe koi interest nahi hai
huda: tu bhadak kyun rahi hai... mana mujhse accha tujhe koi nahi milega bt phir bhi tu uss capt se dur reh..
naina(whispering to herself angrily): uske paas jaana kaun chahta hai???
huda: kuch kaha tune???????
naina:(rudely) nahi...ab chup chap khana kha aur mera bheja mat kha...
huda: pholan devi hai tu...
naina:(angrly) kya kaha tune??????
huda: phoolan devi kyonki tu har wakt gusse mein rehti hai
naina(irritated): haan theek hai... hogayi teri bakwas ya mein jaaun yahan se???????
huda: jananiyan huda se dur nani balki huda ke paas bhagti hain
naina(while pickng her plate): guys mera khana ho gaya hai aur mein iski bakwas sunne mein interestd nahi hun so i m gng to room...(towards pooja) pooja chal rahi hai??????
pooja: naina tu chal mein aati hun
Naina start moving bt huda blocks her way
naina(angrily): kya hai huda???
huda: chal tujhe room tak chod deta hun
naina(irritated): mujhe teri cmpny ki zarurat nahi hai (sayng this she starts moving bt hoda holds her wrist)
huda: jab huda kisi janani se kuch kehta hai toh voh mana nahi kar sakti
Naina tries freeing her wrist frm his grip bt his grip is too strng, nw naina is hell angry wth huda. She shouts on him
Naina: huda mera hath chod warna tere liye achha nahi hoga...
huda: (nearing her) kya kar legi tu????
Bfr huda could do any thng naina gives a tight slap on his cheeks. nw huda is vry angry
huda(shouting): teri himmat kaise hui mujhpe hath uthane ki
He was abt to slap naina bt bfr that sme1 caught his hand...
... plz give ur comments... nxt part in a few hrs...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
NEXT CHAPTER:
CHAPTER 3:
He was abt to slap naina bt bfr that sme1 caught his hand...
He is none other than our capt rajveer... His eyes are spitting fire
Raj:(angrily) don't evn dare
huda: hw dare she hit me
raj: ek ladki se pesh aane ki tameez bhi nahi hai tumme... (shouting) in my cabin nw...(towards others) u all move to ur rooms nd cadet singh come wth me
evry1: yes sir
All do as directed by raj...
In raj's cabin
raj(contolling his anger): so huda may i knw the reason of ur misbehaviour...
huda: sir she slaped me in frnt of evry1 and refused my cmpny...(arrogantly) koi jannani huda se dur nahi jaati
raj: maafi mangne ki bajae tum bakwas kar rahe ho... tumhe pata hai agr mein iss harkat ki shikayat brigader chandok ko kar dun toh tumhe yahan se nikala jaa sakta hai
huda:(controlling his anger) sry sir
raj: mujhse nahi cadet singh se bolo
huda(rudely): sry...
naina: its ok
raj: this tym i m leaving u bt nxt tym i v nt excuse...nw dismiss
Huda mves out angrily...Naina also starts moving bt raj stops her
raj: cadet singh...
naina: yes sir
raj: r u fine..
She is already vry angry bcoz of huda and aftr tht bcoz of raj's intruption bt she sme hw controls her angr and answers him politely
naina: yes sir
raj:(sensing her discomfort) any prblm cadet singh
naina:(ignoring his ques) sir may i go...
raj(understanding tht she wants to go bt dosen't knw why): yes u may go.. good n8
Naina walks out of his cabin wthout evn wishing him gud n8. raj feels smthng is wrng
Raj(to himself): pata nahi bt ye mere saath comfortable nahi hai. koi toh baat hai jis wajah se har baar iski aankhon mein mujhe dekhte hi pain nazar aata hai. pata lagana hoga...
(He goes to his room thinking abt naina.)
Naina goes to her room and sits on window pane and watches the moon. Pooja is in mess and so the room is empty. Slowly tears come out of her eyes.
Naina(looking towards sky): kyun bhaiya kyun???? kyun gayae aap mujhe chod ke???? aapke baad mom dad bhi chale gaye... bahut akeli ho gayi hun mein... jinse aapko umeed thi ki voh mera dhyan rakhenge unhone mujhe dhundne ki koshish bhi nahi kari. kitna intazaar kiya humne aapke teeno doston ke aane ka bt koi bhi nahi aaya. aapki lst wish ki vajah se aaj tak aapki asthiyaan nahi bahai hai bt mein unhe kaise jaake kahaun ki aapki lst wish kya thi... unhe dekh ke mujhe mere saare dard yaad aa jate hain, mom ka rona, dad ke bebas hona, sab yaad aata hai... (She goes into her flashback)
FLASHBACK:
four years ago
A body is being brought by some soilders and is kept on the gate of the house... The body is of capt naveen singh ahluwalia... His parents and sister take the body inside the house.
Next day is the mourning day- no one has come for mourning on the death of capt naveen singh ahluwalia...instead all are cursing him
1 neighbour: ab esse gaddaron ke yahan kaun jaaega???
2 neighbour: haan haan chalo yahan se... iss ghar ke bahar khade hona bhi hamein shobha nahi deta...
Naina and her parents are the only one present for the last rituals of her brother, no relative, neighbour or friend had cme for his last rituals... Naina's father has still not immersed his ashes in water... bt why naina dosnt know... she only knows tht her brothrs last wish is still nt fulfilled...
Nw evry day whn any of them step out of the house, they are tourched by various cheap comments and alligations by the people... The students in college torture naina and so she has stoped going to college... due to regular torchrous comments one month after the death of naveen, his mother who is nt able to bear wrng alligations abt his son gets a paralysis attack and after 5 months she passses away...naina and her father hav still nt immersed the ashes of naveen in water bcoz her father is waiting for sme1 bt she dosnt know who...
After her mothers death her father goes in a temporary state of shock... she is left alone to fight the world and take care of her father... she is still in almora and is completing her college bt one day a vry bad incident takes place in her life and aftr tht she leaves tht college and moves to nainital wth her father wthout informing any1... her father was revivng from the state of shock bt after the accident the condition worsens...
He is admitted in a hospital in nanital bt still there is no improvement...
after one month he is on death bed and he is about to die whn he tells the lst wish of naveen to her...
Father(naina's father): beti meine aaj tak naveen ki asthiyaan sambhal kar rakhi thi bt tujhe kabhi nahi bataya kyon aur aaj jab mein marne waala hun toh tujhse wada chahta hun ki jaise naveen uski asthiyaan bahana chahta tha tum bilkul vaisa hi karogi...
naina(crying): papa aap jo kahenge main karungi...
father: beti humein bahut minnaton ke baad ek din naveen se jail mein milne ki permission mili thi bt voh bhi sirf 5 min ke liye... uss din jab mein aur teri maa naveen se milne gaye tab uski halat bahut kharab thi... (crying) meine usse itna kamzoor aur hara hua kabhi nahii dekha tha... voh puri tarah tut chuka tha... voh jeene ki umeed chod chuka tha... uss din usne kaha ki uski ab sirf do hi ichha hain... pehli toh yeh ki uski jab maut ho tab voh apne doston ke hathon mare na ki dushman ke aur dusri ye ki uski asthiyaan uski princess(naveen called naina princess) uske teeno doston ke saath milke ganga mein bahae...
naina(crying bitterly): papa mein essa hi karungi bt unke voh teen dost kaun hain????
father: uske teeno academy ke batchmates... capt rajveer singh shekhawat, capt abhimanyu rai chauhan aur capt gunraj singh randhawa... tum unn teeno ki photo dekh chuki ho aur ab tumhe un teeno ko dhondna hai taki tum apne bhai ki ye wish puri kar sako... mein aaj tak unn teeno ka hi wait kar raha tha bt unmein se koi nahi aaya... mein chahta hun ki tum pehle apna college khatam karlo aur uske baad unn teeno ko dhund ke naveen ki aakhri khwaish bhi puri kar do... wada karo mujhse naina...
naina: mein aapse wada karti hun papa ki jaisa aap chahenge waisa hi hoga...
She keeps her hand on her father's hand and aftr this her father dies... she cries badly bt there is no one to console her, no one to lessen her pain, no one to support her, she is left all alone...
She does all the last rituals of her father alone... that day she took an oath tht she would prove her brother innocent and only aftr tht she will immerse his ashes in ganga as he wished...
nw two years of her college are still left bt her fight has just begun...
after completion of her college
she is nt the same chirpy and bubbly, she has bcme hard and strng, she has leart to fight wth the world alone...
she prepare for kma and aftr 4 years of his brothers death she joins kma, frm where her brother took trainig, to prove her brother innocent... whn she first saw raj she agin remembered all the painful memories... she does not hate the three bt she is hurt bcoz aftr her brothers death they didnt come to their house evn once bt her brothr loved them more than his life like he loved his princess naina and they didnt evn try to contact them evn once... tht's y whn raj helped her or protected her frm huda she got angry bt she had to control her anger bcoz she could not reveal her identity... she wanted to talk to raj bt she didnt knw if she could trust him bcoz her brother trusted him bt aftr his death whn they didnt cme she didnt knew whthr to trust them or not... she knew tht they had nvr seen her bcoz naveen had told evrythng abt her bt had nvr shown her photo bt she had seen their pic bcoz once naveen had shown their group pic to her bt she knew vry less abt them...
FLASHBACK OVER

She is brought back to present by the knock on door. She wipes her face and opens the door to find pooja standing there.
pooja(sees naina's red eyes): kya hua naina?????? kya baat hai????
naina(avoiding the ques): kuch nahi yaar bas neend aa rahi hai... (going towards bed) chal ab soo ja... gud n8 (wth this she pulls the blanket and goes to sleep)
pooja is perplexed bcoz of her behaviour and jst manages saying gud n8. Wth this they sleep to begin a nw journey of their life to become a soilder...
...Plz give u r comments and likes for this post...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkerbell

awesome part

thanks for the pm dearr

Thanks
bt i m sry i cant pm daily... today i jst sent a pm to let u knw tht i hav started a nw stry...
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Awesome
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