SS: I'd Come For You - Zaya | Completed - Page 5

AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Neha07
Wow!! An SS from one of my favourite writers on this forum!!!! I am happy-shappy. The start is really good. Awww Zain thinks that Aliya has left him 😆.Aliya thinks that Zain has complained to Shabana!! These two are just gone cases I say 😆😆I hope it happens the same way in the show too 😉.Lookinh forward to next chapters hope we get it soon.

Btw may I know your actual name please @AnotherAdmirer?

Aww I am humbled. Thank Youu, that's very kind of you 🤗

Am glad you liked it :D Love the way you put it ! Gone cases lol

The show always surpasses expectations ! It would be interesting to see such a track play out, am sure they will come with a kicker and leave us all bowled over.

Will pm you the next update, whenever i post in. Now that you mention it I realize i forgot to sign at the end of my post. You can call me Zee :) ZJ is my pen name.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: vijayarvi
wow amazing loved it..wating for the next update😊

Oh here's your post :D Thank Youu :)

Originally posted by: jojo1986
LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

Thank Youu :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: luvnishal97
loved it update son.and thankz for the PM.PM me next time also

Thanks :) No worries, I bug everyone on my PM list 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: avaniluvsBarun
Amazing stry !!
Plzz pm me fr the update

Thank Youu, will sure do :)

Originally posted by: daisydee425
amazing

Thanks :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: AnotherAdmirer

[DIV]<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">[I]Thank Youu :) Will let you know when i update[:$:] k thnk u.. Ll be waiting... Do pm me.. Nd i liked ur way of writtng... So gud.. Keep it up :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MsfairyCindreLa
This is just amazing
Aliya has left coz of her ammi's health, and dat too on the same date wen their deal ends.. awesome zee:*
Zain expects aliya to infrm him, he must be falling in love for her, and now he z heading 2 bhopal:) 1 din bhi apni wifey ke bagair nahi reh sakta;)
I dunno how'd aliya react :))
Update soonish.. or I ll keep pestering yuh to update; ))

Heyy munz 🤗 Thanks a bunch :D

Yeah same day lol

Nahh he is expecting her to have informed him and leave forever. 😆 Zain is crazy like that, don't you think :P

True True ! He is heading to Bhopal, for her. 😳

Aliya's reaction, Hmm wait for it :)

Haha you know that would actually be good, coz am a very lazy person 😛

Will send in a pm when i update next :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sunithi
really awesome ss..waiting for next one..this is wat i want to see in onscreen..ur words ve a magic to make me to see wat u wrote...keep writing..

Thank You for appreciating my work , am glad that my writing had that clarity and flow which made it easy for you to imagine the scenario. Means a lot <3

As for the show, Beintehaa always exceeds expectations! 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY
It was written with such perfection,i lived in every single moment.Especially,lvd Zain's turmoil of happy or sad! It was pretty cool!

Thank You for such a kind review :) I am all smiles 😳

I am happy you mentioned what you found to be the highlight of the chapter, I had edited that bit quite a lot, really glad it payed.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ...Harmony...
wow..this a splendid plot...
First chapter is totally awesome...
Loved it very much...
can't wait to read more...
loved your writing buddy...😳

and VM.. its just one of the most beautiful vm of ZaYa.. i have watched till now..
good job nandini27...😉

Thank Youu :) I am glad you liked it 😳

As for the VM I Loved it :D Nanz is one of the best VM-makers I have come across, here's a link to more of her Zaya works - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3920407

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: gowtu

Thanks once again, means a lot :) Sure I will send a pm for the next update 😳