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Hannah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

I was looking for a fanfic to read last night and I am glad that I stumbled across this piece! It was really very sweet.

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: nondescript
I was looking for a fanfic to read last night and I am glad that I stumbled across this piece! It was really very sweet.

I am glad you found your way here :D Thank you, means a lot :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: AnotherAdmirer

Thank you dear :) Glad you found your way here and enjoyed the read 😳

Will keep writing on Zaya..

add me in ur buddy list n pm me nxt update plzzz 😳

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preity_d

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Beautiful... The way the chapter starts with Aaliya's though with the help of some flashbacks, scenes were adorable to read, The breakfast fiasco, loved it... Again loved this Aayat-Zain bond, u know I liked ur Aayat-Zain bond better than the series...

Then the epic day out... I don't need to google for the beauty of Bhopal, with ur descriptive words I now know how beautiful Bhopal is... that swing scene was sooo cute and adorable. Sometimes I also think to sit on those in parks, but then if that breaks? 😲 😆

The restaurant talk, I loved that Zain didn't said any old lines or within night didn't fall in love but he just gave a chance to their relation. That's the highlighted beauty of the ss... I guess you changed this part and again wrote up, as u said in the note...

The last, the two holding hands, and walking towards mosque after enjoying the beauty of Bhopal lake. with ur words u have given life to the lakes, trees, soils of Bhopal, it was like being in the place myself...

I have completed reading it few days ago, but didn't want to just post a chotu comment, and wanted to share...I think I am not tooo late 😛 😆

Hope to read more ZaYa works from you soon... waiting...

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fee-fee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

This was amazing. I truly enjoyed it.

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piggie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

i like the confession a lot.!

"though i am not the best guy..let me love you..!" hard accepting zain saying that.!

n the previous part game was really nice aayat ditched both of them.. n he teaching her maths.. n aliya being poor in maths..!

superb..!

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: preity_d
Beautiful... The way the chapter starts with Aaliya's though with the help of some flashbacks, scenes were adorable to read, The breakfast fiasco, loved it... Again loved this Aayat-Zain bond, u know I liked ur Aayat-Zain bond better than the series...

Then the epic day out... I don't need to google for the beauty of Bhopal, with ur descriptive words I now know how beautiful Bhopal is... that swing scene was sooo cute and adorable. Sometimes I also think to sit on those in parks, but then if that breaks? 😲 😆

The restaurant talk, I loved that Zain didn't said any old lines or within night didn't fall in love but he just gave a chance to their relation. That's the highlighted beauty of the ss... I guess you changed this part and again wrote up, as u said in the note...

The last, the two holding hands, and walking towards mosque after enjoying the beauty of Bhopal lake. with ur words u have given life to the lakes, trees, soils of Bhopal, it was like being in the place myself...

I have completed reading it few days ago, but didn't want to just post a chotu comment, and wanted to share...I think I am not tooo late 😛 😆

Hope to read more ZaYa works from you soon... waiting...

Firstly Thank You for making the effort to write a longer review, Means a lot to me :)

As a writer, at times I am not sure if what I tried to convey even reached my reader, so it is always a pleasure to hear about the story from another's point of view in theor own words :)

I imagined Ayat-Zain as such. They are two easy-going friendly people. Elder bro-lil sis is always a cute relation to explore 😆 😳

As for the swings in the park, I just love the thought..

It had to be an acceptance at the end, I asked Nanz to remember this important point, as through the VM trailer I didn't want readers expectations to peak in any way. So the brilliant mind that she has, she ended the VM with a handshake. I found it lovely. 😳

I would just say Bhopal is a beautiful place..

Thinking of the next story for Zaya, it hasn't come to me yet...will let you know via PM. Thanks once again, for all the appreciation and support :)

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: fee-fee
This was amazing. I truly enjoyed it.

Thank you, am glad you liked it :) 😳

Edited by AnotherAdmirer - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: piggie
i like the confession a lot.!
"though i am not the best guy..let me love you..!" hard accepting zain saying that.!
n the previous part game was really nice aayat ditched both of them.. n he teaching her maths.. n aliya being poor in maths..!
superb..!

Thank you :)

It was difficult to write Zain's acceptance, a week or more after that in the show I was blown away by Zain's acceptance, it was phenomenal !

Ayat is Zaya's sister, one can not forget 😆

Zain boasts of his maths, and Aliya I believed she had to have a weak subject, and maths It would be.

Edited by AnotherAdmirer - 10 years ago

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

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edit: double post :/ Edited by AnotherAdmirer - 10 years ago

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