KR OS :Captured flames - Page 4

Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Ahhh I am truly in love wid this song from last year when the movie released...

N now aft ArSha's performance it has become my fav more!!!!!

Gud work n just luved it!!!!!

Kitna control karenge??? Accha hua that they lost all their control...

Keep on writing more OS!!!!!

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..Re..

@..Re..

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

🤢

My dear friend vaish first of all how f**king dare you!!😡

This OS is so so so hot like I am burning here plus the song's lyrics...🤢 dead dead dead...mai to Mar hi gayi..

You made me fall in love with your work again... (just read some of your previous works)

I loved this so much and still how dare you write such hot things like it should be illegal...

On a serious note this was bomb!! Superliner

P.S did I mention I love you 😃

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Woaps what was dat

deadly OS

i was like what da?

Awesome

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451289

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing ...

Super hot ...

Loved it ..

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Ankita

@anki_22

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

RES😆

UNRES

why god why..?? why exactly I didn't read this before..?? arghhh!! anyway, coming back to the OS!

I've read a number of OSs... feelings, desire and want... angst and layers... But this one..?? it's soo full of pure love..😳
Both of them want each other, both of them want to make the other one know what they really feel, both trying, and both of them actually succeeds on it finally.. the perfect use of lyrics, the purity, the flow was too beautiful..
I honestly LOUVED the way of their mind was written.. kabhi Rey kabhi Kriya.. kitna similer feelings hain, but still kitna alag..!!😊

a huge a applause👏👏
Edited by anki_22 - 10 years ago

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Simmi/Anela

@LoveShakti

Groupbie

Posted: 10 years ago

Hot - Sensual- steamy

it was a bliss to read

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

I won't comment on the hotness. I am pretty sure, there are many who would have done that...

But the emotions came out really well.. There was a flow matching both emotions and the intimacy..

I loved the way he was trying to have a control over his feelings..

par kitne time tak bhaagega.. kabhi na kabhi toh hona hi tha.. 'bahon ke darmiyaan' 😆

This definitely was a hot-steamy one-shots...

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Tha was... nyccc... <3

ahm ahm 😉

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

dis is freaking hot Vaish

you knw very well how to play wid words

yaar can't xplain abi halat kya Hai hahaha

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