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vaishali

@-Vaish-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 10 years ago

I know I am super late. But give me one more day. I came here with the intent of reading it, but my eyes aren't opening. Kal tak ruk. Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 10 years ago

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

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Posted: 10 years ago

You know a fic has done it's job well when padhte padhte aapke dil ki dharkan barh jaati hai. And this does that. And you're like aage kya? Ab kya? I love the ambience, the setting, the build up. How their thought process worked. I like how Rey started off resisting and then gave in. I like this go-getter Kria who isn't shy or timid and I like you Vaish for writing this and for giving me yet another reason to love this song and making me hope again that perhaps this time, they show something like this (I mean the emotional rationale, not the *ahem*)!

Also yes, this is wow and I'm blushing and yes! All mixed into one!

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 10 years ago

OMG...this was HOT.. 😲

No not Hot... BLOODY f**kING HOTTT..

DAMNNN...

Ek toh already m having a hard time since Shakti uploaded that picha aur upar se tu... :/

I loveddd that start ka moment when you showed Kriya moving her hands over Rey's shoulder..and when he looked at her..he was gone...i just loved that...

beech ka part...how u described it..i loved that...

Make out part was super HOT... marr gayi mai...

litrelly died when she clutched the sand in her hands.. sand sticking to her body... rey teasing her... HOLYYY CRAPPP... *dies*

Loved it be... loved it..

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924302

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is something I've always been apprehensive of attempting- recreate a dynamic performance in words. And you have done it so well, your pace is lucid and language eloquent, creating the exact pace for the song. And listening to the song simultaneously makes this a beautiful experience- I've been reading this and listening to the song over and over for the past half hour.

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FareedaArSha

@FareedaArSha

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Posted: 10 years ago

This bloody hottt man... Superbbb...

The start... The make out and they way u wrote... Wow

loved it. Superrr awesome

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 10 years ago

OMGGG

Baisssuuu...Ye kya kar diya tune??? *__________*

Behen...You Can't imagine my condition. So forget about getting a bada sa..Sane sa comment. -____-

YAAARRR!! This OS. The Ahem part *_____* You know what was its beauty? The Emotions. Vaish, You play with words and Emotions so well... *________*
Damn Damn Damn... I just can't correct my breathing. Baisssuuuhhh! ☺️ BABE! THIS WAS SOOO f**kING HOTTT Yet Perfectly Weaved with Different Emotions.

Damn, You portrayed their feelings SOOO well *_____*

Mai chali marne. *_______* Edited by Incandescence. - 10 years ago

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968104

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Posted: 10 years ago

I'm officially speechless (Is that correct??)...

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

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Posted: 10 years ago

only thing i have to say is TO HOT TO HANDE Supab

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

hot n passionate one.. M blushing.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..

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