Poem: Dupatta (ArshiHamesha Birthday special)

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Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.
 
This poem is inspired by ArshiHamesha's post on the dupatta called the Journey of dupatta.
 

 
Special thanks to aarwen for bringing out the topic because of which ArshiHamesha made this post.
 
ArshiHamesha has just celebrated her birthday and I dedicate this poem to her on the occasion.
 
Faiqa, this is for you 🤗 . Wanted to post this on your birthday, but didn't want to hurry and mess it up. So, just a little bit late. 😳 
 
 
Dupatta
 
 
Sarsar karta hawa mein jaise mast magan ud jaaye
Piya ko dekh, sudh budh khoye, man gagan choo jaaye  
Baar baar ye saraahe unko, aur kareeb le jaaye
Ek hi jhalak mein pehchane unko, albela, matwala dupatta  
 
Jaate huye ko rokne ke liye, dhoondhe kayee bahaane
Kabhi file, kabhi ghadi ya aur koyi kadi, jis se bhi ho jakad jaaye
Gaadi jaise dost ho iska, baar baar isee se ulajh jaaye
Door na jaana piya se, kehta sharaarti, natkhat dupatta
 
Piya ke haath se sar par odhli, apna haq jataaye
Yehi hai jeevan sangini kehte, piya ke paas ud jaaye
Kabhi parda, kabhi saadi bankar piya ko yaad dilaye
Anchaahe vivaah mein bhi naache, sayana, prasanna dupatta
 
Prem ke gulaab khilne lagey, mausam rangbirangi ho jaaye  
Na samshay, na sankoch, na koyi rok, haq se haath mein jaaye  
Alhad premiyon ko paas laane ka saadhan ye ban jaaye
Sharm se jhuki palkon ko dekh mand mand muskaaye dupatta
 
Kavach yehi, raksha yehi, sammaan ka hai chinha yehi
Do premiyon ke beech mein judey, prem ka hai bandhan yehi
Apni sangini ke suraksha ka ban jaata hai vachan yehi  
Iss prem kahani ka hai  ek eham kirdaar ye dupatta
 
Translation:
 
Swaying about, swooning,  it flies in the air  
Watching the beloved, losing senses, the heart touches the sky   
Again and again, caresses him, takes one more close  
Recognising him in one sight, innocent, drowsy dupatta  
 
To stop someone from going, searches for many excuses  
Sometimes file, sometimes watch or some other link, to whichever it can catch on  
The car as if, is its friend, gets entangled to it again and again  
Don't go away from your beloved, says the prankful, naughty dupatta
 
From the hands of the beloved, adorned the head with it, displaying its right
She is your life partner, saying so flies away to the beloved  
Sometimes as curtain, sometimes as saree, it reminds the beloved  
Dances in the unwanted wedding too, is the wise, satisfied dupatta
 
The roses of love are blooming, the aura becomes colourful   
No doubts, no hesitation, nor any halt, with right it goes into the hand   
To bring the young lovers close, it becomes the means  
Watching the bashful eyelids go downwards, the dupatta gives out a mild smile  
 
It's the shield, the protection, the symbol of respect  
It is the bonding of love connecting two lovers  
It becomes the promise for protection of his partner   
An essential character of this love story is this dupatta
 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Durga I can't believe what you and Faiqa managed to do with just a dupatta.. Am sure she will love her bday gift. Way to go my talented friend 👏
I am having a tough time picking my favourite lines.. So picking many 😊

Ek hi jhalak mein pehchane unko, albela, matwala dupatta  
Kabhi file, kabhi ghadi ya aur koyi kadi, jis se bhi ho jakad jaaye
Alhad premiyon ko paas laane ka saadhan ye ban jaaye
Iss prem kahani ka hai  ek eham kirdaar ye dupatta


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Originally posted by: DurgaS


 
 
Dupatta
 
 
Sarsar karta hawa mein jaise mast magan ud jaaye
Piya ko dekh, sudh budh khoye, man gagan choo jaaye  
Baar baar ye saraahe unko, aur kareeb le jaaye
Ek hi jhalak mein pehchane unko, albela, matwala dupatta  
 
Jaate huye ko rokne ke liye, dhoondhe kayee bahaane
Kabhi file, kabhi ghadi ya aur koyi kadi, jis se bhi ho jakad jaaye
Gaadi jaise dost ho iska, baar baar isee se ulajh jaaye
Door na jaana piya se, kehta sharaarti, natkhat dupatta
 
Piya ke haath se sar par odhli, apna haq jataaye
Yehi hai jeevan sangini kehte, piya ke paas ud jaaye
Kabhi parda, kabhi saadi bankar piya ko yaad dilaye
Anchaahe vivaah mein bhi naache, sayana, prasanna dupatta
 
Prem ke gulaab khilne lagey, mausam rangbirangi ho jaaye  
Na samshay, na sankoch, na koyi rok, haq se haath mein jaaye  
Alhad premiyon ko paas laane ka saadhan ye ban jaaye
Sharm se jhuki palkon ko dekh mand mand muskaaye dupatta
 
Kavach yehi, raksha yehi, sammaan ka hai chinha yehi
Do premiyon ke beech mein judey, prem ka hai bandhan yehi
Apni sangini ke suraksha ka ban jaata hai vachan yehi  
Iss prem kahani ka hai  ek eham kirdaar ye dupatta
 
Translation:
 
Swaying about, swooning,  it flies in the air  
Watching the beloved, losing senses, the heart touches the sky   
Again and again, caresses him, takes one more close  
Recognising him in one sight, innocent, drowsy dupatta  
 
To stop someone from going, searches for many excuses  
Sometimes file, sometimes watch or some other link, to whichever it can catch on  
The car as if, is its friend, gets entangled to it again and again  
Don't go away from your beloved, says the prankful, naughty dupatta
 
From the hands of the beloved, adorned the head with it, displaying its right
She is your life partner, saying so flies away to the beloved  
Sometimes as curtain, sometimes as saree, it reminds the beloved  
Dances in the unwanted wedding too, is the wise, satisfied dupatta
 
The roses of love are blooming, the aura becomes colourful   
No doubts, no hesitation, nor any halt, with right it goes into the hand   
To bring the young lovers close, it becomes the means  
Watching the bashful eyelids go downwards, the dupatta gives out a mild smile  
 
It's the shield, the protection, the symbol of respect  
It is the bonding of love connecting two lovers  
It becomes the promise for protection of his partner   
An essential character of this love story is this dupatta
 


FANTASTIC POEM. 👏 👏 👏
Love it's banner. You capture almost every memorable dupatta scene where Arnav was bewitched.   ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
My most favorite line in the poem is "It becomes the promise for protection of his partner "
The last lines told the whole journey of dupatta and it's importance in their lives. 
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Originally posted by: aarwen

Wow Durga I can't believe what you and Faiqa managed to do with just a dupatta.. Am sure she will love her bday gift. Way to go my talented friend 👏

I am having a tough time picking my favourite lines.. So picking many 😊

Ek hi jhalak mein pehchane unko, albela, matwala dupatta  
Kabhi file, kabhi ghadi ya aur koyi kadi, jis se bhi ho jakad jaaye
Alhad premiyon ko paas laane ka saadhan ye ban jaaye
Iss prem kahani ka hai  ek eham kirdaar ye dupatta


 
 
Thanks for choosing your favourite lines. Faiqa's post is really awesome. I just put the same in poetical form. 😊
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Originally posted by: Javeria3991

FANTASTIC POEM. 👏 👏 👏

Love it's banner. You capture almost every memorable dupatta scene where Arnav was bewitched.   ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
My most favorite line in the poem is "It becomes the promise for protection of his partner "
The last lines told the whole journey of dupatta and it's importance in their lives. 

 
Thank you for loving it so much Javeria. The last few lines are inspired from Faiqa's dupatta post. The dupattta has played a key role throughout the story trying to bind them all the time. Towards the end it does become a mark of protection.
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Magnificent poem Durgey! How beautifully you have written in verse what Faiqu expressed so splendidly in the Journey of Dupatta! Two great minds at work makes a spectacular post! ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 🤗
Loved what you said about dupatta being an eham kirdar/ important character of this lovestory!! The following dupatta scene is my all time favourite. I had also used it in a sense in The Broken Bed if you remember.



In her post I was so touched by what Faiqu said...Khushi got married wearing the same gold, pink and green dupatta combination that she had worn to Sheeshmahal, the first time she met ASR!

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Happy birthday Arshihamesha
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Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

 
This poem is inspired by ArshiHamesha's post on the dupatta called the Journey of dupatta.
 

 
Special thanks to aarwen for bringing out the topic because of which ArshiHamesha made this post.
 
ArshiHamesha has just celebrated her birthday and I dedicate this poem to her on the occasion.
 
Faiqa, this is for you 🤗 . Wanted to post this on your birthday, but didn't want to hurry and mess it up. So, just a little bit late. 😳 
 
 
Dupatta
 
 
Sarsar karta hawa mein jaise mast magan ud jaaye
Piya ko dekh, sudh budh khoye, man gagan choo jaaye  
Baar baar ye saraahe unko, aur kareeb le jaaye
Ek hi jhalak mein pehchane unko, albela, matwala dupatta  
 
Jaate huye ko rokne ke liye, dhoondhe kayee bahaane
Kabhi file, kabhi ghadi ya aur koyi kadi, jis se bhi ho jakad jaaye
Gaadi jaise dost ho iska, baar baar isee se ulajh jaaye
Door na jaana piya se, kehta sharaarti, natkhat dupatta
 
Piya ke haath se sar par odhli, apna haq jataaye
Yehi hai jeevan sangini kehte, piya ke paas ud jaaye
Kabhi parda, kabhi saadi bankar piya ko yaad dilaye
Anchaahe vivaah mein bhi naache, sayana, prasanna dupatta
 
Prem ke gulaab khilne lagey, mausam rangbirangi ho jaaye  
Na samshay, na sankoch, na koyi rok, haq se haath mein jaaye  
Alhad premiyon ko paas laane ka saadhan ye ban jaaye
Sharm se jhuki palkon ko dekh mand mand muskaaye dupatta
 
Kavach yehi, raksha yehi, sammaan ka hai chinha yehi
Do premiyon ke beech mein judey, prem ka hai bandhan yehi
Apni sangini ke suraksha ka ban jaata hai vachan yehi  
Iss prem kahani ka hai  ek eham kirdaar ye dupatta
 
Translation:
 
Swaying about, swooning,  it flies in the air  
Watching the beloved, losing senses, the heart touches the sky   
Again and again, caresses him, takes one more close  
Recognising him in one sight, innocent, drowsy dupatta  
 
To stop someone from going, searches for many excuses  
Sometimes file, sometimes watch or some other link, to whichever it can catch on  
The car as if, is its friend, gets entangled to it again and again  
Don't go away from your beloved, says the prankful, naughty dupatta
 
From the hands of the beloved, adorned the head with it, displaying its right
She is your life partner, saying so flies away to the beloved  
Sometimes as curtain, sometimes as saree, it reminds the beloved  
Dances in the unwanted wedding too, is the wise, satisfied dupatta
 
The roses of love are blooming, the aura becomes colourful   
No doubts, no hesitation, nor any halt, with right it goes into the hand   
To bring the young lovers close, it becomes the means  
Watching the bashful eyelids go downwards, the dupatta gives out a mild smile  
 
It's the shield, the protection, the symbol of respect  
It is the bonding of love connecting two lovers  
It becomes the promise for protection of his partner   
An essential character of this love story is this dupatta
 



i loved every word... that personification of the floating two and a half metres of fine material, lovely. like the flying carpet in alladin's tale, the dupatta in a and k's story... beautiful poem... one of your best. the words you use... samshay, sankoch, alhad premiyon, mand mand muskaay, sangini... i really like your choice of words. 👏 👏 👏 👏
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wow loved it 

its awesome
my fav part is the last stanza ...
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Dupatta
 
 
Sarsar karta hawa mein jaise mast magan ud jaaye
Piya ko dekh, sudh budh khoye, man gagan choo jaaye  
Baar baar ye saraahe unko, aur kareeb le jaaye
Ek hi jhalak mein pehchane unko, albela, matwala dupatta  
 
Jaate huye ko rokne ke liye, dhoondhe kayee bahaane
Kabhi file, kabhi ghadi ya aur koyi kadi, jis se bhi ho jakad jaaye
Gaadi jaise dost ho iska, baar baar isee se ulajh jaaye
Door na jaana piya se, kehta sharaarti, natkhat dupatta
 
Piya ke haath se sar par odhli, apna haq jataaye
Yehi hai jeevan sangini kehte, piya ke paas ud jaaye
Kabhi parda, kabhi saadi bankar piya ko yaad dilaye
Anchaahe vivaah mein bhi naache, sayana, prasanna dupatta
 
Prem ke gulaab khilne lagey, mausam rangbirangi ho jaaye  
Na samshay, na sankoch, na koyi rok, haq se haath mein jaaye  
Alhad premiyon ko paas laane ka saadhan ye ban jaaye
Sharm se jhuki palkon ko dekh mand mand muskaaye dupatta
 
Kavach yehi, raksha yehi, sammaan ka hai chinha yehi
Do premiyon ke beech mein judey, prem ka hai bandhan yehi
Apni sangini ke suraksha ka ban jaata hai vachan yehi  
Iss prem kahani ka hai  ek eham kirdaar ye dupatta
 
Translation:
 
Swaying about, swooning,  it flies in the air  
Watching the beloved, losing senses, the heart touches the sky   
Again and again, caresses him, takes one more close  
Recognising him in one sight, innocent, drowsy dupatta  
 
To stop someone from going, searches for many excuses  
Sometimes file, sometimes watch or some other link, to whichever it can catch on  
The car as if, is its friend, gets entangled to it again and again  
Don't go away from your beloved, says the prankful, naughty dupatta
 
From the hands of the beloved, adorned the head with it, displaying its right
She is your life partner, saying so flies away to the beloved  
Sometimes as curtain, sometimes as saree, it reminds the beloved  
Dances in the unwanted wedding too, is the wise, satisfied dupatta
 
The roses of love are blooming, the aura becomes colourful   
No doubts, no hesitation, nor any halt, with right it goes into the hand   
To bring the young lovers close, it becomes the means  
Watching the bashful eyelids go downwards, the dupatta gives out a mild smile  
 
It's the shield, the protection, the symbol of respect  
It is the bonding of love connecting two lovers  
It becomes the promise for protection of his partner   
An essential character of this love story is this dupatta
 
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Beautiful personification of this Dupatta Durga , I think you put all of their feelings in this rhyming piece.Love Love the  choices of words,...Shield, protection, respect, connection, promise, character,swaying and swooing.

just loved it ,adored it , classic piece.How this one element became so important piece of their lives which brought them closer and closer each time.

My fav


Thank You Durga for this nice treat
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 10 years ago