HUMSAAYA # 2.....new thread link in the Index...

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Posted: 2014-02-21T11:14:40Z
 







  



  Prologue


She started driving the car with high speed even the road is not clear enough because of her tears...She wanted to reach farm house as soon as possible...She never thought that Maan would do this to her...She wanted to see what Maan, her husband is doing there...with whom he is spending his time rather than with her...


In the Farm house...


Both are cuddling in the Bed...She kept her head on his chest and sleeping...Maan again started teasing her...Maan plz sone do...main bohut thak gayi hoon...aap na bohut tang karte hain mujhe...


Nahi jaan...kya karooon Tum aise mere saamne ho toh kuch aur soojhta hi nahi...jitna bhi samay tumhare saath bitaoon...kam lagta hain...I love you Jaan...Ab mujhe se nahi hoga jaan...


Mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta hai maan...aap se iss tarah milna...lekin ..Hum kya kar sakte hain ...


Maan didn't respond...he started thinking how to come out the situation...She felt bad...Chaliye Maan bhook lagi hain...kuch banate hain...


Aap ka fav pasta mere haath ka she said with a huge smile...


Maan nodded and smiled at her effort to change his Mood...She picked her clothes and wore them...she left her dupatta there itself...and waited for him...he wore his tracks  and both went towards kitchen...


She started cooking and he helped her in assembling all the required things. Kitchen is filled with her musical voice...and the sweet smell of her cooking...Maan came and hugged her from behind, took the spoon and tasted the sauce...Perfect jaan...just the way i like it...


Her face beamed with happiness and she turned to face him...He smiled and kissed her hand and then her temple...and said...love you jaan...


And then...They heard Claps of someone...Maan left her and turned around to see Meera standing there...Both felt uncomfortable in front of Meera..but Maan didn't leave her Hand...


Meera - Wah Maan Wah...Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Mere peeche aap yeh karr rahe hain...sharm nahi aati...shaadi shuda hoke aap yeh sab karr rahe hain...aur GEET tum...maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum aisi harkat karogi...sharm nahi aati tumhe...kaisi ladki ho tum jo kisi aur ke pati se aisa rishta jod rahi ho...


Maan - Bas Meera... Geet ke khilaf ek aur shabd nahi sununga main...Geet tugged his hand lightly telling him to stop...she shook her head in a no...


Meera - Oh baat yaha tak pohunch gayi...Ab tum bataogi Maan ko ki woh mujse kaise baat kare...Shame on you geet...kaisi ladki ho tum...kaisi parvarish di hai tumhare parents ne... 



Plz ignore the spell mistakes and Hindi grammer mistakes...


Here is the Prologue...Tell me Should I continue...Give me ur view...

Edited by -indu- - 2014-07-04T22:32:46Z
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Posted: 2014-02-21T11:15:02Z



Character Sketch...


Maan Singh Khurana...A Young Business Maan...Recently Married...
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Geet Handa...

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Savitri Khurana - Maan 's Dadi...HOD of Khurana FamilyLOL
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RajVeer Khurana...Naina Khurana...Younger brother of Maan and his wife...

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Ananya Khurana... Maans sister...

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Ranbir Khurana...Maan's Youngest Brother...
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Aakanksha Khurana...Daughter of Veer and Naina

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Rohan ...

Gaurav Khanna

Inder and Jasmeet Handa...

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And Meera...

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And our KC team as usual...Adi, Pinky, Sasha, Romeo...
Edited by -indu- - 2014-06-23T00:50:03Z
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Posted: 2014-02-21T11:15:27Z
                  
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Part 9 - below            











  Edited by -indu- - 2014-07-04T22:31:59Z
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Posted: 2014-02-21T11:15:42Z



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Thank you a ton  for the lovely banners...Priya And Mayu...HugHeart
Edited by -indu- - 2014-06-23T01:11:02Z
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Posted: 2014-02-21T11:16:09Z





Thanks a lot for every one for your support...Here is the next Part...shower ur love on this one too...Wink



                                                                   Part 9

Geet and Anu called children one by one and asked them tell some thing about their costume...They gave gifts to every child...At last Angel came in Cinderella costume...and she was looking very cute...She came to the stage and told about her costume...All clapped and then refreshments were served... the cake was about to cut the light went off...and someone in the mask of Krish stood at the middle of the garden and the focus light was on him...the kids shouted krish...krish...krish...then he  came farward and lifted angel in his arms...

 

Angel shouted...Chachu...


It was Ranbir, the younger khurana who came as krish...He removed his Mask...All gathered around Ranbir ...


Ranbir - Happy Birthday Angel...and kissed her both cheeks...


Angel - Thank you chachu...


Ranbir - Appki Birthday Party toh bohut achi hain...kisne kiya...


Angel beamed with happiness - Anu bua aur Pari ne...


Ranbir ook Dadi's blessings and met every one...


Ranbir turned to Angel and asked...Yeh pari kaun hain....


Angel was about to answer...Dadi said in between...App baad mein Geet se mil lena..abhi cake cutting ka time hain, saare bache wait karr rahe hain...


All Moved to the table where cake was kept...It was a beautiful Peacock cake as Angel loves Peacock very much...


(Jai ho Google Baba kiWink)


The cake was cut and everyone Fed Angel...Later a magician came and entertained the kids. The kids and everyone enjoyed the magic show...Later Dinner was served...


The special attraction was the chocolate cake in the form of Hat...


Children enjoyed their dinner...Most of the Kids left after dinner...Angel was sleepy after the energetic day, So naina took her inside...


A very few Family friends and close associates of Maan and Veer were present...


One of them is Mr. Chopra...He is a partner and One of the BOD of KC...


Mr. Chopra Came to the place where Anu Geet and Meera were standing...


Mr. Chopra to Anu...Anu, Party toh bohut achi hain...Bachon ne bohut enjoy kiya...


Anu - Thank you Uncle...


He then enquired about the person who made the arrangements...


Meera said...Mr chopra.Yeh sab geet ne Kiya hain...zyyada ideas ussi ke hain...


Mr. Chopra who was impressed with the arrangements asked Geet whether she Could arrange a party like this for his grand daughters birthday...which is coming Soon...


Geet was about to answer...But Meera said...Haa accept karlo Geet...Mr chopta ka offer...tumhara hi faayda hain...bohut saare paise milenge...aisi aur 2 -3 parties arrange karogi toh aur bhi paise aayenge...toh tumhe kisi aur ke ghar mein rehna nahi padega...tum apne liye ghar kaheed sakto ho...Aur KC mein jo salary milti hain usse zaaya paise bhacha paogi tum...



Geet was numb hearing her words...Meera saying things in ignorance are hurting her...Some how meera could not digest the fact the Geet is becoming important for her family members...and the way  Maan treats Geet is also adding to her insecurities...

 

Maan was watching Geet, He felt the change in her...Suddenly her face which had a bright Smile turned Sad and Hurt...He moved towards her excusing the Person whom he is talking...

 

Dadi also came there hearing Meera's Words...Even she felt hurt Seeing geet's Face...Some where she felt responsible for Geets's condition


Dadi - Mr. Chopra... Geet yeh sab nahi karegi...WOh hum hain isliye unhone ne kiya...Unhone hamari madad ki hain kyun ki woh yehi rehti hain...yeh uska bhi ghar hain...jitna anu aur Naina ka hain...


Meera - Isme kya burayi hain Dadi...Geet yaha job ke lye hi aayi haina...yeh bhi karegi toh usse aur paise milenge...


Dadi - Baat yaha paison ki nah hain meera...Aur aapko kuch bhi nahi maloom hain toh aap chup rahiye...Dadi said in a stern voice...


Meera was shocked at Dadi's Words ad Dadi never used this tone, she always made conversations with love...Meera became silent...


Dadi - Mr. Chopra...Geet yaha Paison ke liye nahi aayi hain....aur uske Ghar walon ke shaan ke khilaf hain...


Mr. Chopra...Nahi Mrs. Khurana...Maine asia nahi kaha...Main bas chahta tha ki meri poti ka birthday party bhi aise hi ho...bass...Toh Main chalta hoon...


He placed his hand on Geet's head and blessed her...Geet aap...bura mat maniyega...maine jo kaha uske liye...


Geet nodded with her head still hung down...Mr. Chopra left from there...And others too...


Geet slowly made her way inside...She could not understand why meera said all that...she went to her Room and locked it...She slowly went to Bed and sat there thinking...


Downstairs...


Dadi is very upset with Meera and Maan angry...


Dadi was about to go after Geet...but seeing Maan's anger she stoped there, she feared Maan may do something in his anger...


Meera seeing Maan's angry face - Maan kya hua aap itne gusse mein kyun hain...


Dadi closed her eyes...Oh God...Yeh Meera chup nahi reh sakti kya...


Dadi before Maan could say any thing....Meera Aap jaake sojayiye...she said in a stern voice...


Meera - Dadi aap mujhse abhi bhi naraz hain uss baat ko leke...maine socha ki geet ko ye ek acha mauka hain...


Maan's patience broke...Geet ke liye kya acha hain kya nahi yeh tumhe sochne ki zaroorat nahi hain...Uske liye sab hain...aur tumne aise kaise soch liya ki ko paison ki zaroorat hain...kabhi tumne usse dhyaan se dekha hain...usse dekh ke koi bhi kehsakta hain woh ek ache pariwar se belong karti hain...


Meera - Maan aap us ladki ke liye mujh pe gussa horahe hain....meera asked with tears in her eyes...she couldn't understand ahy Maan is supporting Geet instead of her...Anu and Ranbir were mute spectators...they couldnt say much in this matter as they don't know any thing about Geet...



Maan - Mat bhulo ki usse Dadi lekar aayi hain...aur woh Dadi ki friend ki poti hain...and for ur kind information...woh yaha isliye rehne nahi aayi kyun ki uske paas ghar nahi hain...isliye kyun ki Dadi ne bulaya hain...agar woh chahe toh aise mansion do din mein kharid sakti hain...Jo baatein tumhe nahi pata toh tum unme taang kyun adati ho...


Meera - Mujhe sach mein nahi pata hain Geet ke bare mein.....


Maan - Toh kyun kaha woh sab bahar...ek baar bhi nahi socha ki usse kaise lagega......


Saying that Maan left from there...Meera too ran away to her room...Anu and Dadi also retired to their rooms...


One person who is confused is Ranbir...He had known that his elder brother is married and Meera is his bhabhi...(source Anu) but he could not understand why they both are living in different rooms...and why his brother is more concerned with this GEET...he needed answers...He thought to ask in the morning...as it was late...



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Here is the next part...Give me ur views...


I'll be waiting...



Precap - Maan and Geet...

 

 






Edited by -indu- - 2014-02-21T11:58:13Z
Posted: 2014-02-21T11:29:34Z
congrats indu for the new threadClapClapClap
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Posted: 2014-02-21T11:33:40Z
congrates for new thread
waiting
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Posted: 2014-02-21T12:03:31Z
iss meera ko kya kareinAngryitna gussa aarahi hai ki usko khoob pitayi karoon. uski muh chup nahi rehthi hai kitna kuch kaha geet ko

chalo kam se kam dadi ne iss baar muh khola aur meera ko daanta


maan ko dekhkar aisa laga ki aaj meera tho gayiLOL

yeh ranbir ab jasoos khurana banne waala hai jaroor usko kuch doubt hogaya hai
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