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Here is the next part of Humsaaya...Hope u all love this one too...


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Part 10

Maan entered his room and Quickly changed his dress and ran to geet's room...He tried to enter but the door was locked...He wondered why Geet locked the room...she never does that...may be she doesn't want to see him in this situation...He tried to peep into the room through the window...there he saw Geet sitting on the bed in deep thoughts...he was relieved that Geet is not crying...So he decided to knock the door...



Geet opened the door after hearing Maan's voice...Maan entered hurriedly and asked...


Maan - Geet tum theek hona...


Geet - Haan Maan main theek hoon...


Maan pulled Geet into a hug...Maan again asked tum theek hona...


Geet - Haa Maan main theek hoon...


Maan - Woh Meera ne...


Geet - Main jaanti hoon Maan...unki soch galat nahi hain...par unhone jo kaha woh galat hain...main jaanti hoon woh kaisi hain...


Maan looked at geet confused...Kya meera pehle se hi aisi thi...


Geet - Haan Maan...but unke irade kabhi bhi galat nahi the...bas kehna kuch aur chahthi hain aur kuch aur kehdeti hain...isliye mujhe bura laga....


Maan - phir tum itna kyun soch rahi ho...


Geet - Meera ke mann mein kya chal raha hai uske bare mein soch rahi hoon......


Maan - Matlab.....


Geet - Woh aapko apna pati maanne lagi hain maan...mujhe isi ka darr hain...agar usse pata chalega ki main aap ki patni hoon toh kaise react karegi...aur unke memory par kya asar hoga...uska darr hain mujhe.....

Seeing her in same party dress Maan asked her to change first...Geet went to change and came...Both sat on the bed ...Maan again asked...


Maan - Ab batao... tum kya kehna chahti ho...


Geet - Maan meera aapko apna pati maanti hain...aur usse jab yeh pata chalega ki main aapki patni hoon...toh sochiye ki uske asar kaisa hoga...aur doctor ne kaha ki hume usse koi bhi baat nahi karni chahiye jisse unhe takleef ho...unke dimag par asar padh sakta hain...aur mujhe darr hain ki agar woh iss jhoot ko sach samjhkar...she stooped there looking into Maan's eyes...tears formed in her eyes...she moved forward and hugged him...Mujhe aapko nahi khona hain maan...Main jee nahi paaoongi...



Maan wiping her tears- Shh...geet aisa kuch nahi hoga...main aise nahi hone doonga...he hugged her...Mujhe pe bharosa rakho Geet...umm...abhi ke liye sojao...main malika se baat karoonga..iske bare mein...Geet nodded...ab chalo sojao...kal se office bhi join karna haina...


Geet - Haa...lekin kya main kar paoongi Maan...mujhe darr lagraha hain..waha sab experienced log hain...aur main fresher hoon...


Maan - Haa sab experienced log hain...lekin mujhe poora bahrosa hain tum par...aur anu bhi toh hogi...woh bhi fresher hi thi jab join kiya...


Geet - Umm...


Soon they slept as they were tired...


Next Morning...


Every one gatherd at the table for Breakfast...Maan is still in his room on call with adi...


Geet got ready and came down with her file and Bag...


Anu - Geet...All set to join Office...


Geet - Haa Anu..par thoda nervous hoon...Suna hi ki KC ke boss bohut strict hain...


Anu - Haa .yeh toh hain...woh bohut strict hain...aur jab unki office main kadam rakhti hoon toh aisa lagta hain ki koi loin ki den mein kadam rakh rahi hoon...aur unka moods ...pata nahi kab kise job se nikal de...toh zara bach ke rehna...


Meera was also present there...She was in a dilemma whether to talk to Geet or not...but after hearing anu's words she was distracted...


Meera - Anu, tum aise kaise baat kar sakto ho apne bhai ke bare mein....


Anu - Main job hi kaha sach kaha bhabhi...aap veer bhai se bhi pooch lijiye...aur waise bhi woh mere bhai hain...toh main unhe behtar jaanti hoon...she said a little annoyed


Geet kepr quiet...Veer also agreed that Maan is very strict in office...Again meera wondered she doesn't know any thing about Maan...


Seeing Maan all kept quiet...Maan neither looked at meera nor talked to her...He simply had BF and told veer he is leaving for the site with adi and will come to office later...


Maan went away...Geet and Anu went to office with Veer...


Naina took angel to her school...


Only Ranbir and Dadi along with Meera were present...


Meera felt very Bad seeing maan's indifference...Ranbir who is watching all this silently...tried to start the converstation...


RB- Dadi...bahi abhi bhi gussa hain..kyun...


Dadi - Kya tumhe pata nahi rb...Maan gussa kyun hain...tum bhi toh the na kal waha...


Rb - Lekin Meera bhabhi toh sirf Geet ji ki madad karna chahthi thi...isme kya baat hain...


Dadi - Madad karna mein koi buri baat nahi hain...lekin kisi ko neecha nahi dikhana chahiye...aur woh hamari guest hain ...aur koi guest ki insult karta hain kya...


Meera - Mera bilkul woh matlab nahi tha Dadi...


Dadi - Lekin aapki baton ka yehi matlab hai Meera...aap kuch kehne se pehle sochiti kyun nahi...agar ghar ki baat hoti toh alag baat thi...lekin aapne sab ke saamne Geet ko kitna kuch kaha...kya woh sahi tha...


Rb - phir bhi bhabhi ke intentions galat nahi the...Dadi...he tried to support Meera...


Dadi - Haa...main bhi maanti hoon ki Meera ka intentions galat nahi they...lekin inki baton ke wajah se Geet hurt toh hui...uska kya..hum gayatri ko kya jawab denge...ki unki pothi ka mere ghar mein apmaan hua aur maine kuch nahi kiya..


Meera - Mujhe sach mein nahi pata Dadi geet ke bare mein...


Dadi - Toh kyun boli woh sab aap...jab aap ko kuch nahi pata...she turned to RB and said...Socho RB agar koi aisi baaten anu ke liye kehta...tab bhi tum yehi kehte ke unka intentions sahi the...RB didn't reply...Nahi na...toh yeh galat hi haina......


RB -Ok Dadi...chodiye...ab batayiye yeh Geet kaun hain...aur yaha kyun aayi hain......


Dadi - Geet meri Friend Gayatri ki poti hain...woh Amritsar mein rehti hain...Unke waha Factoreis...aur Farms hain...Aur Geet ko kuch kaam that oh main usse yaha le aayi...aur usne job apply kiya...KC mein usse job mila...kyun ki woh kaam marna chahthi hai...


Rb - Geet ke pariwar mein kaun kaun hain......


Dadi - Gayatri, Geet ki Dadi, uske Dad Inder Handa...jo business dekhte hain ..., Mom Jasmeet...house wife hain...lekin woh farms ko dekhti hain...Tej Handa...Geet ka bada bhai...jo abhi US mein hain...kuch padhayi karr rahe hain...aur Gayatri ki naati bhi rehti hain...kyun ki uske mom aur dad nahi hain....


Rb - Umm...Toh Geet apne papa ke saath bhi kaam kar sakti hian...woh yah kyun aayi...


Dadi - Rb...aap apna questions baad mein pooch lena...main thak gayi hoon...aur medicines bhi lene hain...aur..thodi der aaraam karti hoon main......


With Dadi went away from there escaping Rb questions...


Rb turned to Meera and said...Bhabhi aap yeh sab bhul jayiye aur yeh sochiye ki kaise bhai ka gussa shaanth kiya jaaye...


Meera - Main kya karoon Rb...Woh toh mujhse baat bhi nahi ki...Mujhe pata nahi tha ki meri ek choti si suggestion itna gussa dilayega Maan ko...


Rb - Main bhi wohi soch raha hoon...Dadi ko gussa aaya samajh sakte hain...lekin Maan bhai ko itna gussa kyun aaya......


Meera - umm...toh ab kya Karen....


Rb - Sochte hain...


They kept on thinking for a while...and Rb came with an idea...


Rb - Bhabhi, aaj aap bhai ke liye lunch banbayiye aur khud office leke jaayiye aur apne haathon se khilayiye......


Meera liked the idea...umm...lekin ek problem hain...RB looked at her questioning...Meera replied...Mujhe nahi maloom ki Maan ko kya pasand hain...


Rb - Isme kya hian bhabhi...main hoon na...mujhe maloom hain...chalo ab kitchen mein chalete hain...


In kitchen after some time...


Meera is about to cry....RB mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaraha hain...Main kya karoon...


RB - Aap royiye mat...aap yehi rukiye main abhi aata hoon...Rb came after few min with his Ipad...Bhabhi isme dhoondte hain recipes...theek hain....


Meera .umm...


They searched for recipes...most of the recipes have ingredients that are not available in the kitchen...At last they had to take help of Nakul...


Nakl told them...and meera cooked the meal...


Rb - Bhabhi khushboo achi aarahi hain...hope isse baat ban jaaye...aap jaldi se ready hojayiye...


Meera got ready and came...Rb .Lekin Main waha akeli kaise jaoongi...mujhe koi nahi jaanta waha...aur koi yeh bhi nahi jaanta ki humari shaadi hui hain...


Rb thought for while and said - Ek kaam karte hain...Main bhi chalunga aapke saath...


Meera was relieved...RB and meera are about to leave for office...


Rb - Bhabhi ek min...bhai toh site par gaye haina...inhe call karke pooch ta hoon...Rb called Maan...but Maan's mobile was not reachable...


Meera - Ab kya kare....


Rb - Main adi ko call karta hoon...unhe pata hoga...


Rb Called adi...Adi picked up the call.


Rb - Adi main Rb ...bhai hain kya.....


Adi - Nahi Rb sir...woh abhi abhi nikle hain yaha se...


Rb - Ok thanks...Bye....He cuts the call...


Rb - Bhabhi...bhai site se nikal chuke hain...hum abhi niklenge toh bhai aane tak pohunch jaayenge...Chaliye...


Meera and Rb left for Office...

In office...


Geet completed all the formalities and joined the office...


Anu showed her the place of Work, introduced her to every one and went to do her work...Even Geet allotted some work...She went to Veer and worked there...


Two souls in Office are jealous of Geet...as she is geeting attention from Anu and Veer...They are none other than Sasha and her chamchi tasha...


Tasha - Sasha Mam..Aap dekh rahe hain iss nayi employee ko kitna attention mil raha hain Khuranas se...


Sasha - Mujhe samajh aaraha hain Tasha...Main iski chutti ek hafte mein kardungi...tum dekhti jao...




Precap - Lunch...


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Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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maan kitna upset hogaya hai chalo ab geet nie uski feelings tho batadiya patha nahi ab iss meera ka chutkar kab hoga😡
yeh RB kya cheez hai 😡😡phirse shuru kiya aur dadi ne bhi khoob suna diya dono ko👏👏

ab yeh meeera ko help karne waala hai maan ko kaise manana hai. aur saath mein milkar khana bhi banadiya.

ghar par itna dushman hai wo kam tha kya ab yeh dono sasha aur tasha aagaye office mein jo geet ko pareshan karne ki soch rahe hai

RB aur meera bhi aane waale hai lunch lekar patha nahi waha ab kya kya tamesha hone waali hai

Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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nice part tom ji
maan worried about geet
geet ko darr lagraha kahi wo maan ko kho na de😭😭
kya matlab hai geet ka meera pehle bhi aisi thi😕
dadi love you aur dato meera ko 😛 jab patha nahi tho kisi ke bareme tho bolna hi kyu tha usse
lo agaya babhi ka chela 🤔ok he thinks meera as his bhabi
ranbir kya idea diya tumne lunch leke ja rahe hai maan keliye
plz maan geet ke saath kahi chali javo lunch keliye 😉
lo chunni-munni jealous lo geet 🤣
geet ko office se nikalogi jab maan ko patha chalega na ur so dead😡
Iss GM ka kuch karo tom ji jaldi se aur plz ranbir ko jitna jaldi sacch patha chale utna accha hai
will be waiting for next part
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago

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