AarYa FF - Pangs of Separation- Epilogue on Pg-96 updated - Page 15

Originally posted by: Love2read

Lovely update...

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Shanti I've just read three chapters, and I can confidently say that after "Silent Conversations" this will be my favorite FF. Or maybe I'll love it equally. Or maybe more 😳

Thank you Nikki..among all my works I rate The Choice is Ours as my favourite...

Silent Conversations is close to my heart as it was my very first attempt...and I managed okay...

But i think this will be the most difficult one I am attempting...

First chapter was so good, the second one was more better than it and the third one left me speechless. What I won't be able to express in words, Saf has explained it so well in her comment.

I'm in love, love, love with this chapter. ❤️

Thank you --thank you---thank you!

Though Yash was in inebriated state, Aarti felt his real love for her. Which even Yash felt. He doesn't remember what happened last night, but he sure feels the change in him. Whatever doubts he had regarding his feelings, Aman's call cleared it instantly. Which made me a step towards Aarti, who was missing the love of her husband since last few months.

One right guy hug from her Yashji and she poured her pent up feelings in the form of tears in his arms . Best scene for me. ⭐️

Yes, I love writing such stuff...😳

Thanks dear...

Take your time to tell what the reason of their separation is, I'm in no hurry, as I'm loving and enjoy uni each and every word, every scenes so far 😳

Originally posted by: roserosey

so lovely update shanthi...⭐️

Thank you so much dear...you really have been so encouraging always...and the best thing I like about you is the lovely positive comments you write for all we writers...to keep us trying to better ourselves...speaks a lot of your nature...Thank you so much!

as u said i was surprised to see yash reaction in this way...though he is unaware of what exactly happened last night as of now still something inside him making him feel good and happy too...i m really glad to know that yash atlast took a step and gave a chance to his heart ...

Even if I try hard to show Yash with some negative traits, I end up showing him as one caring person...so I had to show him as the one to now give Aarti all the support and love that she craved for...of course he was happy doing it too...😳

as a true friend aman did a lot with hiswords,...once again he indirectly made yash to realise what aarthi means to him(yash)...

Sometimes a third party intervention really helps...but that party should be close yet not too interfering...Aman as a friend was just right for this...and so I brought his character here...to give the relation a push...

best moment was the hug scene atlast two tortured souls found solace in each other s arms...after so long seperation...⭐️...

That was my favourite scene too for I could not have let my lovely readers without a feel good effect to linger on during the weekend.

according to me this update will be the hero of the SS⭐️⭐️...fantastic shanthi⭐️...

Is part ka reply main de chuki hoon...😛

And worried too...if I can do better...😭

Originally posted by: nan0102

great update..loved so much dear..hope everything will be okay between yash and aarti after this

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Gaane mein jawab...

Mujhe Dar Hai Mujh Men Ghuroor Aa Na Jaaye😳
Lagun Jhoomane Main, Suroor Aa Na Jaaye😳
Kahin Dil Ye Mera Ye, Taarif Sun Kar
Tumhaara Bane Aur, Mujhe Bhool Jaaye

Bahut Shukriyaa Badi Meharabaani
Meri Zindagi Men Huzoor Aap Aaye
Qadam Chuum Lun Ya Ye, Aankhen Bichha Dun
Karun Kya Ye Meri, Samajh Men Na Aaye

🤗

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Can't believe that I'm first 😲

Shanti now you are killing me 😡. Now I can't wait till tomorrow. 😭. So you better update it by the time I wake up in the morning 😆

After reading the promo, I think Yash's hurt is more about the loss that he had incurred. And unluckily, that fateful day something happened between Aarti and him. That's why he's lashing it on Aarti. And that's why he's hurting more, as he's hurting his JAAN 😭.

Hope my analysis is right. Well like I said that I'm ready to wait. Take your time to disclose what actually happened.

I'll just wait to read my AarYa moments, written by You

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Now - this update will be worth reading - am not a person Shanti to give U satisfaction of my 'Nice' update comments 'cause I know ur worth -- my confusion of contradiction will be answered in the following update and will give me satisfaction of reading further...hope so...a promo NOT worth waiting BUT worth NOW...impatient...and waiting.