AarYa FF - Pangs of Separation- Epilogue on Pg-96 updated

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Sweetu

@SwtuAryan_Ishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Superrbb Update di..👏
Cant wait for next part..

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palbhar

@palbhar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Awesome update!!!!!! Glad Yash is making efforts to show love to Aarti!!!!!!!

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ns1970

@ns1970

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Wonderful update love yash and aarti closeness wishing the best for both of them and maybe Aman will play a part in getting back to where they were

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

All the emotions that Yash bottled up against Arti simply melted by pure love making - washing away the stress, doubt, anger, ego and changing him into a better and a lighter person. The only thing is Yash experienced the change in him but was unable to know the reason of the change due to his inebriated condition though the feeling of loved and being loved was felt but wasn't sure.

Am eager to know the reason as I am a bit confused with the change - though Yash liked the idea of having Aman at his place as this could give him some 'common moments'. I don't want an answer for this particular confusion for I am sure to get it in your upcoming updates - for sure.

Loved the quotes of 'Nora Roberts' and 'Stephen Kendrik'.

Think I have to wait patiently for U to reveal what happend on 28th March - though I think U will try to bring in bits and bits till the reason and the gap between them coming closure and closure till the situation faces the similarity with the past and present AND resulting into happy ending - thus solving the problem and them being matured with the experience -- in your last update. Confused...well I am...but enjoying...though I am not expecting my prediction.

Enjoyed reading it twice. My eyes will be on your update for sure.

Edited by chitsri65 - 11 years ago

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roserosey

@roserosey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

so lovely update shanthi...⭐️

as u said i was surprised to see yash reaction in this way...though he is unaware of what exactly happened last night as of now still something inside him making him feel good and happy too...i m really glad to know that yash atlast took a step and gave a chance to his heart ...

as a true friend aman did a lot with hiswords,...once again he indirectly made yash to realise what aarthi means to him(yash)...

best moment was the hug scene atlast two tortured souls found solace in each other s arms...after so long seperation...⭐️...

according to me this update will be the hero of the SS⭐️⭐️...fantastic shanthi⭐️...

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saf24

@saf24

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Awesome update. Aarti sits remembering past moments with Yash only for him to call out to her. She goes to him but tries not to make much sound due to her fear of waking him and making him upset. He requests something from her and she complies but even though she felt the difference she is still fearful of his reaction so she is even more careful with her interaction with him. When Yash wakes up though he feels different and speaking to Aman and hearing how much Aarti loves him makes him want to make the first move in trying to be normal with her. He requests a hug from her but she refuses stating that she might cry. That does not deter him though and he gives her the hug that makes her let go of all her bottled up emotions. Fantastic update. This was sooo beautiful. Can't wait to see what is in store next.

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RIYA

@RA17

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

ch1

really shanthi you make me numb with great write up and the beauty is yash and aarti pov it was never one sided.👏

the essence is well maintained even after wat i conceive from prologue... the understanding which always an highlight in your works is magically still there👍🏼

wow dear its amazing teh love n care for each other yet drifted apart😕

oh dear you really make me feel emotions so here is a treat a song perfect as you quoted in words i am in song ❤️

juda hoke bhi tu mujhmein kahi baaki hai

even after separation your remains are still there in me,

palkon mein banke aansu tu chali aati hai

you now come in the form of tears in my eyelids,

juda hoke bhi...

waise zinda hu ye zindagi bin tere main

although I'm still alive, O life, without you,

dard hi dard baaki raha hai seene mein

only pining pains are there in my heart,

saans lena bhar hi yaha jeena nahi hain

only to breathe doesn't imply as being alive,

ab toh aadat si hai mujhko aaise jeene mein

now I'm used to this kinda living,

juda hoke bhi tu mujhmein kahi baaki hai,

even after separation your remains are still there in me,

palkon mein banke aansu tu chali aati hai

you now come in the form of tears in my eyelids,

saath mere hain tu har pal shab ke andhere mein

you're there with me everytime in the darkness of night,

paas mere hain tu ujale savere savere mein

you're always with me in my days 'n' nights,

dil se dhadkan bhula dena aasan nahi hai

its not easy to forget heart-beats from heart,

ab toh aadat si hai mujhko aaise jeene mein

now I'm used to this kinda living,

juda hoke bhi tu mujhmein kahi baaki hai

even after separation your remains are still there in me,

palkon mein banke aansu tu chali aati hai

you now come in the form of tears in my eyelids,

ab toh aadat si hai mujhko aaise jeene mein

now I'm used to this kinda living,

(yeh jo yaadein hai

oh these memories ) - 2

(sabhi kaatein hai

are all pining thorns) - 2

(katado inhe

just cut all of them) - 2

ab toh aadat si hai mujhko

now I'm used to this kinda living,

juda hoke bhi...

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jitupatole5

@jitupatole5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

it was nice.per ab tak pata nahi chala ke wo dono alag hi kyo hue the?

i just hope ke yash ko kuch yaad na aaye kal raat ki baat,aur agar yaad aa bhi gaya toh woh aarti ko blame na kare.

plz update soon egarly waiting.

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kmfan_2

@kmfan_2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: jitupatole5
it was nice.per ab tak pata nahi chala ke wo dono alag hi kyo hue the?
Woh aapko flashback mein pata chlega...agar woh pehle se bata dein toh...yeh story ka essence and dramatic effect khatam ho jayega...please be patient and enjoy the updates as I venture into the past and present to show the journey of these two through the various facets of their lives...

i just hope ke yash ko kuch yaad na aaye kal raat ki baat,aur agar yaad aa bhi gaya toh woh aarti ko blame na kare.

Kabhi kabhi yaad achche ke liye bhi hota hai...who knows...aur sachche premi blame nahi karenge...

plz update soon egarly waiting.

Thank you so much for joining me in this story and leaving your comments...I love to understand the views of my readers...Thanks.

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Shanti I've just read three chapters, and I can confidently say that after "Silent Conversations" this will be my favorite FF. Or maybe I'll love it equally. Or maybe more 😳

First chapter was so good, the second one was more better than it and the third one left me speechless. What I won't be able to express in words, Saf has explained it so well in her comment.

I'm in love, love, love with this chapter. ❤️

Though Yash was in inebriated state, Aarti felt his real love for her. Which even Yash felt. He doesn't remember what happened last night, but he sure feels the change in him. Whatever doubts he had regarding his feelings, Aman's call cleared it instantly. Which made me a step towards Aarti, who was missing the love of her husband since last few months.

One right guy hug from her Yashji and she poured her pent up feelings in the form of tears in his arms . Best scene for me. ⭐️

Take your time to tell what the reason of their separation is, I'm in no hurry, as I'm loving and enjoy uni each and every word, every scenes so far 😳

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago

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