NEW SS: When you care, you stand to lose. NEW IMPORTANT NOTE.PG42. - Page 14

i am not an expressive writer and very bad at writing long comment. but i wll try my best.

scenes that i like the most:

1.Riya's introduction- car racing and Arjun's reaction

2. How Arjun looked at himself in the mirror and questioned his feelings for Riya - night gown

3. Dolphin poster

4. Arjun jumping from school back gate ( for an ACP)

5. Rathore plan to make Arjun history teacher.

6. Finally the last hot scene with Arjun and Riya.

What i dont like

1. The stupid Raj, 

Please give more updates.

You are so descriptive and good choice of words too.

very excited for the next update...

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awesome and amazing update..

loved it a lot...

So,Arjun is going to be the legal guardian of Riya...

waiting for the story to start...

Loved Riya's entry...

continue sooonish...

thanks for the pm...

p.s: sorry for a short comment.. next update mein for sure comment karungi...

feeling bad for riya lost her parent😭

love ariya's bonding👍🏼

very funny arjun marked riya as a terrible drawing skills🤣

wow ariya kiss was so cute☺️☺️

hope after this they wont apart

plz update soon

I especially loved Riya's entry...Omg! I mean the gurl has got guts! I like it..no I love it!!! 

And when Arjun finds out he is going to be a history teacher god!!!!!! His expression was worth watching Rofl!!! 🤣🤣 I mean I couldn't stop laughing for a long time after I read that...😛

And Rathore was right He should start learning those dates...warna SYS lecture sunne padege students ko and then it won't be a history class anymore 😆 But I would love to be in that class! I mean that would be my favorite class of all  And awww! He made Riya smile! I was like inside my head..."Awww...so cute" And then him being possessive about her was cute as well..I mean i DID not imagine him as a woman types guy But it's serisouly really cute!! 😃 aND WHEN Riya says to him that he shouldn't sleep in her parents room because Everyone who stays there dies...I cried! i MEAN that is sooo sad! I was speechless at that moment! 

And then Riya had the nightmare and Arjun was there to comfort her...That was a really cute scene! No kidding...It was the start of something new (HIgh school musical there 😉) 

And then him obsessing over how he can go near her..God!!!! He was being such a boy...Like what the fudge??😆 In my head I was like "U love her dammit!!!" 😆 But then it's too early in the story line...but I am eagerly waiting for "the" moment! 

😃 And then comes the dolphin scene! God! DAT was hilarious I burst out laughing! man no kidding 

🤣 God...Blonde moment there dude 😆 Gosh! And then comes the jealous scene! 

Ufff...Arjun Suryakant rawte and jealous is like eating ice-cream! 🤣 No kidding! 

😛 But it's cute! This is like the bazillionth time I am saying cute! gosh! 

😆 Poor Raaj he even got punched in the face for this...see When Arjun is jealous it affects other people too! 😉 

And the highlight of the update...The Kisss!!!! *Faints* It was sooo passionate! 

I mean it was so hot! I think I need a cold shower! ☺️

I wonder what is going to happen after the kiss!...it sure is going to be awkwards! 

But the pre cap sounds scaryyy! 

Oh god! Poor Raj again! 

Thanks for the pm!! and Fantabulous update! 👏

Continue soon my homie G dog 👍🏼

i thought there is so much age difference between ariya

but the way u describe ariya together...omg i just lost in them only no other thought is in my mind...just love to read it

riya indeed accept arjun as the one and only for her...and arjun i think he also want her badly

riya is so cute but i still think she is more mature than her age,,...but still so cute a little kid who scare if her leave her alone

but what is the dream relation to riya ...was she saw anything which come front of her eys as became dream

i hope so arjun will find out soon

but after that dream the encounter between ariya twice is so hot

but i feel so scare i think their relationship may change ...i  dont want it

lets see only next update can answer me

but i want to ask u muskan ...is this story is similar of ur previous one

i forgot the name of it but where riya is 17 and arjun fall for her but rathore forcefully make them apart...in that story also riys's parents were scientist 

do tell me about it

love it

so valentine gift

love the way how ariya got close to each other

love the kiss

it was hot 

great

update soon now

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Thank god you update this.

It was awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, block buster, rocking and mind blowing update dear.

Just loved it...

You rocked baby.

So arjun goes to riya school.

loved arjun thought about school and principal. Riya entry was mind blowing. Riya does rush driving.

Lovely...

Arjun was shocked seeing riya like this. And he didn't believed that the girl who was driving rush was riya and he took out riya photo in his pocket. The photo you choose of sana was awesome. She was looking very beautifully. She is looking gorgeous and just like is angel. Hayee..

loved ariya meet.

Samjun convo was hillarious.

Arjun is history teacher🤣

Me can't stop my laugh. I am imagining him and brust out in laugh. You know what I read that update in yesterday night and was laughing uncontrollable. And my brother sleep with me so he asks what happe di? Why you are laughing like mad person and I say to him nothing.

Seriously its awesome..

You portrayed ariya relations very beautiful.

Riya thought she portrayed herself strong but in reality she was fragile and innocent.

Riya's reaction when she found arjun is not there in home clearly shows how lonly she feels.

Arjun thought on riya was very well written.

So arjun suryakant rawte who stayed away from ladies in his life now he was falling for a school girl.

Interesting...

And arjun was very possissive for riya.

What was the nightmere riya was seeing? Is something happened with her in the past? Or is it something relating to her parents death?

Riya mentioned who ever stayed in particular that room left her... Does it connection to that case.

Omg ariya kissed...

Lovely.

Precap looks interesting.

Ohho mr. Rawte is jealous.

Do continue soon.

And thanks for the pm.