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Piyu

@100littledevils

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG THAT WAS HOT! But damn she thinks its arjun! 😭 Iam damn excited for next part! Can't wait for her reaction!

Ps - I loved ur writing style 👏

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

OMG

This is just out of my imagination

omg ye kya ho gaya...sandhir this way...god what will be the consequence after this night

poor sanyu what will she do then

and randhir what about him

he never love any women but now he consummate one unknown relationship which dont have any name

will he ever fall for sanyu...

but most imp what he will do when sun will rise...

kinjal...god u r just awesome dear...

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice...
I really like ur works...

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome start.. Love it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

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Rekha

@Rekha85

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

actually it was awesum... it made me really out of breath!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aliya Zainab

@-Alia-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

This was just wow! Loved it. It was sweet, spicy, sour and what not!
It was a mixture of everything. The way Sanyukta was seducing him, and the way she said about the children, wow. Loved it. Continue and pm me!

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bhumi1492

@bhumi1492

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Posted: 11 years ago

You are amazing writer
I can't wait for the next update
Please update soon

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bhumi1492

@bhumi1492

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Posted: 11 years ago

You are amazing writer
I can't wait for the next update
Please update soon

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Sanjana

@SweetSassy

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Posted: 11 years ago

another SS...I am literally dancing on seeing it...Again the concept is totally new...and off course amazinggg😃...I mean...first paragraph padh kar hi pta lag gaya ki this SS is going to be my 2nd best SS as 1st one is Legally wedded...
Sanyu ki yeh wild halat and Randhir ka concer with attitude😉...i mean... awesome ...the way she was saying each and everything to Randhir assuming him Arjun...I was literally enjoying...I loved her dialogue when she said... "Impotent ho😆?" That gave rise to the wild beast resting in Randhir...The way he showed that he is not impotent was WOW😳😳...hope the promise which he gave to her came true..may he fulfill his wish with his utmost sincerity😳...ab dekhna yeh hai...ki subah hoga kya...sab Sanyukta ko pta chalega ki actually hua kya tha😉...wat will she do😕...

tum mujhe kisi din sach mein maar dalogi...itne ache updates dene ki kya wajah hai😕😕...now i will again log to IF whenever I will get time...them mom will scold me😭...but tumhari stories padhne ke liye woh bhi sahi😳...loved the concept...loved the way of writing...loved each and everything🤗🤗please update sooonnn...

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Poulami

@Sunshine_Ami

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

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DAMN GOOD YAAR...😛 GIVE ME REMINDER WHEN YOU'LL UPDATE THE NEXT...

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