OS- Yesterday and Tomorrow-- Prisoner (Part 1, 2 and 3) - Page 5

Woah.

Wow!! Fantastically written. The emotions in both parallels are so far apart you wonder how they could ever merge. Can't wait to read more. 

wow Napster, these OS's are blowing my mind away. What I look forward to the most is finding out how they got from yesterday to this tomorrow. 

Reading your writing seemed so familiar so I clicked on your index link and realized you were the same author who brought me to actual tears (a rarity) with Apshagun + A Girl Named Khushi.  So pleased to see your take on PaRud now.  Cannot wait to see what further gems will be mined from your imagination!Edited by Payali09 - 10 years ago

I don't watch the show but thanks to all the friends i see here, i can't help but visit once in a while...

And each visit i wait to see if inspiration has struck yet

Oh how it has, N. Your writing is as exemplary as ever and though the names have changed as has the God and the irreverent pet name she calls him, the tug of genius in your concept is the same. If this show is beginning to release the best creativity its successor saw once (still does), i'm not sure i can hold out much longer

Wowww!!! I mean just wow. I am just at a loss of words,you atr one talented writer,dear!Third part brought tears in my eyes.

That is powerful writing Napster ... 

As much as I love the tomorrows, i feel terrified to read the yesterdays. Edited by golpokobita - 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: napstermonster

Its not supposed to be a period of three days. Its not meant to be literally taken. Yesterday means the past, tomorrow means the future. No actual time line. 

Originally posted by: Kishmish

I just came upon this one from you Napster ! 

BRILLIANT!!!!