OS #2: She is mine!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Amazing and superb one shot,

Written exceptionally well and a fantastic read,

I can't believe Sumer the pathetic man tried to force himself on Khushi, disgusting.

So happy Rudra came just in time and the beating Sumer received was throughly deserved.

Awww love the way Rudra confessed unintentionally to Paro that she belongs to him only, a sweet ending.

Loved the one shot,

Thanks for the PM,

Also I don't know why but I'm expecting a scene like this in the serial and I think it would be fantastic obviously not for Paro but to see Rudra's reaction.

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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guru-ki-dewaani

@guru-ki-dewaani

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hayeee all I can say is that it was ~DREAMY~ ❤️

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Nadia_DiyaM

@Nadia_DiyaM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

thnks mally 4 pm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😛

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bolt

@bolt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Nice short story.
😊

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Amazing and superb one shot,

Written exceptionally well and a fantastic read,

I can't believe Sumer the pathetic man tried to force himself on Khushi, disgusting.

So happy Rudra came just in time and the beating Sumer received was throughly deserved.

Awww love the way Rudra confessed unintentionally to Paro that she belongs to him only, a sweet ending.

Loved the one shot,

Thanks for the PM,

Also I don't know why but I'm expecting a scene like this in the serial and I think it would be fantastic obviously not for Paro but to see Rudra's reaction.

Thanks dear and yes Rudra's reaction would be a treat to watch.

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: SirenMitra
❤️ Loved it.

thanks dear

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Nuce ff. Like how rudra came to save her as always

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

loved the os glad he reached back in time to save her from summer but he should not have left her knowing his so called family awesome os thanks for the pm.

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the os glad he reached back in time to save her from summer but he should not have left her knowing his so called family awesome os thanks for the pm.

Your welcome dear!