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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
sorry dear
busy this days so not able to read and comment
read last 3 chapter in one go
its awesome as always
both are so much hurt
last part taarey convo was nice and cute
do cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
hi sorry for the late update- had exams and decided that I had to concentrate on them too and not dream of TR all the time😊 now thankfully over.

idk why my like button s not working/buddy req as well. thanks for the likes and views and all replies.
pl let me know if u like it/ not like it.
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recap- taani affected by rey s dance/  taani and rey talk in the car

part 15
Taani s place

Taani in her long dress at the kitchenette  doing something, rey came in from the room  stood near the small table behind her  as she  was humming and tapping her foot  ..she turned , saw him smiling and smiled back and  stopped .

"stop kyun kiya, continue"She shook her head," tumhe dance itni pasand hain tho seekhthi  kyun nahin?"

She laughed " yeh aap poochrahen ho?" he nodded," rey jab main aapse nahin seekhi, tho main kisi aur se seekh nahin paaoongi"he shook his head, she continued," aap ko yaad nahin hain hamara practices?" she laughed.

Of course he remembered, he loved those initial sessions - they had brought dance back to him...he smiled , offered his hand calling her for a dance. she shook her head consciously, he persisted making his cute faces at her, she shook her head  again, he took her hand in his and started doing a few steps , she moved with him following his steps consciously , tripped, placed her leg on his and stopped, disengaged herself and moved back , her expression- embarrassed.

"kya  hua?" he pulled her back closer,  she resisted,  holding her hand tighter he forcibly pulled her closer and twirled her around. Her face  had fallen at her clumsiness  but she couldn't resist following his steps, in tune with him, she let him guide her steps along ...she was still hesitant but continued to move towards and away from him , her feet following his and her hands entwined in his.as she moved closer to him and he stopped, one hand holdin hers and another on her waist, she looked at him, met his eyes and wished she could just stay like that. He understood the feelings that she tried to hide and held her hand tighter. She looked at her own hand in his and trying to disengage it, moved back away from him.

 " tumhaaari problem pata hain? yeh ki tum dil se dance nahin karthi, hamesha conscious rahogi tho kuch nahin seekh paaoge" still holding her hand though they were at a distance.

Her face fell, he immediately realised he was alittle loud , not much but then she was extra sensitive about him and dance," sorry"

"nahin... aap teek kehthe ho. Itne saal dance mann mein hi karthi thi , jab aap se seekhne ka mauka mila  tho faayda nahin utha payi.  So..." she shook herself," but its okay now. mujhe pata hain ki mujhe kya karna hain dance ke elawa" he raised his eyebrows,matlab main MBA  karne mein lagi hoon ... "

He frowned," Aisa kahaan likha hain ki everyone who dances should dance professionally.tum dance kisliye karna chchthi thi? Khudh ke liye na? "

"Haan par nahin ho paaya rey...kya karoon? " she got irritable," waise bhi  sab dance karenge tho aapka fan kaun banega?" the air in the room suddenly uncomfortable

 "Tumhaari yahin problem hain taani, tum saare ke saaare issues mix kardethi ho. tumhe mujhse problem hain, mujhse gussa hain  tho dance par kyun utharna hain? " his tone was harsher than before . she pulled her hand back leaving his in midair.

" main kisiki par bhi gussa nahin hoon"

"oh ya right, kal se dikh rahaan hain ki tum kisi par bhi gussa nahin ho..." he blurted out and stopped  she had folded her hands across her chest and was frowning , looking completely disturbed , all the calm ness in her face lost. He immediately stopped himself and closed his eyes  controlling his temper..." yaar ..main... "

"main aap pe sach mein gussa nahin hoon rey" she replied her voice back to its usual softness," main jaanthi hoon  ki..." he moved one step forwards and she stopped talking , moved back immediately His face fell," taani..." and stopped  wondering how to start the conversation ; both waiting  for the other person to begin , all the time a silent conversation going on between them.

"rey"  "taani"

"u first" "  nahin aap yahaan aaye the, tho aap pehle. Boliye...itne mahino baad yahaan kyun aaye?"

Rey moved to  stand in front of her," kya tum sach mein nahin jaanthi ? " she didnt answer, she looked down at her hand   ,he waited for a second," okay ...main jaantha hoon ki jo kuch maine kiya wo sahi nahin tha and im sorry for that...but main tumse door nahin rehsaktha...rehna chahtha bhi nahin...cant we just...get back ?" 

" nahin" her voice came out soft , like she knew what he was going to say and her answer was ready long before he could ask.

Edited by prtn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Thank god finally u updated. So, how was ur exam?
Ok , now for the update, it is an awesome one, very nice, after a long time good to see dem dance together. Finally Rey opens up, now lets see wht Taani has to say more.

Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
OMG Rey kinda proposed her????? 😲..

But yet again Taani rejected him aise hi???? 🥺

Ok yea i understand that Taani is very hurt with what Rey did to her but then even he loves her so very much...!!!!❤️

But am sure Rey will win his Taani back ☺️

And that dance part was so cute  😳

All in all a lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
wow awesome update
TR talk about dance is super
omg rey proposed taani😃
but she rejected😭
waiting to see how he win her back
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
finish reading rest of your chapters...  together...
finally both of them are talk and clear it... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Amazing update...
Taarey talk was nyc...
Rey proposed taani...
But she rejected him... 🥺
Update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awesome update
taarey convo was superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
awesome update
taarey talk talk abt their practice superb
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Great update :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)