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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: What_the
Dekha... Here I was thinking that I am doing a decent job with writing PaRud Fan Fiction.
Then I come across your post - which is so mind-blowing and awesome - I wonder what crap I have been doing...

You inspire me to think better, imagine better and write better.

It was a pleasure reading this story and I can't wait to read more!

Love
what_the

PS: Do PM me when you update any new threads.
Existing ones toh I will anyway stalk!

Lolz ! ditto my feelings 😆.

the difference is u actually write v nice, What_the, and mine pure amateurish nonsense .😃

Edited by shreya_rc - 10 years ago

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zanayaforever

@zanayaforever

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Lolz ! ditto my feelings😆.
the difference is u actually write v nice, What_the, and mine pure amateurish nonsense .😃

Oh stop it both of u..shreyu
N what the...
Each writer is unique..n precious for the readers..
in their own way..
Ab aur rona naahi.. 😡 ..wokay 😛Edited by zanayaforever - 10 years ago

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: zanayaforever

Oh stop it both of u..shreyu
N what the...
Each writer is unique..n precious for the readers..
in their own way..Ab aur rona naahi.. 😡 ..wokay 😛

hihi , ok, malika - I - zaniya !! 😆

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Maya

@What_the

Goldie

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: What_the
Dekha... Here I was thinking that I am doing a decent job with writing PaRud Fan Fiction.
Then I come across your post - which is so mind-blowing and awesome - I wonder what crap I have been doing...

You inspire me to think better, imagine better and write better.

It was a pleasure reading this story and I can't wait to read more!

Love
what_the

PS: Do PM me when you update any new threads.
Existing ones toh I will anyway stalk!

The above comment was after reading the first chapter.

This one is after reading all the chapters.

I absolutely love your writing style - and this particular story line.

It is gripping and well-paced - and I adore the bits of humour slipped in from time to time.

You portray their emotions very well - Paro's fear interspersed with bouts of confusion as to whether she should trust Rudra; Rudra's annoyance and temper, yet that instinctive softening when it comes to Paro (however reluctant he is to admit to it)!

I also find the new character Samar very interesting - can picturise some amazing bro-mance moments between him and Rudra - their sarcastic banter in the forest was a good start~

I am totally stalking this thread and would not refrain from pestering you for updates!

So please keep updating regularly!!!

Cheers

what_the

PS: Would be thrilled if you would take the time to read my OS (link in my signature) - looking forward to an expert's feedback!

Edited by What_the - 10 years ago

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niyoti

@niyoti

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: zanayaforever

Oh stop it both of u..shreyu
N what the...
Each writer is unique..n precious for the readers..
in their own way..
Ab aur rona naahi.. 😡 ..wokay 😛

Exactly!😃

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Read all 7 chapters and really loving it. I've got to commend you on your writing skills and really appreciate the effort you put into all the research to make this more realistic for us.

It's such a pleasure to read something so well thought of and excellently written.

Dee

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niyoti

@niyoti

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: What_the

The above comment was after reading the first chapter.

This one is after reading all the chapters.

I absolutely love your writing style - and this particular story line.
It is gripping and well-paced - and I adore the bits of humour slipped in from time to time.

You portray their emotions very well - Paro's fear interspersed with bouts of confusion as to whether she should trust Rudra; Rudra's annoyance and temper, yet that instinctive softening when it comes to Paro (however reluctant he is to admit to it)!
I also find the new character Samar very interesting - can picturise some amazing bro-mance moments between him and Rudra - their sarcastic banter in the forest was a good start~

I am totally stalking this thread and would not refrain from pestering you for updates!
So please keep updating regularly!!!

Cheers
what_the

PS: Would be thrilled if you would take the time to read my OS (link in my signature) - looking forward to an expert's feedback!

Hey!

Thank you so much for such kind words! Really. I mean it. You have no idea how i'm grinning like a fool right now.😃 It's always such a pleasure to read detailed opinions, especially from fellow writers. Sometimes people read between the lines and find little things you probably subconsciously slipped in.

Getting into the head space of characters takes a little time and then i wonder if i'm in fact. staying true to character. It's wonderful to know that you feel i'm doing a passable job with their emotions😳.

What is romance without humor. No?😳😛. I'm a big fan of bromance and have plans for those darlings, Samar and Rudra.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read😃

Love

Niti

PS: Off to read your OS and aww man I'm no expert😳

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Maya

@What_the

Goldie

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

hihi , ok, malika - I - zaniya !! 😆

Awww... thank you shreya and zanaya!!!

@Shreya, I loved Moonrise - the concept was lovely!

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Maya

@What_the

Goldie

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: niyoti

Hey!

Thank you so much for such kind words! Really. I mean it. You have no idea how i'm grinning like a fool right now.😃 It's always such a pleasure to read detailed opinions, especially from fellow writers. Sometimes people read between the lines and find little things you probably subconsciously slipped in.

Getting into the head space of characters takes a little time and then i wonder if i'm in fact. staying true to character. It's wonderful to know that you feel i'm doing a passable job with their emotions😳.

What is romance without humor. No?😳😛. I'm a big fan of bromance and have plans for those darlings, Samar and Rudra.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read😃

Love
Niti

PS: Off to read your OS and aww man I'm no expert😳

You're doing a bang-up job, not a passable one..!

@bold text I totally agree, sometimes I receive some perspectives from readers that I hadn't thought of while I was writing.. probably subconsciously slipped in, like you said.

It makes you wonder at how a few simple words can lead to such depth of meaning..

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DDC1

@DDC1

Senior Member

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Hi,

IDK how I missed this for so long, found it via Smolder so all good!

Loving the story so far Baisa , loving the Samar Rudra story, looking forward to their good natured ribbing, some bad a$$ interactions and would love to see them fighting over Paro.

You know how she hated Rudra thought he was a devil until Samar showed up & now she is inching towards Rudra? A known devil vs an unknown angel ? Great insight!

Waiting for more

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