Two shots:- 'TRUE BELIEVER' part 2 updated (page 3)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HIII...I
i m a silent member...this is my very first post in Sadda Haq forum...
not much of a scribbler...though tried bit of my luck in writing...😕
would love ur feedbacks...b bit lenient though...😊



TRUE BELIEVER

They graduated from FITE as mechanical engineers...

Both of them got placed in best MNCs...

Both have proved their capabilities to their folks...his mother and her father ...

They had walked different directions as soon as they placed their foot outside FITE...

Both were strong headed, arrogant and goal oriented beings...

There was always something between them... so complex... so labyrinthine...that it was out of their reach...

So difficult was their equation ... their brains couldn't solve it... So they left it unsolved... and walked ahead ...

She moved to california ... as her job demanded... living her dream... happy n content... earthy and simple

He moved to New York...living his dream... But mostly running after opulence and victory...his nature of always wanting to be the best hadn't seized yet... Success is still d only word for him...

8 years went away... lyk 8 months... running like iron in the fire ...

She had moved to North Carolina seeking a peaceful lyfe... seen a lot in these many years... tired of big cities...rush hours... deadlines...contingencies...

Earned a lot of money...fame...experience...now she knew she wanted sometime in peace to seek herself...

So she decided to live a simple lyf in a small town of north Carolina called CEDAR CREEK...as a Librarian...

It was a small town yet homed loving people... She at least have friends here... yet somewhere there was a void...she just cudnt put a finger on it... WHY she felt alone and so forlorn...!!!

N He was happy in NY City in his fastlane life...success , money , posh parties, big names, fame... Same as he had pictured himself years ago...he was happy n content...

Was he happy...???

Now this was the only question he asks himself when sitting ALONE in his big apartment at the end of the day... ALONE...yes he was lonely...he have everything...everything he dreamt of...yet something twinged him always... lyk a missing part of the puzzle...!

Both them knew they were missing someone...they knew who they were missing... But also knew it was too late...years have passed...tym have rolled...it was impossible to reach each other now...!!

Now ...was it too late... or their destiny is just taking sum tym to show them their passage ahead in life...!!



so guys how ws it...boring ryte..???😆

cnt help it said it was frst tym...😛

this is the frst part... will post second one only if u guys say so...!!!😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's nice..plz post the next part soon..
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superrr...update soon
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The starting is great. Is not at all boring but builds a nice gounsation for what's coming up next
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Nyc yr!
do continue soon 😊
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Omg it is so long by time as well as places also...

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Great start 👍🏼

Yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hain??
Update soon ... Waiting 😊
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nic update...👏
nxt tme pls pm me...😃
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Osmmm strt...plss update nxt part asap.. :)
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I want the next part now 😭
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