T2 Sameer Rathod FF: betrayal of love new thrd pg 152 - Page 109

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ch 25 a
Nice progress in case.
Ye dixit hotel ka
pehredar hai kya?
Arjun ne karara jawab
diya dixit ko airport pe.
sam-chotu part was also nice.

Ch 25b
Full on action update.
That old man was anurag.
Sam-chotu in danger.
Ye anurag pakka dixit ka admi hoga.
Pakda na jaye issi dar
se usne usse shoot kiya.
Arjun ki nazar ko
manna padega,anurag ke
shooes ko bhi nahi choda.
hope sam-chotu safe ho.
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Ch 26
What to say?
just amazing.
Full on action pack update.
Arjun ne kya dhoya hai dixit ko.
Arjun was worried for
sam but also he know
that he is able to take care of his.
Rathod ne kya entry mari hai,
dixit ko shock laga hoga.
Rathod-chotu part
was thriling one.
Sakshi ne sahi kaha
dono kabhi nahi badlenge.
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Ch 27
nice chapter
arjun pair ko ghur raha tha,
apne pair ko to choddo.
Shree,accha hua saksh
ne rok liya.
Rathod praise his team,
apne rawte ko bhi.
All r going back to mumbai.
Aisha phone todne wali thi,
sam ne bacha liya..phone ko.
Loved their beach movment.
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Ch 28
Etf found chromium bars.
Kuch bada hone wala hai.
Arjuns advice to sakshi was superb.
All r back to mum.
Dixit ko kya dhoya hai
arjun ko phir
bhi kuch nahi bataya.
Ayesha ki beti ka nam annu hai,
par vo kab ayegi?

Ch 29
Finally apne techie ne
chip decode kar di.
Chotu ko kiss accha
hua chotu hi tha.
They got the maps with marking.
Ek file password protected,bechara shree itni mehnat ki phir bhi dat padi.
Cmg to sushma kya brain hai,etf off me
apna admi bhi plant kar diya.
Kahi arjun ki chai
mehngi na pade.
Last sarkari bandook
sarkari kaleje ke liye,
ye karne kya wali hai
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Ch 30
It was long update.
Par pura credit to annu le gayi.
Loved the interogation.
Dixit sushmas past
was sad but it didnt
mean that they take
lives of innocent people in name
of so called revenge.
Cmg to annu-sam part.
Sam ka bachpan akelepan me gujra,so sad.
It was fantastic
ye to bilkul ayesha ki xerox nikli.
Del foot ka matlab? was too good.
Dost nice name.
Just loved their movements.
Annu pic is so cute.
uski aakhe bilkul ayesha ki tarah hai.
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Ch 31
nice update
com is helping etf in all way.
Samjun ranvir part was also good.
Is he trying to say khanna?
Feeling pity for ranbir,
apne hi papo ki saja
bhugat raha hai shayad.
Ye aisha ko kya hua?
Then finally annu-dost firse mil gaye.
Dekhte hai aisha kaise react karti hai.
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Ch 32
awsome update
loved mumma-beti movements.
Annu bohot ziddi hai but samazdar bhi.
Annu office jayegi.waiting for it.
Flashback was too good.
Sam bhi aisha se dar gaya.
Case proceding again cm to dead end by prakash death.
Manna padega sam ko itni tention me bhi
tatoo notice kiya.
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Ch 33
Beautiful update as always.
Case progress is nice.
Chaiwala hi natya hai.
Hope vo bhag na jaye.
Sakshi kabhi to serious ho jav.
Then the report by bombsquad.
Koi bhi bomb ko difuse karne javo to
dhamaka pakka.
Matlab sare bomb ek
sath difuse karne honge.
Last part again cliffhanger.
Waiting for captain spark.
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Posted: 9 years ago
If u r reading my cmts then pls pls pm me part 34 a
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello,

yep its an update after more than a month..i cant reply to each one of your comments due to time constraints but thank you so much for the lovely response..πŸ˜ƒ
I am glad you people still love reading the updates for this story..its always an encouragement to write further...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

so here is the next update..it will be the last chapter for this FF,😳

but since i cant complete it in one long update, i broke it into several parts..

here comes the first part in your inboxes very very soon...😊

finally wrapping up this FF which is my favourite story written here..thank you to all the readers who have read and encouraged me all through these story of mine..⭐️

Thank You so much for the love..keep them coming for the rest of the parts too...😊

One more thing..i am not good in writing action scenes or climaxes...so if it gets abrubt or boring..please forgive me..and do tell me the flaws in your feedback..it will help me in the next ventures..😳

Love

RimiπŸ˜ƒ