Rishabala OS : Crazy Series 1 : A Crazy Little Thing Called Love - Page 3

tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

this so fantastic...all the while they were married but carrying the facade of on/off fling huh..just to save themselves from getting raped lol...

would definitely love to have a prequel...not that i couldnt get this part but when you have offered to write something up than why deny such a wonderful opportunity to something very enticing refreshing

loved it.

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Superb OS 👏

Loved It 😳

Please do continue

Edited by .Shree. - 10 years ago

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

wow👏 lazy dear it was a super os👏 so super 👏just loved it😊
trishna is so nice 😊and that ria is worst than dips,right?😡like in the real show
the time u said rk is on her bed and he asked"u were planning to lock me out"i understood he is her hubby was just looking when u will say it...and i loved the way he said it😊
it was a fantastic idea👏...i like it...marrying someone but continues like single in front of everyone especially in college...it gives full freedom...and here even if madhu goes very intimate with rk no problems,right?bcoz he is her hubby😆
and their bedroom talk😆😳...i loved it...rk begging madhu to do it😳.😆 and rk 😉
madhu want to lead but rk wanted to be on top first 😆
and they risked this time😲...way for little kundra😆
wonderful work dear👏...i was on depression when u said u will not be able to post any other story😭 but thank u so much dear😊 thank uuu😊

it wasn't confusing but will love to read prequel😊
Edited by meiejrishbala - 10 years ago

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shehriz

@shehriz

Groupbie

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awesom
so rishbala are married.
Honestly ur stories are full of surprises

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Aaradhya Malhotra

@Aaru4DVD

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

OMG... this became a common word for me reading ur stories lazy..

this idea is really fantastic..

mindblowing..

and aweeeshummm...

loved loved loved rishabala and their on and off relation moods...

i just loved madhubala malik who is popular in the college and rk.. the hottest in the college..

loved their characters...

and the car scene .. i felt bad fr madhu...

the whole os is really intresting and sweet..

and the last love making scene.. though it is not detailed.. and described deeply.. that's the best..

loved it... completely...

first time i'm feeeling that it becoming difficult for me to put my feelings in words..

hey... no prequel.. let this be like this only..

an antique piece...

hehehehehehehehehehe...

welll,. i'm expecting another os from u which is soo like this.. in college..

and never fail to send pm to me.. its a pleasure to read ur great works...

and at the ending.. wat?? they r married???

wooow...

ur really a great writer... oooh...

maar daaala..

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tiara255

@tiara255

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome this is so sooo soo really awesome...

Oh god they r married tht was so gud

Yeah a prequal wud b so gud becz i wud love to knoe y they r hiding there marriage!! And hw didi they get married at the first place

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Shriya kadge

@shriyakadge

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awesome os!!

A prequel would be great coz just like the others I 2 want 2 know why they r hiding their marriage n we would also come 2 know how they fell in love 😳

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Julie

@4ever4love

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

OK, I admit it, I am a little confused! Please write the prequel!

The story was interesting but I am confused by RK and Madhu's relationship. I am not clear as to why they are hiding their relationship. Are they married? Is Madhu really rich? Because besides the bus thing, Madhu helps out at home which I found a little strange as there would be servants right?

I need a prequel pls. 😕

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Uma

@uma88

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

This is a surprise, and it was really nice lazy.

While reading the story was little confused, but got cleared, but still want a prequel, we will never say no to your works dear.

At first reading the story, i thought, RK and Madhu had really broke up with each other, but while continuing the story, i got to know that they were hiding their relationship to others, so as to enjoy the college life as single.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago

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priyachand

@priyachand

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

oye lazy! wht an intriguing story! with a twist like the one u gave in the end this story definitely needs a prequel!! then only it wil lbe complete. no t just prequel a sequel too!! i wnt to see ria's n deepali's face whn d real truth is revealed!

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