FF: Yes Boss #3 - Link to #4 on pg 1 - Page 76

it was really good,hoping it wud led to actual SR!! excited!!

and u had to stop right there ... 😲 😆

Hey Green lovely update. What I like the most was that it predictable yet unpredictable. Unpredictable coz of Mr. AAK. I knew he won't do anything 😉 yet he was driven by his emotions for his lovely Zoya. I actually liked it. So curious to know what happens next. I failed to comment on the previous update but it was amazing as usual. Loved the dialogue my house, my wife and the way he was annoyed that Zoya planned to catch up with Navi on his wedding night. I love it when you come with new ideas and make us always smile with your updates.

That was a lovely update ... Asad n his emotions...😊... Update soon ...😊

 hai green...








Edited by kals82 - 10 years ago

Damn how cud u stop it here!!! Really??! I hate you already!!! LOL!😆

you r not losing readers...i am eagerly waiting for the next update!!
suhagrat pending...
continue soon

lovely update😃
but how can you end it here😲😡😆😆
waiting 4 d nxt part..continue soon😉😃😆

Awesome update greenu!
Dilshad caught asad bu asad manged to get off dilshad
zoya then kept her hand on her waist wqs cute one
Why u ended at that point
asad irritated by navi, anu narges n najma haha
zoya pretended to be sleep n asad touched her cheek
hmm asad put his hand on her waist n zoya eyes widened haha
loved this update
update soon