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It was very nice update

Wow..the updates were amazing! But whom did NK talk to at the end? Why did he say 'Step one - Completed?' ArHi's conversation went out smooth which made me happy. :) I hope everything will be fine. TC and thanks for the PM.

Amazing very nicely written
u did justice with your chapter
continue soon pleaseEdited by mubina_m19 - 10 years ago

interesting story.  looking forward to the rest

simply fabulous
loved it

good that they talked and he apologized...

simply fabulous
loved it;

awesome update...

awesome update. loved it

wonderful parts