Thank you my darling Zehra...love you!
What a birthday treat Zee...sexy, sensuous, steamy, sizzling and so surprising...
I love your versatility and your ability to write any genre. I love it!
The way your described their love making was HOT! They seemed like a perfect couple who enjoy and desire each other with an intensity and passion that makes for perfect chemistry ...her wanting to let go and give into her desire for him with freedom makes it intriguing to know her past and the circumstances that lead her to think this way...
Her husband with no clue about how she thinks and it seems his love is true and trusting..and he loves her more than he can express ...waiting to find out how her reason and need to take revenge is connected to her past...something that he does not even know he is being avenged for ...at least as of now...she seems to have turned and changed herself in to something she is naturally not to carry out this plan,
Her feelings of dilemma, fighting her loss of control over her desire and attraction to him, something that she is fighting internally...was written so brilliantly and powerfully ...I could feel her anguish and feel her guilt...
Your words and writing truly brought this to life...visually and catching every emotion ...
I loved how she quietly slips out not bothering to cover herself and walks in to the bathroom and her hurry to get rid of him from every part of her body...wow!
Her guru? Who is that ? ...A family member who has been wronged unknowingly by him? I wonder Hiw she married him just to take revenge ...the planning and plotting her marriage to him ...is there someone else who was the mastermind ...her guru?
And even if his wife could speak ...is this an act or can she really not...or could she not speak at that moment lost in desire and passion.
Her upbringing very different ...did she grow up in some ashram or religious place?
I cannot wait to read the next chapter...and once again thanks for this gift...
🤗
Edited by vandana.sagar - 10 years ago
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